Ren'Py Need feedbacks on my art style and animations

[Infamyxxx]

I'm heavily focused on animations as you will see from my WIPs. I use Blender and make traditional frame-by-frame animations. My biggest hurdle is the shading. (I have really poor cognition when it comes to predicting how light falls on an object and determines the shape of the shadow) So, my shading skill is a very very simple cel-shading at this moment.

My idea for a game (whatever the setting may be) is to focus on the simulation aspects of sex. So, I'm carefully creating animation sequences for the players to be able to direct during the scenes. Like interactive choices with parts of her body, sex positions, intensity, ripping items of clothings etc. Also, different reactions from the girls like choking, blinking, looking at the player, looking at his dick, eyebrows movements, sweating, tearing up, spit/saliva, etc.

Looking at some of the top 2D video game creators on Patreon, I havent really found any projects that focused on elaborate animation sequences and so, I have very little to no references at all. I know Summertime Saga, Hole House, My Pig Princess and some that I can't recall the names of right now, A Zombie Life?!?...(I'm happy to look through any recommendations you have btw)

So, let me know what you think of my art style and animations. Would a game with this type of art interest you? I'd love to hear from you. Thanks!

Also, just in case if anyone's interested, I have already made a game before. A small project I released on Steam back in Sep, 2024 called Furry Fatale. Now, I'm gearing up for a new one.

 

[orellion]

Nice work. I can only find fault with the pic stretching her cheek. It's too pronounced and should be more circular (the point where the head is poking at) rather than cylindrical.

 

[Goeffel]

i like the hair animation, well done.
however the hand on behind of her head needs being worked over.

 

[Daxtan]

A personal opinion, some tongue action, especially at the cockhead, will make it a lot more of a turn on

 

[Infamyxxx]

Nice work. I can only find fault with the pic stretching her cheek. It's too pronounced and should be more circular (the point where the head is poking at) rather than cylindrical.

Good to know. Should I tone down any exggerations that may have cartoonish effect?

 

[Infamyxxx]

i like the hair animation, well done.
however the hand on behind of her head needs being worked over.

Thanks! Do you mean the anatomy is sub-par or that the hand needs more animation like finger movements?

 

[Infamyxxx]

A personal opinion, some tongue action, especially at the cockhead, will make it a lot more of a turn on

I'm currently working on an animation where you're throatfucking her while her tongue is out and drooling. You're talking about her licking the cockhead, right? Or is it her sucking on it with her tongue out?

 

[Daxtan]

I'm currently working on an animation where you're throatfucking her while her tongue is out and drooling. You're talking about her licking the cockhead, right? Or is it her sucking on it with her tongue out?

I meant licking the cockhead, not a real fan of throatfucking, but like I said its a personal opinion. But I do think many will appreciate a slow erotic licking on the sensitive parts like frenulum, as these are usually rare in games, most creators only animate blowjob including the basics like sucking and throatfucking before moving to the fucking part, so a detailed one might stand out too.

 

[NeonSelf]

Looks great! Definitely would like to play a game like this.

The only weird picture is where I see outline of a dick on girls cheek. It seems anatomically impossible, like dick is going where skull bones should be.

Also, I see picture as a whole, so you dont have to worry about every little detail. Players will be focused on gameplay, their own feelings first and everything else second. Thats one of the reasons why AI generated images are so popular, people just dont pay attention to details.

 

[Infamyxxx]

But I do think many will appreciate a slow erotic licking on the sensitive parts like frenulum, as these are usually rare in games, most creators only animate blowjob including the basics like sucking and throatfucking before moving to the fucking part, so a detailed one might stand out too.

I'm gonna get into that one then. I suppose it could be a part of the scene before she starts sucking.

 

[Infamyxxx]

Looks great! Definitely would like to play a game like this.

The only weird picture is where I see outline of a dick on girls cheek. It seems anatomically impossible, like dick is going where skull bones should be.

Also, I see picture as a whole, so you dont have to worry about every little detail. Players will be focused on gameplay, their own feelings first and everything else second. Thats one of the reasons why AI generated images are so popular, people just dont pay attention to details.

Thank you.

And yeah, about the the cheek thing. Another user mentioned it as well. I guess exaggeration for the sake of a little cartoonish effect is not gonna work or seem awkward at least, huh?

 

[NeonSelf]

And yeah, about the the cheek thing. Another user mentioned it as well. I guess exaggeration for the sake of a little cartoonish effect is not gonna work or seem awkward at least, huh?

Sure, you may leave it as it is. Not a huge problem.

Its more important to finish the core gameplay. To be honest, I dont see 'sex pose management' as gameplay loop. I've played Subverse in its early versions, where I could arrange a sequence of small animated scenes to make my own 'movie' and it was the most disappointing part of the game. Sex scene should feel rewarding, when you put effort to unlock new options, not just do whatever you want from the start.