VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Naruto: Eternal Tsukuyomi [v0.11.8] [Kiobe]

I thought the artwork in some of the other Naruto parodies were bad, this one is objectively the worst I've seen. I'm not even going to bother going in detail about the rest of why this is bad, but as a porn parody game, the visuals are supposed to be the number one concern.

Numero, fucking, uno.

But this looks terrible. Proportions are off, characters of importance hardly look like themselves. The inconsistency is jarring, and I feel like washing my eyes out with bleach after staring at the screen for longer than 10 seconds.

Don't waste your time with this travesty of a parody. Go play Rise of the Jiikage instead. The artwork in there isn't great either, but its miles better than this piece of crap.

I remember wanting to like one of this devs prior games but despite a few art scenes that were just great the game experience itself was grindy and counter intuitive. Unfortunately much of the same experience can be found across different versions of trying this game.
The art is great and sexy and a rip or comic of it would be sweet however the game, from trying to unzip to playing it, could use some real refinement.
For the sake of that great art I hope it cleans up some, the easy mode was something of a step in the right direction as was the included walkthrough, there is progress being made. As is though, it still falls under a category of something that I'd rather just see the art than play. If something would make a better comic or art gallery than game, the best I can go is two stars right now.

zero balance battle, boring mini game.
hard control, although it is the first version, it still not a good game for player.
so it only worth 1 star. not thing special.
maybe wait another version, this version is terrible.

tl;dr: Not a great start. Art looks nice, but the game is sloppily produced. There is a core of a decent game in there though.

- Greeted by various spelling errors and sentences that flow badly.
- The map looks good, but most locations will come "next update". Why are we allowed to click them? Now I have to close a popup every time I click a location that apparently wasn't implemented.
- Locations are not labelled and can be quite small. Combined with the previous point, it's a pain to travel.
- The logic of the quests is sloppy. If you accidentally pick up the apple before it was needed, the story is skipped. Fire jutsu option only appear AFTER you get the flashlight.
- The fetch quests are not very exciting and quickly killed my interest in playing further.

This game needs more playtesting and feedback, as it's just not very fun and rough. There is potential, as the menu, map, etc look good and there is already a core of mechanics. It just hasn't been made nice for users.