So, I get this is a little pointless as it's completed and obviously one of the best stories on this site. This is also the first 5 stars I think I've ever given anything here. It's actually kind of funny how simple giving an adult game/novel a well written story completely elevates it to more than just dumb smut. Legitimately, if you take out most of the sex to make it like R-Rated instead of X, your like, Mom that loves The Walking Dead and romance novels would like the story to this. And I can't stress enough how refreshing it is to just have something pleasant to read.
The story is simple, the TOTALLY NOT COVID virus outbreak makes people zombie-esque and the world ends. You, I wanna say take the role of, but sometimes it does feel a little 3rd person-y, MC, a single adoptive father to Carol. Just trying to survive. Long story short, your wife died, you didn't wanna date, your friend gets you to adopt Carol, she grows up and fond of you, the world ends and one drunk night you explore those feelings. That's a broad oversimplification, but I don't wanna spoil this too much.
For a while, you and Carol survive, holed up in your apartment until you find her best friend Naomi out on the streets and bring her home. Relieved, you three try to keep safe in the house until you forcefully have to relocate to their old high school where you eventually meet Sydney. She's an agoraphobic recluse hoping to wait out the pandemic or for her family. The school section is very drawn out and honestly the part of the story I find a little boring and too long. Essentially you're once again forced to relocate, and come across a group of women survivors that hate men, but find an old friend, Julie (my favorite, but oh well..), and Naomi's mom, Alice.
The reunion is cut short because they try to kill you, so you escape the city to find a wet dream for doomsday preppers that you learned about from Naomi's father. There you meet Hana, spoiled rich girl that didn't want you in the house, but you do eventually meet on common ground. Eventually, you explore the nearby town, hoping to live there instead due to tensions at the house with Hana. You meet McCreary, local sheriff and help with things in town to gain trust and such. Hoping to gain footholds for a new home.
So that is the VERY brief synopsis of characters and locations in the story. I will say there is very little I don't like about this, so I might come across as nit-picky. There's a part near the beginning where MC talks to his "inner dark self" that I find a little tacky, out of nowhere, and abruptly stops. I'm assuming it stops after MC finally has sex with Carol the first time. That shouldn't be a spoiler, there's LOTS of sex in this. And the woman that tries to kill the MC is Cassie, but then is later called Carrie. I think it's a typo because Hana's sister was named Carrie, so I think it was just a mistake of similar names. But who knows, it was a little confusing. Also, you got the year right, Dev, but the best car ever was the '69 Z28 Camaro I WILL DIE ON THIS HILL SO HELP ME.
I do wanna say just how refreshing it was to read a story that wasn't stiff, in broken english, or have the same boring plot as 80% of the "games" here. There's double contractions and just very human dialogue. Instead of "Hello. How are you?" it's more "Hey, how're ya doin'?" You know? Like how actual people talk to you? And out of the whole story I think I could count the typos on my hands (and maybe my toes...) For having 20k+ lines that's impeccable. And if I'm speculating right and a possible "next" project if it is in universe It'd obviously be about Gregg, which would be interesting, but I also would love to see what else you could cook up, Dev.
I also don't know if I like or am embarrassed that I understood most, if not all, of the references the MC made. Or some of the more esoteric nods in the story that I don't know if they were nod or my brain was reaching for something. And I'll be honest, there were a LOT of parallels to story beats in the walking dead, but done in a way that transforms it enough to be original. On top of creating characters that I ACTUALLY GAVE A CRAP ABOUT. It's novel, I know. Yeah the personalities are a little porn-plotty, meaning a little too accepting, and they use the harem word which is usually a bit concerning. But it was used in a believable context and the story situations help explain stuff away.
So, Dev, thank you for setting the bar impossibly high for the other shovelware on this site. This one's gonna stay on the hard drive, most definitely.