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Definitely more anal stuff planned. Not sure I'll have a dedicated fisting scene (although I like the idea) but there will be a couple of insertion stuff coming up soon.
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Nice, appreciate you giving it a try! Little teaser in the spoiler.
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I am glad I was right, when I suspected that "spoiler" after the recent update. I am sure I will not be disappointed. Thanks again for the good work
.Great job dev! Finding good maledom content is the main reason I browse F95, always exciting to find a game that ticks the right boxes and I can't wait to see more of this one. The scene with the spring and the dildo was absolutely fantastic.
My only concern is the 2 week winter break deadline, I feel like more time is needed to make the training believable and making Naomi get too obedient too quickly might spoil the enjoyment a little bit. Day 2 was great but I feel like the pavlovian chair training should've lasted longer than just day 1. This seems like the type of game where the journey is gonna be more fun than the destination so I'm hoping we get plenty of time to savor it.
Also a little suggestion, many renpy games have a textbox opacity option, I imagine it is built into the engine and hopefully not too difficult to add. Some text in the current version is hard to read (the introduction by the unnamed woman at the start a good example), a text box would help and players who don't like it can always just set the opacity to 0.
My only concern is the 2 week winter break deadline, I feel like more time is needed to make the training believable and making Naomi get too obedient too quickly might spoil the enjoyment a little bit. Day 2 was great but I feel like the pavlovian chair training should've lasted longer than just day 1. This seems like the type of game where the journey is gonna be more fun than the destination so I'm hoping we get plenty of time to savor it.
Also a little suggestion, many renpy games have a textbox opacity option, I imagine it is built into the engine and hopefully not too difficult to add. Some text in the current version is hard to read (the introduction by the unnamed woman at the start a good example), a text box would help and players who don't like it can always just set the opacity to 0.
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I appreciate the feedback! I hear what you are saying, originally I was thinking summer break but then that felt too long. Hopefully I'll still nail the pacing where it's satisfying
I've gotten that feedback about text box opacity slider so it will be implemented in the next update! In case you are interested, I post bi-weekly updates on my itch page (I mentioned this on the latest post).
Hey man if it was up to me you'd set the premise that the story starts during covid lockdown and MC has all the time in the world to put bitches in their place. But I also understand that when making a new game there's some pressure to put at least one or 2 good scenes early to pull people's attention.
Ultimately it was just a minor nitpick for now, and someone is gonna complain no matter what you do anyway so I guess there's not really much of a choice besides just doing what feels right to you.
Ultimately it was just a minor nitpick for now, and someone is gonna complain no matter what you do anyway so I guess there's not really much of a choice besides just doing what feels right to you.
Hey man I know you are probably super busy dealing with both game development and real life. But if you can squeeze an hour or two I highly recommend trying out this game. It's an amazing game by itself but voice acting really makes it super immersive and conveyed emotions of character that much better than simply reading.
https://f95zone.to/threads/third-crisis-neon-nights-v0-2-3-pr-anduo-games.233663/
https://f95zone.to/threads/third-crisis-neon-nights-v0-2-3-pr-anduo-games.233663/
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Oh nice, sequel to third crisis? Never finished the first one but I liked it a lot. Thanks for the recommendation!
Yeah and they changed the engine to unity so the graphics and gameplay are much better
Android Version?
Also Dev, I'll give my few pointers that I hope can help improve the story. Generally speaking in games of these types the traditional route is just the girl ending up getting pregnant and the guy being her kind of "master". But I would really like to see a different take to the corruption part with unintended consequences. I am personally a huge fan of possessive girls and I feel aspects like jealousy and possessiveness are not really explored much in such games. It's just that the girl randomly ends up accepting her man will be other girls which is weird.
The other thing would be what happens after she becomes tame? I think rather than her being a hollow shell of herself it would be a lot more satisfying for her to retain her original personality and instead have a softer side for the MC. Just because you have to remember that the reason it's so satisfying to "break" her is because of her personality. If you remove the part of a character that makes her, her it will leave people unsatisfied and bored once all is said and done.
Also Dev, I'll give my few pointers that I hope can help improve the story. Generally speaking in games of these types the traditional route is just the girl ending up getting pregnant and the guy being her kind of "master". But I would really like to see a different take to the corruption part with unintended consequences. I am personally a huge fan of possessive girls and I feel aspects like jealousy and possessiveness are not really explored much in such games. It's just that the girl randomly ends up accepting her man will be other girls which is weird.
The other thing would be what happens after she becomes tame? I think rather than her being a hollow shell of herself it would be a lot more satisfying for her to retain her original personality and instead have a softer side for the MC. Just because you have to remember that the reason it's so satisfying to "break" her is because of her personality. If you remove the part of a character that makes her, her it will leave people unsatisfied and bored once all is said and done.
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I'm hoping to have an Android version on the next release, I just need to figure out the memory issue.
Appreciate the pointers. I don't want to spoil anything, but I'll just say I agree 100% with your comment about seeing what happens after the taming and I think you'll enjoy the later Acts (or at least that's my goal!).
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Very true. I have to resort to the History button in order to read the text plenty of times.
Just my two cents. I know that you specifically referred to the dev but I'm bored and would like to talk about the game.
Personality is good. However, the premise of the game is that her initial bitchy personality is why she became the target of the MC for "rehabilitation" in the first place. So I agree that personality is important. However, if there's no drastic change in her personality after the training, I would think that the intense rehabilitation that she went through was ineffective. Imagine going through rape, sexual torture, and brainwashing where everything is done to alter her personality to think like a dog/slave and then towards the end, she becomes just a little bit less bitchy. That's very anti-climactic imo. All that intensity for a milktoast outcome. So personally, I probably won't find the "she's still bitchy but less bitchy to the MC now" ending very appealing.
This is a sexual training simulator. In my opinion, the idea is to see how much her personality will change (at least towards the MC) after all the intense rehabilitation/brainwashing that she went through. I would argue that the appeal of this game is how much her personality have changed in contrast to her initial. I get what you mean that she should still be Naomi. But in my opinion, it should be Naomi minus the rebelliousness/bitchiness since to me, retaining the bitchiness would mean that her intense rehabilitation was ineffective and it would make the ending anti-climactic.
Edit: I get that right now, she doesn't have much personality aside from being bitchy and stubborn but I think inserting flashbacks or having deep dialogue between her and MC to give her more personality would do it.
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Love hearing the discussion and thoughts about the novel!
Just out of curiosity, would people be interested in a discord? Someone mentioned it to me a while back and I wasn't initially planning on it, but if there is enough demand for it I'd be down to look at creating one (as long as I can get someone to manage it).
Based on your last statement, I'd leave Discord alone, for now. It can be a bit time-consuming in monitoring and if this is your first game, you don't need the distraction.