VN - Ren'Py - Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee [Act 2 P1] [Saf-Tea]

Take a look at the LI and if she floats your boat, then this is a pretty good download. The dialogue is great, the story is somewhat believable, and the animations are good. The LI was not attractive for me, so I really didn't stick with it.

Really glad this game includes fart and scat content. Looking forward to another scenes like that in the new updates, though i understand it's not everyone's cup of tea. Either way, you do you, my guy, keep up the amazing work!

TBH, at this point (Act 2, Pt1), my only fear is that the dev loses interest in the development and leaves this project before completion... because it is fucking great!
There are *very few* games here (good or otherwise) with the same setup/plot and a "completed" tag.
The official Overview on the top of this thread is a good description of what we have here. What it is not obvious is that the execution is really top notch, and well worth the download.
Again: my only fear is to invest time and "hope" on this VN just to see it abandoned. Hopefully this will not be the case. Fingers crossed!

Played Act 2 Part 1 – Kinetic novel about a teacher getting fed up with one of his problem students and giving her an attitude adjustment by imprisoning her in his sex dungeon and using a mix of sexual torture, magic drugs and psychology to turn her into a submissive slut.

Well written, dialogue is good, characters hot and the story is simple but interesting enough.
I especially like how Naomi actually resists before she succumbs and how she gets some of her fire back before the next session – it makes her giving in all the sweeter because of the struggle.
I also like how it is more reluctance rather than hard noncon – Naomi hates it, but she does enjoy the pleasure and is not completely miserable from trauma.

Has really hot and inventive bdsm content with a promise of more. So far we have humiliation, bondage, device bondage, light pet play, blowjob training, a really hot predicament scene and really well done slave training.
Also has some (harmless) scat and urination content that can be turned off.

Gonna watch it with great interest. It’s pretty promising and one of the better bdsm games we got lately.

Honestly didn't expect much but due to the ratings, I've tried it. And wow it slaps (in the good way) ! The story is intriguing and the slow buildup is well done.
It will take surely a year to see the game completed but every update should be interesting to see !

Corruption stories like this are my favorite; I was completely engrossed in the game from the moment I started it until I finished act 2. I love Naomi's character design, and her personality is perfection for a story like this. The scenes are so enticing and unlike anything I've seen in other VNs.

My only suggestion would be to add a textbox opacity slider, as I had a little trouble reading at some points.

Your work is truly incredible, and I can't wait for the release of the next act!

Played till: ACT 2 Part 1

- The story and scenes are unique and quite different from other VNs
- Ambience and the music are on point, really great work, gives it a very grim but elevated and thrilling atmosphere.
- For the story alone you deserve 5 stars, i really enjoy playing games which focuses on exploiting human behavior and psychology
- the extreme fetishes and scenes used are very interesting and hot.

Personally i really enjoyed the quiz sections of the game, the protagonist hints about the manipulation techniques he uses on naomi, it works really well.
some minor drawbacks, the lighting could use a little tweak, and the english text contain some errors. But its nothing significant , it doesnt break the immersion or experience.

Really awesome work dev, Please don't abandon this project. its really rare to find games such as yours.

Really really good dialogue and the scenes are fantastic. One of the best games I've played on the site and having the option to turn off the more controversial content is greatly appreciated. Extremely excited to see where it goes from here.

Version Played: Act 2 P1

I really liked this game, and feel it deserves 5 stars even though I was a little lukewarm on it when I finished this version.

The writing (world building, story and writing) are all very well done. The story progression moves along at a very good pace - not too fast or slow.

Given all that, I was little surprised that I didn't have a more positive vibe from this game when I finished. I think it comes down to a couple very subjective things:
* I don't find Naomi all that attractive. For me, her face is too stylized, and her chest doesn't look right - I guess too large and perky makes them seem very unnatural? She's certainly not bad looking, but I find her the least attractive of the girls in this game (my favorite is Candie).
* This is a minor nit, but I almost skipped this game because of the scat tag. I really like that we can turn that content off at the beginning, but I could do without being reminded that that content is about to be skipped. Maybe change that notification text to something more general, like "Some Extreme Content" is turned off? Again, that's pretty minor and very subjective on my part.

Insanely good writing for corruption. If you're at all into corruption, humiliation, or mind-break then this will likely be something you thoroughly enjoy. There is some watersports and scat content which I can't comment on because I don't enjoy those subjects, and so I skipped them, but I think that's a feather in the games hat as they're entirely optional. Try it out, I think you'll like it quite a bit.

My true score would be 4.75 / 5, but I see the potential for it to be a true 5.
I think the premise is there, and the way how some science are used to explain why certain psychological changes are happening is really interesting.
If you did take a step back, you would still notice that everything is accelerated. But, we are playing a porn game, and as a porn game pacing, it's great.
The game is still quite new and I can't wait for the next update

A genuinely compelling story of brat training. Naomi is great as a main character and focus, with valley-girl speech and constant defiance, and her trainer is thoughtful, educated, and cruel - all delightful ingredients to a tale that is still in progress. Though this isn't terribly long at time of post, what is there is extremely high-quality and deserves a look.

It's sadistic, psychotic, disturbing, satisfying, beautiful and downright sexy. All the the more disturbing tags like scat and urination are optional so any fan of maledom or training should try this game. MC is intelligent, driven, attractive and worthy of respect while Naomi is the perfect brat to "teach".

Incredible start. Doesn’t waste too much time setting up the story and gets right to the action. Dialogue is well done and enjoyable to read. Scenes are very creative. Animations are great. Just all around fantastic, can’t wait to see more.

People should make more games like this in the future, would pay money for a game like this, especially if it was voiced in english. Great story and great scenes. The only game I will probably ever rate on this website because this is how much I like this game and it deserves 5 stars.

Wish more western adult games were like this one.

This is everything You need from a corruption game. Breaking down a bratty bitch is one of the best joys in the world, plus she's an airheaded bimbo so that's a massive bonus. So amazing story, with amazing animations, models, and renders with plenty of dialogue and not too slowburn to make it boring or only foreplay. What's not to love here?

Outstanding!!! Can't wait for the next update. Sure, hope you include more of his hot ass assistant. Thanks again for making piss and scat avoidable can't stand both. Just my preference to each his own. Keep up the good work.

The corruption is actually very good. All the more obscene content are optional, and they will notify you when a scene of those content are kill. The best part is that the dev actually read into science (or pseudo science) to write this AVN.

Review of Act2 P1 -

Decent mini-VN as of now. It has a lot of potential and it doesn't shy away from everything the corruption tag entails.

The story is alright, it won't blow your mind but it's good setdressing for the main meat of the game - the corruption. I like how smooth the transition of the protagonist going from upstanding citizen to something darker was. I think any other VN would probably trip over itself to get the scenario to where it is.

The visuals are fantastic. Not only the models, but I personally found the environments look decent as well, considering most games usually don't put that much work into the surroundings and only the models. The sound design is decent, I hope there's a bit more variance in the bgm playing during scenes, but it's fine as is currently. The only small gripe I have with the UI is that I wish it had a textbox that you could adjust transparency for. It's great that I can see the whole scene, but sometimes it can be hard to see the white text on some of the lighter backgrounds (clothes, the ground, the walls, tables, the sky, etc).

There's a good amount of sexual content for the playtime so far (like 40 minutes to an hour?). The models really convey the hesitance and slow, corroding nature against Naomi's psyche - and I find that way better than throwing in a bunch of non-consequential sex scenes that lead no where. There's not a bunch of "penetrative" content if you're looking for rabid sex between two people, but I don't think that's the point of the game anyways, and I find it impressive how creative the scenes get.

There's not much content right now, but I think this has a lot of potential if the dev consistently updates. I will say that it might not be for everyone. For one, if you're not a fan of the main girl, Naomi, and her model isn't doing anything for you, then I wouldn't be surprised if people dropped the game - since she's primarily what the game is about. Secondly, it's great that the game has filters for some of the more extreme content (scat, urination, cum vomit), but I wonder if those fetishes/tags will be more predominant in the future. If people turn it on the future, it may subtract a good amount of content and affect how much they think each update really hold (or if the dev might not put as much effort into them if they're going to be filtered anyways), is my only concern.

Well, what can i say, simply wonderful!!
This game is on another level in terms of composition and storytelling(respect of the type of game) The animations are good, even on a laptop like mine, without any issues, which suggests that the game was designed to run also on older machines. The game's real strength lies in the way Naomi's upbringing unfolds, which is truly realistic. Congratulations, and we'll see what the future holds.