TLDR:
Zero connection to the characters
Disjointed stories that dont connect together
No reason to care if the characters fuck other people
no way to keep who is who straight between updates
too many stories, either present it as short stories disconnected from each other or focus on one story.
I have tried several times to play this game, I dont have a problem with the kinks, I dont freak out over NTR, but if you are gonna write it, do it well. I have zero issue with the AI artwork. I cant focus enough on the stories to bother to look for the tell-tale signs of AI writing so I cant comment on that.
The multiple stories make this game very hard to follow. I can't remember between updates who anyone is nor why I care about them.
In reality this is a series of short stories with entirely different characters but for some reason the MC perspective is the same. So either the MC is getting NTR'd hyper efficiently by like 8 girls at once or you are just supposed to pretend each story you are a new MC despite the other girls being contacts.
Half the stories the love interest seems to just be some random girl the MC met online. It feels more like, especially with some of the stories, the girls are all streamers (and at least one actually is) who the MC is simping after and when they fuck other people its suddenly NTR despite there being minimal connection between the MC and the girl beyond a few random texts.
I think I tried about 6 updates worth of content and every time I get bored before I get to the interesting parts, even fast forwarding through it. The dev would be better served to focus on one story and weave all these characters in. make them wives, mothers, sisters, daughters, best friends or whatever of the MC so theres a reason for the one phone with all the contacts. OR make each story its own menu option with descriptions of what the theme is.
Zero connection to the characters
Disjointed stories that dont connect together
No reason to care if the characters fuck other people
no way to keep who is who straight between updates
too many stories, either present it as short stories disconnected from each other or focus on one story.
I have tried several times to play this game, I dont have a problem with the kinks, I dont freak out over NTR, but if you are gonna write it, do it well. I have zero issue with the AI artwork. I cant focus enough on the stories to bother to look for the tell-tale signs of AI writing so I cant comment on that.
The multiple stories make this game very hard to follow. I can't remember between updates who anyone is nor why I care about them.
In reality this is a series of short stories with entirely different characters but for some reason the MC perspective is the same. So either the MC is getting NTR'd hyper efficiently by like 8 girls at once or you are just supposed to pretend each story you are a new MC despite the other girls being contacts.
Half the stories the love interest seems to just be some random girl the MC met online. It feels more like, especially with some of the stories, the girls are all streamers (and at least one actually is) who the MC is simping after and when they fuck other people its suddenly NTR despite there being minimal connection between the MC and the girl beyond a few random texts.
I think I tried about 6 updates worth of content and every time I get bored before I get to the interesting parts, even fast forwarding through it. The dev would be better served to focus on one story and weave all these characters in. make them wives, mothers, sisters, daughters, best friends or whatever of the MC so theres a reason for the one phone with all the contacts. OR make each story its own menu option with descriptions of what the theme is.