It looks like this game has very good potential if they work on few things (which others have already pointed out), wishing good luck to developer. Will come back to this once it has a bit more story.
... reading the last three posts here, will give this a miss for now. Will you remove the kinetic novel tag once you have added in choices and routes? Would be a great way to inform us poor fellows that it has changed.
So how bad was the writing before that this is the improved version? How does it take people so long to re write the same story they've already played a thousand times on this very site? Are you all secretly fetishists for generic repetition and Christian vanilla sex scenes? Where's the facking porn innit?