HTML - Office Queen [v1.6] [Lady Developer]

Well, I'm just rating here but my complaints are the same as the others.
Barely no content, broken links, no gameplay, no choices. This thing was developed in a rush, without any testing. I don't know if the dev is capable of apparent evolution in the next few updates, and it's probably going to abandon it

Don't play this for choices, writing, consistency in Live action porn or in my personal opinion anything interesting. I want to say it's because it's such an early version but I have no idea and I don't see much of any potential here as opposed to some other 'games' on the saturated html stuff.

Poor language.
Barely any content.
Existing content is no good.
This game either need a lot of work, or euthanasia.

Not much else to say, but I'll slap in a few more characters to get this review live.

This review is for version 0.3
The game has imrpoved quite a bit, the interface is better and there is more content. The game is still too linear, it needs a lot more content and more polishing, but this is the right way to go, I'm looking forward to more updates.

You've given a rating of 5 because the game shows promise. While I acknowledge that the text may not be perfect, it's a minor issue that can be addressed. The developer seems to have a promising vision, and I genuinely hope they continue to work on this game, unlike some other developers who raise expectations and then abandon their projects.

1st release - not a lot here, and not a lot to like.
The bar for HTML based real life porn video games is fairly low - but even then, this "game" manages to be in the bottom 30% both in regards to quality and quantity.

The media chosen is fine and fits whatever is described somewhat.

The writing is pretty bad, even considering the ESL status of the author. The narration jumps between 2nd and 1st person with additional flashbacks and out-of-character sections.
It might be a good idea to make an effort writing in their native language, then having chatGPT translate and/or rewrite it.

The pacing is all over the place, e.g. the first day consists of getting up, blowing the husband, buying 1 outfit at the mall, checking out the park for a sec, then going to bed.

There isn't a single choice to make, it's basically "show graphic, click link, repeat".

I had high hopes because I genuinely like the scenario - this isn't it.

PROs: no grind, gifs are not the same as every other "real Porn" game.
Cons: 0 story development, extremely broken English, horrid dialog. EX:
Shopkeeper: Yes mam what do you want?
Daisy:I want an outfit for my office.
Shopkeeper:Look at this mam

Update: I've now played version 3.0, and everything that I said was a problem in the first release is still a problem in 3.0. I may give an update if this game makes it to few more updates. Seriously it's a dumpster fire that no one seems to care about enough to put out.

update for 0.5: the following should illustrate the dialog issues that persist in this abortion gone bad of a game: husband asking where she wants a money shot "my queen where would you like the taxes".

if it was possible to give this game negative stars, i would. Nuke it from orbit.