" and before she left, you both agreed on a free pass. "
ruined
Kinda agree.
On top of that, they have a free pass, but there is not even a
hint of a guy FMC is into, and MC can just make little comments about Devin and Rach. You've already kind of taken away the spontaneity of the netorase with the free pass thing, so like...can we just get to the action? There's not much to build up to, so I hope this shit gets going sooner rather than later.
Not to mention, both of the episodes are pretty short and take very few risks in the story and show nothing, plus the developer is already releasing a second game in this "series". If you can just pump out new instalments in the series...maybe we hurry up and don't just endlessly drag paying customers through months of blue balls? If you blow your load too early on one game, you can always make a new one to get that novelty factor back.
tl;dr: Content, por favor, developer man.