VN - Ren'Py - No Fap Island [Ch.6] [FapYeah]

One to watch both on here and on steam. Story hooks are good for the characters, as well as the overall framing device, makes it a great VN overall. #TeamMichelle but they all are great. The art and animations are great too.

A very promising game that clearly made a lot of efforts despite being AI generated.

What is very encouraging is the sheer amount of animations.
I believe there's already...15-20ish? Which is quite considerable for an AI game this early into developpement.

A very simple premise,dates with hot chicks end up ...well, how you think it's gonna end up.
It's one of the most no bullshit game ever,the devs know what you're here for, and he delivers.

There are some improvements that could be done on a few specific animations, and maybe a few very minor tweaks on the "affection" system during dates, but other than that I dig it.

ok for a 2d AI game its solid, the models are nice, the story premise is ok.

Now some pointers:

1. challenge one sexy nurses was hot and well done
2. challenge two that went from the hot nurse to boring beach volleyball with outfits out of the 50s or 60s it was not hot at all so having the mc trying not to cum was a bit insulting

Animations are choppy at best they need to flow more smoothly maybe offer different angles, the animations currently just dont look good.

Some may say why give it 4 stars then? Well the game is not yet complete and maybe the DEV will get better at things like animations etc as he/she progresses.

pointers are just that i am not trying to say its crap the game as i said is solid but can be improved.

Great stuff through the first two days. Art is generally attractive, animations are decent-to-great. Writing wise there are some small issues with continuity or missed opportunities for teasing, and it may be a little verbose on inner monologue, but otherwise a consistently enjoyable experience, can't wait for more content.

Games like these have a lot of potential in my opinion. Like the other review said, "teasing" will be important for this to succeed and it is best to not stray from it. If the girls win getting him to fap, there should be them essentially trying to seduce him and make it difficult. Right now, it's pretty light hearted, has good humor, distinct personalities, some silliness, very polished, bug free, didn't notice issues with English, it's doing a good job at building connections with the girls, nothing very sexual with MC yet, but most importantly, potential to turn into something very tempting. I feel like the girls aren't being the most aggressive right now, and they don't have to be aggressive, but I'd recommend they feel more like they want to win too, rather than solely just there to have fun. If the MC is "surviving", the key is temptation to want to see multiple endings. The player should "want" to see what it's like to lose, tempted to do it, and "want" to be reloading saves or replaying making it to the end. And there should feel like some challenge is involved with it (tempted to want to see the earlier endings when you lose). If successful, I'll willingly change my rating to 5 stars. Games with this kind of formula are very rare. Right now, I'm only taking a star off simply because the girls feel like they don't really care about seducing the MC enough yet, and it's detracting from how much I'm enjoying it as a result, but there's still plenty of time for it.

I feel it's worth mentioning I understand there's a kind of girls falling in love with the MC kind of theme going on here too I might not have mentioned the most, which sounds like what I'm saying might be contrary to it. But that's not the intention. I have no problem with a story focused on building a relationship with the girls and falling in love (I very much enjoy those), mostly just saying the part I feel isn't as strong yet is teasing the MC is all. I'll enjoy the game taking its time and build up a love story for the good love endings, just saying that's not all I'd expect to see from a game where an MC has to "survive on an island without fapping".

So I'll be watching and supporting too, hoping for the best. Good luck and thanks for a very nice, well done, interesting game so far!

Pretty good so far. It's simple, but cute.
The girls are all nice to look at, instead of just some of them like most avns.

Don't rush the lewd scenes/full nude. Put in lots of teasing partial nudity (accidental, voyeur, upshirt/skirt, etc) That will make the avn far better and longer lasting. Foreplay/teasing is everything. Without it there is little desire, even for men, whether they realize it or not.

Lovely scenary, loved the bright colors. Coll art. Ok story. The narrative there's nothing that pop it ups from the many others VN's out there. And I do love lesbian love. Some scenes montage was very cool! This game pass a happy vibe, and I like that.
4 starts!

The art looks great, locations looks to be good.
The plot is a breath of fresh air, something that's not common these days.

The only thing is that there should be a lot more renders. There is too much text between each render. I that is remedied, this game can be awesome!