So, I just finished playing through this release (first ever release), and despite its shortness, few grammatical errors, and typos or wrong word choices, I enjoyed the game.
For a first release, there's a nice amount of content for the 1st Act, and the fact it offers choices makes it all the better in my view.
The artwork is superb, some of the best that I have seen, at least when keeping first releases in mind.
The lewd voice acting is great, although on one route it keeps going even though the text doesn't fit the lewd voice acting anymore.
- (For instance, the sucking noises would keep going long after the Antagonist pulled out and sprayed the Protagonist's face with cum.)
However, I do hope that the developer intends to flesh out Act 1 much more before working on Act 2, as I feel that it could be significantly longer and better. Some choices only offer a few lines before ending in the first release.
With it being the first release in mind, here are some Positives and Negatives, in my opinion, the few Negatives being the sole reason this doesn't get a full score.
Positives:
Voice Acting - lewd and normal lines.
Great Artwork.
Choices that are given to the players.
Negatives:
The lewd voice acting keeps going even though the lines no longer fit in some areas.
There are some grammatical errors, wrong words used in sentences, and a few typos.