Ren'Py - Not That Stream [v0.1] [legioflavia]

Review based on version 0.1

Pros:

• An original story
• A realistic MC, instead of a godlike alpha or a weak, foolish one
• An FMC who's a famous streamer with an original look, set to become even more famous
• Writing that doesn't contain extra and long dialogue
• Romantic scenes that influenced my affection for the FMC
• Fitting and impactful music and sound design
• Excellent art, though this is subjective (only a few of the renders had bugs)

Cons:

• Lack of many positions in the sex scenes (this is unconfirmed for now as we've only had one sex scene)
• Lack of resistance, doubt, or hesitation towards the open relationship (based on the MC and FMC's reactions)
• Weak logic in accepting the open relationship (the MC is very in love with the FMC and has never been in an open relationship before, so logically he shouldn't accept it so easily)
• Lack of complex characters (a horny boy and girl get into an open relationship just because they're horny, not for deeper reasons that could add many layers to the story and characters)

Score: 4 out of 5 for now, because some of the negative points I wrote need the second update for full confirmation. I will raise or lower the score in future updates