VN - Ren'Py - New Beginnings in Japan [Ch. 2 DLC Episode] [Shikharsfree]

I really like this game so far and the renders are good too.
I wish the game had some kind of money system if I am earning money from cosplay and streaming to spend it on buying some lewd costume which increases my corruption or chances of getting groped.
Lastly I wish the game has more groping scenes

Review for the version current version Chapter 2 v0.3

Very good looking game with decent characters and good story so far , game was confusing at the start however picked up a little better by midway.

Pros :

Nice renders , quality is very nice
Good animations
Interesting main character
Cute and hot girls both

Cons :
Story little confusing at start
Slow buildup
Money system not integrated?


Overall I am excited for next version but i would like more focus on lesbian.

v0.3

The renders look good, but everything else below par.

Not even the renders can save it because there is no consistency. You see the MC and her mother, and her mother looks like she's younger than the MC. Ditto for her aunt.
All female characters are sort of copies of each other visually. All are big boobed women of similar age even though the story suggests there should be a couple of decades in age difference between some. Male characters have been seen before in other games, and the top WTF moment was when I saw an exact copy of Bruce Lee.

Story is bad. It is chaotic, and hard to follow. It doesn't make much sense. We are introduced to way too many characters who are only puddle deep.

Great start of the game. Can't wait for the next update and love the plot so far. Hoping there is a Kiara/Mia, Kiara/Xia, Mia/Xia or all 3 together scene in the future lol. Only got 2 complaints and one is that there's too many scenes starting off as groping/sexual harassment which is fine but needs more stuff mixed in. Also missed the background music that was in CH1, it helped me get more invested into the story of the game than I normally would for porn games. Still was invested in CH2 despite the lack of music but the music in CH1 helped set the mood and made everything better.

Review for Chapter 2 0.1

Game is very interesting along with a lot of beautiful girls. Beginning is confusing a bit, but makes up for it further in the game.

Pros
-Great graphics
-Great girls
-Writing is interesting
-Nice scenes

Cons
-Story is a little confusing
-Needs more content and variety
-Has spelling and english issues that need correcting

Other than that, this game is really really good. I am looking forward to creator provide more content for game.

In this game we follow the story of Kiara, who moves to Japan to start a new life. But there's also the stories of numerous other people, that are in some way intertwined with the main protagonist.

This makes for a very interesting albeit somewhat confusing start. New characters are introduced without much background information.
If you read carefully you can put some pieces together and follow the story without much trouble. However it can be confusing anc chaotic to some.

At one point I confused Veronica and Valentina with each other (similar names) and I kept wondering why her hair changed color every time

A good idea would be to add a compendium of all the characters and their relationship to each other and Kiara. The compendium could be updated with the choices these characters make (or rather the choices you make for them).

As for the story, despite the confusing start I think it's very well written and executed. Some clever humor as well, which I greatly appreciate.

I don't know which direction this will game go, but assuming from what I played it seems there's different LI's for Kiara (both male and female) as well as a corruption system. The LI's look all very interesting, so that's a big plus.

There's also a bunch of (storywise less important) bad guys, mainly perverts who grope the main characters, which then leads to a choice (endure it/tell him off). I think this is in the game to appeal to certain players, and/or to to be able to rise the corruption meter.
However I think these bad guys are too cliche and cardboard characters. Given how well the 'decent' males are written and fleshed out, I'm sure the writer(s) should be able to make these bad guys more interesting than the usual pervert trope.

My biggest gripe with this game is the language. Wrong and missing punctuation, wrong use of capital and lower case letters, a lot of spelling mistakes and the use of sms language (ikr, btw, ffs, idk, sup, ...). It feels like it's hastely and sloppy written. This is in stark contrast with the good quality of the other aspects of the game.

So, to round it up, all in all a very good game so far.
Would love to give it 4,5 stars, but since that's not possible I'll keep it at 4 for now.

Well after play 2 chapter i feel this is like a combine story and maybe in one time they will merge into one crucial path. The story is good the complexity is still make sense to the story itself, and hope more to the characters development because the model is so good. For me personally It's feels like the MC is MIA just because she is more fit to the tragic story of her life. So keep up the good work and thank you for making this.

Lots of really hot characters and there's quite a bit of content for a brand new game. Thus far, this game seems more like a kinetic novel than a traditional game. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but it would be good to know going in as I do prefer to play games with some degree of choice. The Chapter 2 preview does seem to suggest that there will be more choices available in the future, though, so that's promising.

Nice render, nice characters, but the story is absolutely chaotic. The change between the places/countries/persons is to much. I expected a story out of the view of a female MC not out the view of x other persons, too. Especially not if they have nothing to do with anything that happens to the MC at that moment. A flashback why they meet when MC and the other char meet the first time is okay, but the story is at the moment really exhausting to read.