New Character Design for My Game: Selene the Gothic Rebel!

[SuccubusIsland]

Hey, everyone! So, I’ve been working on a new character for the

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demo, and I couldn’t wait to share her with you: Selene, the gothic, thicc daughter of the school principal. She’s shy on the outside, but trust me, there’s a wild side brewing under that calm exterior.

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Here’s the deal—I’m super pumped about her design, but I could really use your input:
Hair – Should we go with long and flowing, a short edgy cut, or something totally different?
Tattoos & piercings – Are they hitting just the right rebellious vibe, or am I going overboard here?

Here are my ideas for the haircut:

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And here is my tatoos/piercings concepts (personally love it, but maybe is too much):

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Feedback would be appreciate it!
Cheers.

 

[ouch2020]

Hey, everyone! So, I’ve been working on a new character for the

You must be registered to see the links

demo, and I couldn’t wait to share her with you: Selene, the gothic, thicc daughter of the school principal. She’s shy on the outside, but trust me, there’s a wild side brewing under that calm exterior.

You must be registered to see the links

Here’s the deal—I’m super pumped about her design, but I could really use your input:
Hair – Should we go with long and flowing, a short edgy cut, or something totally different?
Tattoos & piercings – Are they hitting just the right rebellious vibe, or am I going overboard here?

Here are my ideas for the haircut:

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And here is my tatoos/piercings concepts (personally love it, but maybe is too much):

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Feedback would be appreciate it!
Cheers.

Hmm, the look in the first image, good. About the last image, I am not much for piercing and similar, but i think both the nipple piercing and the bat one (where did you get that one, I really like it) go well with the character.
I am not for tattoos, but I think the spider can also go with the character wanting to be ghot/witch (though contrary to some opinions, not all the goths go for plenty of tattoos and piercings everywhere).
The one that I think is too much, is the one on the boob, I would take that one out. If her goal is to piss off her school director daddy, the rest would probably be more than enough already ;-)

 

[SuccubusIsland]

Hmm, the look in the first image, good. About the last image, I am not much for piercing and similar, but i think both the nipple piercing and the bat one (where did you get that one, I really like it) go well with the character.
I am not for tattoos, but I think the spider can also go with the character wanting to be ghot/witch (though contrary to some opinions, not all the goths go for plenty of tattoos and piercings everywhere).
The one that I think is too much, is the one on the boob, I would take that one out. If her goal is to piss off her school director daddy, the rest would probably be more than enough already ;-)

First of all, thanks for the feedback—it really helps me a lot to guide the designs, haha. I saw the bat piercing online, but I don’t really remember where, and yeah, it fits super well, lol. For piercings and tattoos, I’m planning to add a character customization system in the game where you can choose clothes, tattoos, piercings, and hairstyles for the character. But for this one in particular, I thought the base design would already include tattoos and piercings since she’s the goth thicc queen (? lol. But yeah, you’re right, the chest one might be a bit too much, so thanks again for the feedback!

 

[ouch2020]

But for this one in particular, I thought the base design would already include tattoos and piercings since she’s the goth thicc queen (? lol. But yeah, you’re right, the chest one might be a bit too much, so thanks again for the feedback!

About the "thicc"...
Come on, poor girl, OK, she is not exactly Twiggy :-D, but I am sure she has plenty to give (no, I don't mean in kg/pounds of weight, let's not be mean).
Plus, I don't know if it is on purpose, but looking at the face, she gives a bit the impression of many (though not all, of course) goth girls, that turns out that under all the dark dressing and make up, are in reality on the sweet side, and use the supposed "evilness" as defense.
Of course, unless it is all a way to hide her real nature as an evil witch soul-sucking (notice, I wrote "soul", not something else ) succubus (OK, with the "succubus", I admit one could think about some possibilities... ).

 

[SuccubusIsland]

About the "thicc"...
Come on, poor girl, OK, she is not exactly Twiggy :-D, but I am sure she has plenty to give (no, I don't mean in kg/pounds of weight, let's not be mean).
Plus, I don't know if it is on purpose, but looking at the face, she gives a bit the impression of many (though not all, of course) goth girls, that turns out that under all the dark dressing and make up, are in reality on the sweet side, and use the supposed "evilness" as defense.
Of course, unless it is all a way to hide her real nature as an evil witch soul-sucking (notice, I wrote "soul", not something else ) succubus (OK, with the "succubus", I admit one could think about some possibilities... ).

Hold up, my friend, don’t get ahead of yourself! To find out more about the character, you’ll have to wait for the demo, haha. Is her face just a façade? Or deep down, is she a sweet goth who just wants to make "friends"? Like you said, the possibilities are endless, lol.

And about the "thicc" and Twiggy comment...let’s just say she’s got her own style, and I think she’s rocking it

a little spoiler for our next character, if you are more on fitness or thin girls, you'll love her