VN - Ren'Py - Obsessed Lucy [Update 2] [VNGTrash]

Reviewing as of Update 2

Pros:

• Big fan of how the MC and Lucy are made. Not only are their designs really good for AI, their character is well done.
• I like how the characters talk to each other and the conversations always feel on edge and keeps the reader enthralled.
• The menu design is really well done, very unique.
• The SFX are done well
• There are some choices that influence certain scenes
• There's options to disable certain kinks if you don't wanna see a certain one
• Around 1 hour to complete

Cons:

• With AI comes some inconsistent models. Sometimes Lucy has bigger breasts in some scenes and in other scenes it looks like she has smaller ones for example.
• No gallery
• There's a lot of dead space in the game with either no music or SFX going on, making it feel weird
• Progression is incredibly fast but hopefully future updates change this
• Not sure what the danger meter really does and if there's any implications to keeping it low or not.

Conclusion:

This game is definitely not finished and will need some more updates before it becomes something solid. While it uses AI, the models are above average for an AI game and there's something here that a lot of other games don't have. I recommend playing it or waiting for a couple updates where the game really gets fleshed out.

PROS
+ The corruption meter MC has, or how FMC is constantly trying to have her way with him, obsessed with him like a Yandere, etc, is kind of interesting, scary, and funny, concerningly funny There was even an early-game ending where you refuse her, and have a ''Normal Family'' ending, which felt ''normal'' at first, but then you are shown a screen about how she talks it won't end like this, and acting all Yandere lol
+ Menu design is nice, and there are a lot of options.
+ FMC's design is quite hot and good; meanwhile, MC's design is quite cool looking as well.

CONS
- Dialogues feel a bit weird, might be a translation or proofreading issue, or something else entirely.
- Progression is a bit too fast and forced. If it weren't this fast, and their relationship development was done better, this game could have been way better.
- The game is mostly silent, adding non-copyright songs, etc, for fitting scenes, ambiance, etc, would be good.
- Next/Previous button at save/load screen is a bit too small, and too close to save/load slots, and you misclick a lot because of it; some fixing is needed.
- Since it's AI, it's a bit inconsistent, like proportions of characters changing between scenes, or they looking like different characters, or some scenes being a bit blurry/cloudy, etc.
- Everyone aside from MC & FMC is shown with black weird coloring, and no real design at all, and it looks weird.
- The game lacks background stuff in most scenes.

VERDICT
So, honestly, it's a decent AI game, but looking from the whole perspective of other games, it's average at best, with fixed cons it could be better tho.

the animations are AI-generated but at the highest quality, 20 out 10 enjoy the ride, no complaints about the artwork - would be nice to include more females, but apparently that is not part of the plan - still loving it

This one might be a turning point, guys.

While I'm usually not psyched about AI stuff, this is the first game I see where the clanker art and animation is superior to pretty near everything else out there. The rest of the game is simplistic and it feels more like a proof of concept, but what a benchmark to match!

The animations are almost perfect, with a wonderful variety of angles and scenes.

Should this author choose to make a more far-reaching VN with multiple characters and a full family's worth of love interests, it will be on par with the top promising artists that this site has ever seen (most of whom never fully delivered).

I wish VNGTrash the best and even hope you will choose to support them.

Tough choice between 4 and 5 stars.

Argument for 4: This VN overwhelmingly consists of MC hanging out at home with his sister POV-style, either flirting or fucking. That is, it's a one-note song--not much in the way of variety. Also, it's true the sister's AI body is inconsistent from render to render.

Argument for 5: Everything else. Between face, body, style, and personality (hot, silly, dirty, unhinged, dangerous, adorable, affectionate, obsessive psycho), the sister is one of the all-time great characters on this site, and the art is well-done.

If this is over soon, I'll definitely keep tabs on the dev to see what they do next.

The art is excellent--although sometimes the look of Lucy is inconsistent between renders and animations. The animations themselves are outstanding with plenty of angles and the looping is seamless and extensive. The story is incredibly simple, making it really easy to pick this game up and get into it quickly.

The simplicity and limited scope of the game's content and mechanics is one of its greatest strengths. The trade-off here is that it can feel limited at times when most other side characters aren't even fully rendered or their face isn't shown, so there's really only one relationship that matters. The other greatest strength is the design of Lucy. She's really captivating and the posing along with her curves and face are all done masterfully to allure you with every image.

Very good stuff, story is whatever but everything else makes up for it. It moves pretty fast and the art is AI but with all the other slop out there this is lowkey a gem. My only complaint is that the animations dont loop and only last a seconds but whatever. This is a 5/5. Would love to see more girls or other material from this dev.

Good AI art, no bullshit story. Wish more games would look like this / have this level on consistency and polish.

Would love to see this dev make something more ambitious storywise next time. Good luck to you!

Short and concise premise, straight to the point.

I don't think it's fair to evaluate this game in the general sense given its scope. Meaning, don't think about it as a restaurant with entrance and a course, but as a single, well-crafted meal, in this case, "meat"... literally.

Two strong obvious point, 1) the absolute cinema AI usage in animations especifically (still lacks some consistency in facial and body structures); and 2) the sort of "doki-doki" vibes with 4th wall break and MC interventation.

Maybe it evolves into something else someday? I would love to see this level of craftsmanship in perhaps more nuanced stories, build-ups and scenarios, best of luck.

It's quite rare for me to leave a review, but this time I'm leaving it only to increase its grade.
This is AI art, and that's the level of art that can be respected. Many games art is not even close to being compatible with this one.
From now on, everything changed for me. Before I was accepting some poor art and just called it "style", but from now on, if the quality of game arts isn't on the same level, then better use AI, cuz this one is really good quality.

Regardless of plot or story, I see this game as a showcase of AI art potential for all developers here, and I must commit, the quality is awesome!

Excellent AI CG Quality! May be one of the best AI game there is if not best, though it is still in it early phase. Will have to wait and see and hopefully it doesn't get abandoned like most quality game in past.

Checked this out because I liked the premise... AI art issue aside, this is a pretty decent VN and would recommend it to anyone who likes crazy clingy girls and sisters.

The writing could maybe use a little work... Or maybe it's just me. This is defiantly a VN with very little choices though. It would be nice if there were more choices in the early game and you could either fight/reject your sister more or embrace her quicker.

Also the AI art in this is actually really good, the sister is top tier.

#Update1

Yes it is AI Art, however, the buildup makes me want to see more of them.
Pacing is slightly fast, and I wished the mc choices would trigger multiple endings/outcomes.

Looking foreward to Update 2

absolute fucking delicious
It has best writing dialogues and story and very impressive things and it was best of everything but at mid game (after blowjob where mc is awake) was fast it was bad if you could give it time and expand that section would be nice (am just giving my take the game is awesome)
and the photo she takes it was very arousing part with pose add more please
and don't rush like that
this is very promising game

Carries more weight than expected

I not really into 2d and this game is no exception. Still, I have to concede that graphic wise, this game is ok and above IA made average.

The story is somewhat cliche, but develops ok, considering the premise of brother/sister incest. Maybe a father/daughter relationship would make more sense (overworked father that goes overtime to provide for his daughter after her mother died would be better suited than a late 20s brother in corporate business that works a lot, but has a bodybuilder physique).

Some people praise the fact there's no NTR, when it makes no sense at all for a story about an obsessed sister with psychiatric issues to end with her being alienated by a third person. For me, the most adherent inclusion should be several optional fetishes, as it fits the narrative that an obsessed sister would comply with almost anything his brother proposed. Also, it could open up the possibility of choice, as an end that reveals an even more corrupt brother does not contradicts the idea of "no way to avoid incest" at the end. Let's see as things unfold here.

For fans of the genre, it's rounded up as a 4 star . For players in general, it's just another game that should pick no interest.

review as of update one:

i simply love this one so far! really dig a good bro/sis con story and Lucy is straight fire! that girl is super hot! choices dont seem to have much consequence to them as of yet. the only difference being that if you choose to push Lucy away and have a "normal" relationship then the game ends in a pretty sad ending! i can see this getting into yandere territory in the later stages of the game and hope there will be options to keep Lucy from getting that crazy! maybe if you mess up that could be another bad end, but would really like to see a happy ending for these two!

so far the writing seems good and hope for more quality storytelling from future updates. the artwork is pretty awesome (and the main thing that drew me in to check it out)! Lucy is super sexy and that body is amazing! please keep the hairy vagina as i personally think thats a plus! i know some will argue that the art being AI makes it bad, but i personally like the look of AI art women! not that i normally check out the dudes in these types of games but couldnt help but notice the MC being obviously ripped and built like a WWE wrestler! for an office worker and a student, these two were blessed with amazing genes!

the only negative i have is that the game cock blocked me and ended just before they did the deed! now im over here eagerly waiting for the next update to see Lucy and the MC seal the deal! you might make there be more choice sections similar to the one where the mouse cursor would avoid the "resist" option when you tried to click it! you could add this as a way to combat Lucy only being intimate with the MC while hes drugged! would like to see it be more of a mutual relationship and this might be the conflict of the game! does the MC accept his sisters love and have a wholesome relationship making love to her or does he sit back and let her devolve into crazy obsessed yandere Lucy!

aside from being cockblocked at the end of the first part of the game here, id say this is a pretty great game/story so far! cant wait for more and would highly recommend for those that enjoy a good bro/sis con game!

Most likely the first 2d ai game i played that is not an ntr game.
I m not that into incest games but what i like about the game is its dedication on that one topic. so many other games try doing so many things and they cramp it into one game which ruins the experience. and also im a big fan of linear stories games where i can just sit back and enjoy a good story and not have to think too hard about whats happening.
All and all love the game and super exited to see where the dev takes the game.

Very straigthfoward linear story with a tsundere sister with quick development and very hot scenes.

Glad to see this level of quality in both the CGs and animations. I'm not a fan of AI but it was about time someone use it for good (quality vanilla incest games) instead of using it for evil (ntr games just kidding).

For what is worth, the game delivers what it promises. Kudos to the dev!

finally!
2D AI CGI and no NTR!
Top marks!
kinks are interesting. It doesn't matter that the game is linear.
Art looks good. And incest is always interesting.
I give the highest marks simply because I'm tired of cuckolds with their miserable vomit-inducing NTR, and here the game itself is not bad either.

Good game. The sharp themes of incest and yandere create an interesting picture. The narrative is pleasant, and although in places everything moves too quickly, it is still clear that these two care about each other and such a relationship did not appear out of nowhere. Good work with the AI and nice animations. The characters look great, although MC is so pumped up that he has a hump when lying on his stomach) In any case, I recommend this game and wish the developer good luck in bringing it to the final.