VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - North River [v0.2][BoldPilot]

This looks like google translated it's very broken english and in some cases very hard to understand what it meant to be said. Def needs a better translator if it's going to progress any further.

Renders aren't terrible, but they aren't good either somewhere in between. Story is a typical school flick and too early to see where it's going.

Good beginning of story. It is not sandbox and it is already great. Let`s looking forward to see where writer`s idea is going on. For now the story already contains funny moments and funny decisions as for me. I recomend to try