VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Nasticity [v0.13] [Mr Deadbird]

This just straight up isn't really any good.

Firstly the gameplay - well there isn't really any ... just things that lead to a gameover so you start again and choose the other thing.

The writing - terrible, like badly written quick cheesy porn scenes with no exposition.

The music - annoying.

The art - isn't terrible but certainly wasn't to my tastes and I never found it erotic.

I get it's unfinished, but more of it won't help, it's just not a very good concept and done in a not so great way.

Let's start with writing and plot, they are Brazzers level, some quick chit-chat in an unrealistic but cliché porn situation and straight fuck, they are there just to justify the sex. Art is awful. Music is annoying, because there only one during the entire game. Gameplay is none, it's just a simple VN where the few decisions means nothing. The game is in its final version but it's not done, to see some events and the complete story only in the patreon comics. Well, overall it's a mediocre porn game, not great but not bad either, and it achieve it's objective: giving something to fap to.

The game is on going and still being improved and updated. Basically its in its infancy stage. By the next release most bugs and nuances should be fixed and the game will be more streamline and continue under a more consistent format. The plot is good for a game with a good amount of humor which is nice. The game or characters don't take themselves too seriously. I like the "cameo" star appearances too! I wish there was even more...it totally adds to the humor. No one mentioned seeing Joe in there Go check out main website on patreon to see full version.

The writing is decent, and the storylines are well done for a porn game. There is just enough story to make the characters feel alive without distracting or stalling for time until you get to the sex. I also like some of the sexual themes, which is why I give it 4 instead of 3 stars.

The art is subpar, but functional. You get to know how the characters look and whats going on, which is enough for me to be honest.

Looking forward to further releases.

And into the trash it goes. This is nothing but poorly traced porn and other pictures plastered together in something that can't really account for a game. Half of the "characters" have nearly the same copy-pasted faces. And yeah, this goes directly into the trash.