[R>Proofreader] Unpaid Need A proof reader

[AJLee7385]

Hey guys my name is Roy. I Need Help I'm starting from scratch with a new game because my last attempt had issues. I use Grammarly but my spelling sometimes still sucks cause it doesn't get everything. I was hoping someone would proofread what I have so far. Its only like 7 passages at the moment but It will grow. I'm sorry I can't pay anyone but if you could help would appreciate it.

 

[lurkathon]

Hi Roy, I wish you well with your new project, and improving your dev skills
I have a poor knowledge of PCs in general, but always had an eye for spelling, punctuation, grammar, etc.
Had a go at editing your texts with notepad. I think I corrected most minor errors, but left your phrasing and sentence structure mostly untouched. Hope this can help

 

[AJLee7385]

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[Aweful]

There are quite a few misspelled words. The chosen font and sizes are not as aesthetically pleasing as they could be.

"Simple is clean, clean is simple."

Keep italics and such to headers, titles and [special] quotations.