VN - Ren'Py - Nudist School [v0.17] [Elsa]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    pachinko jones

    Pretty poorly written. Not sure if it's a translation thing or they just aren't great at storytelling, but most characters feel flat and uninteresting, with a single personality trait. The first conversation in the game between the MC and your childhood friend is particularly bad, like two cardboard cutouts trying to make conversation. And there are a handful of minor issues that creep up, like using purple as everyone's name color, including narration and internal dialogue and without any italics, that can be annoying.

    But the situations are really hot, and having the teacher take care of you if you're too embarassed to do it with Olivia is just amazing. I wish a similar situation happened with Clarissa, but that's just wishful thinking, not a complaint. Besides Olivia having comically large nipples, and there only being one older character, I have no real complaints about any of the models. Excited to see more, even if the dialogue isn't up to snuff.
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    sadfuck

    Version played: 0.2
    Time Played: 30 minutes. Reached end of content.

    In spite of being very early development-wise I could not NOT check out a bush as gorgeous as the one I saw in the screenshot.
    Basically, this game looks like it's going to be a light-hearted, harem affair as the MC is the only boy in an all girl's school.

    Positives
    + Glorious, full bush (and fat tits with some great, large areolae too!). Olivia's whole physical design is just an A+ and that bush is S tier
    + Cute girls
    + Gets right to it when it comes to sexual content

    Negatives
    - Nothing at this moment that indicates that this is going to have anything to make it stand out from the six gajillion games with the exact same premise.
    - Game seems to be moving really fast in terms of sexual content, which could be to its detriment unless it adds an absolute shit-ton more girls and some more fetishes beyond nudism and vanilla sex.

    Again, things are still very early so I think your enjoyment is going to be based on your level of tolerance for the premise and just how deeply you need another one of these games in your life.
    Or if you're a bush nut like me. :p

    Note to devs: Nice early start! Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with. Be careful with pacing as you don't want to blow your load too early. Also, keep that high caliber bush coming!
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    weirdscix

    I read the summary and was dithering whether to play it, but after reading the reviews, I decided to give it a try.

    The writing and story are just so, so. With a lot of suspension of disbelief needed.

    The renders are nothing special and a lot have noise in them.

    Character models are pretty generic.

    Expressions and posing are poor, in the first 30 minutes or so of gameplay there are a lot of scenes where the actor doesn't move, change expression even after lots of dialogue.

    I wish the dev well with their project and I might revisit it in the future
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    Demnor

    It's early on in the game. I usually wait a little longer before writing a review (so far it's only at the 0.2 version ). However I really like what the dev has done so far.

    The graphics and renders are great. I like the girls/women featured in the game - they are cute, sexy and we begin to see their personality more and more. As it is one of my fetishes - I like that some of the women feature pubic hair (not all mind you, there is something for everyone) though I wouldn't mind unshaved armpits too.

    There are some grammar errors as the dev is not a native English speaker and the game is in the early stages. I am sure this will improve with time.

    All in all I recommend keeping track of this game, it's promising to be a good one.

    And don't forget to support the dev at if you can.

    Be well, be horny, be happy!
    /Demnor
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    The Bush Diver

    (This review was made after playing the 0.2 version)

    This is a simple, yet quite a fun game, tickling all the right boxes IMHO.

    - Decent story: doesn't need to be complex to be fun.
    - Good quality renders and fluid animations. Awesome!
    - Its grammar shall be improved over time, but nothing that takes away the fun of playing it. People criticize too much the grammar of devs that aren't native english speakers. Maybe it takes non-native english speakers like myself to understand their difficulties better?

    And the most important thing: We already have a plethora of games to choose from where we can see only the unnaturally clean female anatomy when it comes down to the pubic area. This game is a beacon of hope for people that appreciates the more natural look.

    Keep going, dev. Great start, and stellar work so far!
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    gpsywolf

    Game is good, and I enjoyed it. Took one star off because there are several models in here that have been used in at least 3 other titles that i can name off the top of my head, with literally no changes to the default model.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    LivingUnderARock

    I've been waffling between 4 and 5 stars - ideally, I'd deduct half a star for the poor english, but the fast initial update cycle makes me round up instead of down.

    Pros:
    • The renders are very good, amongst the best I've seen.
    • Genuinely attractive models.
    • Good facial expressions.
    • Yay! At least one teenage female with a natural bush. I'm fine with trimmed and shaved, too, but props for variety.
    • Enjoyable story, despite the entirely unrealistic premise ;)
    Cons:
    • Really, really needs a native-english proofreader.
    • Probably a side effect of the non-native language, but character relationships and interactions could be fleshed out more.
    • A small quibble in the animations: breast movements aren't quite right.
    I'm very much looking forward to watching this game, and dev, develop!
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    _Utakata_

    Game is really good
    Story suprised me I thought mc going to a new school and school would be a nudist school But instead the goverment is looking for a few student to join a project about not afraid to hide your body
    The renders are really good
    No bugs
  9. 3.00 star(s)

    FCBiscuit3

    Interesting concept and great models and not to mention a lot of variation in said models, (something that is often lacking these days).
    Awful writing, could really use some work. Story progression is really fast and often doesn't make much logical sense, (even for a porn game).
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    RainGres

    Well I can't say much rn can i? IMO the game rn is good, the render is a beuty let me tell you and the story is umm well I can't really comment on that since it's fairly new in the development, I just hope there will be more exhibition and voyeur scene.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    faradhii

    This game has some nice potential, the girls are all sweethearts (even Bailey) and for a hort demo, the 1 lewd is nice (I'm not counting the hand jobs as lewds).

    Ok, for new games I think I might enjoy I do a running commentary:

    1) don't do "but something happened" make a reason, like "but her parents moved and we've been seperated until now". It makes it more believable and logical.

    2) Childhood friend is perfectly fine, but call it something else: "she was my best friend while were growing up" Childhood friend is trope for "sister" in Patreon society. OR, if she's SUPPOSED to be your sister, then make sure there's a mod on F95 for it.

    3) She's a cute render, well done so far!!

    4) yes, please stop with the "childhood friend" it's just creepy... perhaps allow us to either define relationship or just call her "best friend" or something.

    5) Ah, nice Lancy appearance from Mysterious Lewd Island! So cute!

    6) Unless there's a hidden variable somewhere (Im not a programmer so I have no clue) don't make a "choice" a non choice. I mean, the result for shoosing yes or no is the same. Dont' do that. Either eliminate the choice or make it matter.

    7) Not sure if it's a translation thing, but "boobies" is kind of childish, use tits or just boobs.

    8) I'm not being critical here as I'm guessing English isn't your native language and that's cool, but if you're trying for a English speaking audience it's "take a SEAT, not take a sit" I've gotten used to it in many games that use translator programs, but just trying to be helpful if you're trying to avoid "engrish".

    9) Here is the perfect opportunity for a nice "trade" with Bailey and a good point to keep your audience interested. Perhaps provide the option for a "trade" where Bailey gets corrupted in a trade with MC, some innocent rubbing to start progressing later to full on sex later in exchange for homework cheating. As it is, the player is left cofused. a) I want to tell her to F the F off, BUT I don't want to miss out on potential lewds, so you're kind of forcing me to play against myself here. IRL, I'd propose a "trade" sex for homework. If she doesn't, no harm no foul, if she does, lewd.

    10) Perhaps give the option to NOT take the anti erection pill? I personally think that would be fun!

    11) Eliminate options once you choose them unless there's further progress: EG: Talk to Alnna, then talk to Alanna remains but is the same.

    OK, this has good potential! The renders are nice, the story concept in interesting. The writing is, sorry, rather basic but can be improved. The girls personalities are nice!
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 156769

    Sometimes a porn game hits your fetish just right. If you're like me and you like a soft form of free use, where everyone is relaxed about clothes, sex and relations in general, this is where it's at.

    Nudist School has a simple premise and a straight-forward execution, but the story is just realistic enough to keep the fantasy palatable. The renders are very decent and there is some good if limited animation work to make the sex scenes come to life. There's also some effort put in to make the girls have a distinct personality, which works out very well for Olivia who is just the cutest.

    Nudism is an oddly rare subject for porn games to tackle so it's heartening to see such a good effort come up out of nowhere. Five out of five, can't wait for more.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    MokuhFull

    Just played the beta and I very much enjoy the premise.
    Despite the dev not being a native speaker, some humorous scenes are present and translates quite well into a ligther atmosphere that is not only porn-based. This touch, the will to exploit something more than the nudist tag alone (which is quite already quite rare in itself, this one is a good find), is rather promissing for the future. I already like some of these caracters, and I can't simply give less than five stars for Olivia who is as endearing as she looks.
  14. 3.00 star(s)

    Angelray

    Promising introduction.
    The girls look great for the most part.
    What I'm asking myself is the setting: the girl are forced to go nudist, I can accept. But then there is the forced private time with Olivia, and if i don't mind the scene, i'm asking myself what is the coherence of this world between this action and the fact that Olivia was against nudist beach at first.

    I hope the personality of the girls will remain and that they will not just be "random girls accepting anything from MC because reasons".

    Other than that, the game looks promising.
  15. 4.00 star(s)

    iamamenace

    I'll have to admit, the renders carry this game, the plot is okay and the dialogue needs proofreading as mentioned by others, but it's solid enough.
    Would've been a 3 star review but as previously mentioned, the renders are pretty great and I'm bumping up the rating to 4 stars because of it
  16. 3.00 star(s)

    rick911

    Rating v1.0

    I would love to rate this game higher, but... I have to assume that English is not the dev's first language. The text is rife with poor grammar, misspellings, awkward phrases, and stuff that doesn't make sense. This project desperately needs an editor/proofreader. Text is vital for visual novels.

    The story starts kind of generic, but the nudism twist is interesting. Honestly, the cliches are fine too: the writing just needs to be fixed.

    The visuals are gorgeous, however! Sex acts have looped animations. The renders looked high-quality and beautiful to me. I'm almost tempted to give 4 stars just because of them--and this is coming from someone who *greatly* prefers 2dcg to 3dcg.

    I'll be watching this thread. Hopefully the devs get an editor/proofreader because I would happily raise my rating if the writing gets fixed.
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 4592215

    Great start to this game the overall premise of the game is amazing a class is forced to go to a nude beach to instill body "positivity" wink wink. The story so far is great does a good job of including a good backstory as well as great graphics and character development. Did I mention the great graphics? Good job dev I look forward to future updates.