VN - Ren'Py - Nudist School [v0.19] [Elsa]

I'll have to admit, the renders carry this game, the plot is okay and the dialogue needs proofreading as mentioned by others, but it's solid enough.
Would've been a 3 star review but as previously mentioned, the renders are pretty great and I'm bumping up the rating to 4 stars because of it

Rating v1.0

I would love to rate this game higher, but... I have to assume that English is not the dev's first language. The text is rife with poor grammar, misspellings, awkward phrases, and stuff that doesn't make sense. This project desperately needs an editor/proofreader. Text is vital for visual novels.

The story starts kind of generic, but the nudism twist is interesting. Honestly, the cliches are fine too: the writing just needs to be fixed.

The visuals are gorgeous, however! Sex acts have looped animations. The renders looked high-quality and beautiful to me. I'm almost tempted to give 4 stars just because of them--and this is coming from someone who *greatly* prefers 2dcg to 3dcg.

I'll be watching this thread. Hopefully the devs get an editor/proofreader because I would happily raise my rating if the writing gets fixed.

Great start to this game the overall premise of the game is amazing a class is forced to go to a nude beach to instill body "positivity" wink wink. The story so far is great does a good job of including a good backstory as well as great graphics and character development. Did I mention the great graphics? Good job dev I look forward to future updates.