Ren'Py - Abandoned - Mystery Of Magic [v0.1.8p] [Forest Fairy]

Downloaded this game because of the cover. Disappointment came fast within the first couple minutes of playing this game. A walkthrough is needed or else you'll be clicking endlessly just to trigger an event then repeat the process.

Good Points
+Sometimes, im telling you: sometimes we have good looking sex animations.
+Some of girls looks good.
+We have decent render quality.

Bad Points
-After some point of game everyting changes to ''Trainer'' style so you need grind literaly everyting. Gold, girls points, indegrients etc... And as you can estimate, its boring...
-I was okey with grind feast... I mean yeah it was boring but we were head of hogwartz and getting ourselves harem! But then quests start became NTR related... I'm not going to tell ''NTR IS BAD!'' or someting like that because its about your taste but bad part is after making that much grind for creating harem sharing them with random boys. Thats bad part and its not enjoyable at all... If you want make NTR game you shouldnt make harem game with obtaining girls one by one like trainer. So there is problem here im going to tell you in next bad point...
-This, game, dont, have, any, stable, purpose... Everyting is made by big chaos! DEV wants make VN game and makes VN game, he wants try new animations he try new creepy and bad animations, he wants change game for trainer game and add lots of grind and he starts make them, he wants add good looking animations he make that, he wants make game NTR without any good background or story and he make that! So whenever he wish someting he is doing and this makes this game so poor. There is literaly no stable content in this game; ''Everyting is everwhere''
-Some sex animations are realy creepy...

For The End
Until the point of game start being ''Grind feast'' or until NTR content started... This game have potencial but its wasted, sadly...

Great work of animation, even if a bit reptitve sometimes and the gameplay switch at the end of tutorial can be a bit disturbing it still is a good game ! Hope the story with Daphne will devellop, may be Cho Chang too ^^

Pro:
-Renders quite good
-Pregnancy -Virgin tag is a clickbait.Please remove it.

Cons:
-The story is non existent
-All characters are bland and dont have any personality.Their role either get fucked by Slytherin boys or Snape.
-There is no build up,only the girls throw themselves at Snape without any care.They all horny and claiming already fucked with boys in the dormitory.
-Sex scene is bad

If you are in for story.there is none.If you want to play for fap..go

This is a really fun game, I love the character models and the h scenes too. There are a lot of different animations and while there are spelling typos and minor issues, this is one of my favourite games here. Also the developer release new updates quite often so they are doing a fantastic job

Presentation: Awful. That was the first thing I noticed after a playtime of 5 minutes. Story? I still don't know wether there is one or not. Render/ visual quality? Meh. Not entirely bad, but still miles away from good. Animations? Okay. The rollback button does not work at all, even though it has been activated in the menue. And the map... does it work at all? I somehow managed to get into a bathhouse, but I still haven't figured out how exactly I did this...

A trainer game set inn the Harry Potter universe, with 3dcg and animations!?
I am a big fan of witch trainer soo i was soo on board for this.
But after one hour i glassy eyed quit the game with out saving and went on a video streming side ending in hub.
Here is my rundown
Pros

1. The characters look a lot like the characters in Harry Potter.
2. There is a large character pool, all the A listers are here.
3. A lot of animations and content given the version.

Cons:

1. There is no build up or suspense. You met Hermione she goes " Ooh your the MC, im special, time to bang." and its like that for every char.
2. The animations are not great. Thay are a bit short, like your character is a quick shot, and are in dire need of some diry talk.
3. The story needs a lot of work. The characters are paper thin. Its a spider thread connecting you to the next animation. Spider silk may be strong but you need more than 1 thread to capture your audience.
4. The body models look a lot alike. Strip of the cloths put a bag on Hermione's head and dye the pubs blond and u got Luna.

Maby it gets a lot better later inn the game, but if it cant me get off or on board after 1 hour and it contains Hermione it still needs some work.
I was on platform 9¾ waiting for the Hogwarts Express with wand ready inn hand.
Unfortunatly what showed up on the platform was a dark sketchy van with Hogwarths Express painted on the side, 2 stars.

[Rev @ v0.1.3]

All of the weight, consequence, and pacing of a '90s TGP.

Art's nice. None of the models look like the characters they're supposed to be, but I find that a plus rather than a detriment.

Writing is awful. Scenario's been done to death, fluency is strained, narrative is unintelligible, characterization is somehow both nonexistant and wrong. Dialog is worse than old 10pm softcores from cable.

Porn is mixed. Animations are good but as a patron of both seduction and corruption the utter lack of story pacing and believability is offensive.

TLDR: Good luck.

It's a really good game. In terms of content the quality is quite high, and it already has so many different animations in it. The best parts of this game are the animations, and the character models. Ginny and Susan bones are both my Favorites, must see more of them
As for the negative parts of the game, there is a bit of bad spelling in the dialogue. As well as this, it's quite short for now in terms of content, and the story is quite rushed. As well as that, I think there could be a better soundtrack, as it doesn't flow very well with the rest of the game.
But overall, the negatives didn't ruin my experience of playing this at all, and I can overlook them. I think when this is more developed most of those issues will be fixed. It's a really good universe to make a game in, and so far the game is looking very promising!

I'm loving this game so far.. nice animations.. good looking characters. I hope there will be option/choices when viewing the animations like POV,etc. Especially the dance animations of ms.bones, i love those. And also the font color of choices of the Map. I'm a bit color blind and took me several minutes to distinguish it. I hope these will be improved in the upcoming updates. Overall, excellent game. Good job dev!

Good start to this game. The characters are well done, as are the animations to date. Navigating the "dark room" while creating the map was a challenge that could have been better if there were some visual scenes in the various rooms. Looking forward to seeing how story line develops.

Positives;
-Very similar to Witch Trainer which is one of the best trainers of all time.
-Models are pretty decent even if there isn't much variety other than hair colour
-Snape is a great choice for MC - it's hard to compete with Genie from WT, but Snape is an excellent substitute. Much prefer than the weird original character they wrote for Innocent Witches

Negatives;
-Corruption is way too fast and pretty unsatisfying.
-The core characters (especially Snape and Hermione) have no character or, at least, lack the trademark character traits which make them great. It'd be great to see Snape more snarky/witty (usually having something to talk to, like the sorting hat or similar would help with this) and to see Hermione being a bit more of a teacher's pet know-it-all. Ideally, she shouldn't instantly want to just start showing off - it doesn't match her character at all.
-Too many characters to start with; currently lots of shallow characters with a few scenes each as opposed to maybe a couple of characters with a fair few scenes each

A decent start and I look forward to seeing how it advances - but there's a bit of a lack of polish as it stands now.