Where do I begin? The dialogues are so robotic that it looks like the author literally asked an AI, "Write some flirtatious lines for me."
Every "woman" falls for the MC and needs to musterbate every time they talk to him. The dev probably don't have any women in his life, family or otherwise, cus that's not how women behave or talk.
Then you have the general "story" filled with clichés, the coworker, the coffee shop barista, the neighbour and may be other I gave up on it. The MC has to go "Oh, she has a nice ass" or something 0.00009 milliseconds after meeting a woman that's now real people think after meeting someone new, but maybe that's just me.
But the renders are solid, even though every woman looks flawless silicon dolls, but that's every VN nowadays, all characters must have double D's and a huge ass. My recommendation, just install a gallery unlocker and do your fap, no reason to waste your time. It would be better if the Dev get a writer cus they deffo have the rendering skills, just no story telling skills.