Need feedback on my sketches.

lobotomist

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Before I go into coloring, could you guys give me some opinions on sketches:

First are the cheerleaders, they boss around the MC, and he simps hard for the head cheerleader. cheerleaders.png


Next are some metal heads the MC would make a band with them, and to the right is MC's childhood friend: friends.png
Next we have some local milfs. milfs.png
Finally the hero and a teacher: hero.png

The game is supposed to be set on a cyberpunk setting so any ideas/suggestions towards that would be great.
 

Lussuria

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May 26, 2020
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The sketches are pretty good, I like the first rocker girl, she seems to have personality to her sketch that some of the others lack, some feel a bit generic.
 

Rythan25

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Feb 20, 2018
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I'd fuck them (as far as drawings go)... except the guy, but he isnt bad looking *wink*
 

Mimir's Lab

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Sep 30, 2019
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The clothing and hairstyles look contemporary, not cyberpunk. The character archetypes are also typical for a more contemporary setting too. You gotta delve into the "punk" aspect more if you want to show the cyberpunk theme in your characters.
 
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very nice. I think, general construction for anatomy might help. don't go into style too early, try to construct a good anatomy first and then put your attire over it. maybe practice some nude and portrait drawings from photos or real life. keep it up though. very promising.