VN - Ren'Py - Myth of Slayer [Ch.4] [Oldcat]

The premise of the game is somewhat interesting but very poorly executed. The story is a mess and really isn't all that interesting.
The models are okay, but seems very outdated.
The spelling is with very few errors but the grammar is all over the place often you are left sitting with a feeling of what the hell did the dev even try to say there.
But the worst part by far is the writing. If you can ignore bad English in a VN then you might think this game is okay. But the writing in general is childish, weird and does not improve at all through out the game. I just don't think this VN can become any good with what I have read this far.

No way this is a 4 ½ star game. its a 2 star at best.

Can't believe I actually give this one a 5 stars. Well the best thing about it is the graphic, the models are great, the background are greats, heck even the male models, even the supporting characters, look better than the MC of other games. The story is alright. Still there are plenty of for improvement: It's not horny enough, create more horny sistuation and not just "please help me with my dicks". Overall 8.5/10, with 6/8.5 for the graphic

The setting is good, it's setting seems similar to that of Superhuman, with monsters and ranking systems based on the monsters, and I know that's not the first of the genre but since this is also an adult game I'm going to compare it directly to that.

The models of the girls are great! Beautiful women, the author did a good job designing them/choosing them.

That being said, it's not five stars because the dialogue is definitely robotic.. "I should do that." "I agree with what you said." these are nothing statements that don't do anything and they CONSTANTLY come up in dialogue. We don't need characters saying these things to convey the point, I think the "I agree with what you said." line comes up at least twice, maybe more, I can't quite remember every instance but since I remember the EXACT line, it means it's said too much.

That's really my only flaw, the dialogue definitely needs to be more natural, this game could swing to 5 stars with that fixed, but it could also swing to 3 stars if this game continues to have written flaws, it's a VN, reading dialogue is 99% of the game.

There are a lot of things to like about this, such as the interesting setting and the character models.
However, the dialogue brings all of this down badly. Conversations are robotic, weirdly hostile and overall seem like a halfway done translation. Instead of getting a feel for the characters through how they talk and what they say, we have to rely on what we're told about them since the dialogue makes it seem like everyone is R2-D2 with bipolar disorder. Nothing feels natural as none of the characters have any chemistry.
Hopefully this gets sorted out soon because there is a good game here.

A lot of promise in this little adventure.

I like that the cast is mostly limited, isn't like throwing every single archtype of female possible at you. Just a small humble group of love interests that are decent in their own right.

I like the fantasy aspect of the story, its very creative and gives a lot of good atmosphere, dark themes, and doesn't sugar coat much which is nice. Writing has some rough patches here and there but nothing I couldn't ignore. Hoping MC becomes pretty stupidly OP personally.

H-Scenes are limited, but relatively decent, HS2 game, so HS2 quality of course (im a fan of HS2 personally)

All in all it has a lot of promise and future to it, excited to see where it goes as of current update. Definitely excited for the next release as it left off leaving me wanting more.

This game is freaking amazing. To be honest I wasnt expecting much, because there were so many similar looking games already and im already bored with all kinds of fantasy stuff here, but Myth of Slayer... is pretty good, not gonna lie.
I have high hopes for this game. The girls are introduced well and they are all very likeable so far. I like ALL of them and thats pretty damn rare for me. Normally I only like 1/3 of the love interests. But for MoS its not the case. So hats up man.

Music is there. Renders are looking really good as well. The story is easily understandable. And most of all.. the girls are all GORGEOS af...
Im def. supporting this game. This will become big, if the Dev continues this way.

I wish you all the love, luck you need to make this game. Its VERY good. I love it!!!!

Edit: Ooh. This game is from Lyk4n. I thought it looked familiar, but because the changed his Dev name, I didnt notice at first.
I really liked his first game until it became a mess in the later part. I hope he will take his time to properly set this one up and focus more on the characters. The characters are more important than a complicated story, thats for sure!

This story has a lot of potential and from what I've seen so far I'm liking the story and it's good and the characters are beautiful I just hope the protagonist awakens his power since I don't trust characters that give power to a protagonist but have their own thoughts and can control the protagonist's body. My only criticism is in relation to the clothes that the characters wear when they enter the portals which are fantasy and medieval clothes and this looks very strange for a game that takes place in the current world, seeing them with those clothes I have the impression that they don't offer any protection to whoever wears them, it seems like they only wear them for style and not for practicality, anyway despite the visual strangeness this doesn't hinder the game's story at all.

Know its early to say that this will be a fantastic game with little errors but overall its breath of fresh air in a plot that has been used many times especially in the anime.
First unlike the mc of mrd, the mc is here feels like a real person and not just like a silent robot who is a shut in.

Second the being inside of you, A trope heavily use in any fantasy media especially in the anime is a breath of fresh air cause even though is a demon lord with immense power he just want peace and just to chill unlike most alter egos who wants to take over the host body. The demon lord and the mc feels like the mc from parasyte which I think is the closet comparison to them.

Third is the girls and the animation which is I think really has improvement from mdr, Although maybe this is an error or a bug maybe But there are times the angle does not Compliment models that much but when it Move on to the next scene they look great Again hopefully it will be polished in the future.

Lastly the story although has been used many many times is still good and has its own twist so it feels like a real original concept.

This is my first time doing a review looking forward to this game progress
Sorry for my english if is bad not my first language

Story 4/5: pretty good
Writing 3/5: few minor errors, but mostly well-spelled and clear writing, but conversations often flow in an unnatural manner.
Renders 3/5: mostly nice looking
MC 2/5: I think the creator overcorrected after the previous mc, making this one the opposite. which also made annoying, boring and very basic. he isn't serious when he should be, whines a lot, doesn't interact like a normal person and has a terrible K-pop haircut.
Girls 3/5: some really good, while others are atrociously bad.
Choices 3/5: to many of the choices are: bad or worse. especially in regards to interactions with Yuka

I was quite disappointed when I noticed this game were made by Lyk4n. this far I only see few promising aspects.

the final score is based on my overall enjoyment, not the average of the scores above.

It's promising, the plot and world building reminds me a lot of Solo Leveling, while the render looks quite similar to a really great game that I like in this site but a bit rougher. I liked Dev's previous work as well (the ending feels rushed tho), so I feel like I can expect a lot from this one.

If there is something lacking, I think the dev need to learn to build up the relationship a bit more first before jumping to a sex scene, it was also one of the things I noticed from his previous work.

Great game, the content is excellent, the render and animation is really smooth, keep up the good work, I am expecting the next update will be realeased soon, hope it will be long enough to satisfy the player, also can you please add gallery replay on the next update?