VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Old Friends and Public Transport [v0.0025] [Oppai Auteur]

I give five stars because the game is worth playing, not because I'm happy with the author .
The game has been reset. Before the reset, it had not been updated for more than half a year, and the progress of the story was very slow before the reset .
The characters are pretty good, and if you like big tits and butts, and don't mind the monotony of the story and the slow pace of updates, this game is for you .
Again, the author's update rate is very erratic, and I think the story of game has been jerry-build since it was first developed .

Horrendeous amount of empty small talk, minimal lewd content and that is badly made. Also phimosis is a medical condition, if you have normally functioning foreskin it will retract when the penis is fully erect. Basic stuff.

Its a shame as the game has some great character models, but save for 3 of the characters they have awful personalities Miranda, Pepper & Adriana are the most likable characters in the game but the story is overly focused on Katie who is hands down the worst character in the game, the game has been getting made for 3 years now & has very little content to show for it

I like all the character except katie it would be better if she had a different character model change around the tattoos different hair no piercings and different eyebrows and eyelashes.Just changing her all around would make this game better.It would be better if the game had more of a choice then this game would be better.


Pros:
Character models are really great (except Katie)

There are few grammatical errors

Cons:

Sex With ForeSkin Is not appealing whatsoever

Katie's Character model

Very little Porn and too much story

It is Too linear

Forced to much(For example The Main character is forcefully attracted to Katie)

The Mc could be more endowed considering how thick the female characters are

Pepper,Ariana,Miranda,Sarah and the boss at the Job Are all this game needs

Very little porn and too much story, plus what is there is not even that good. I skipped most of it and was still bored. Is this a script with added porn or smth?
I can understand that some might want a plot in their porn but here we have plot with a bit of porn.

The game models very nice so does the plot , found luckily while browsing on the site. But really happy with the game. Great game Dev. Hope to see more content with MILFs . Thanks so much for the game

v0.00058 - Minor Spoilers

I wish I could rate this game higher, because I've expected so much from it since I played the first release, but it just continues to disappoint me every time I play it (roughly once a year).

For starters, the presentation is sloppy. The main menu is nearly invisible; spelling errors are rampant; most lines aren't punctuated; the models frequently clip through their clothing; and in at least one instance, assets were jumping around in different locations in a scene with every change in the camera angle. These detractors didn't impact my experience greatly, nor am I docking many points from my rating because of them, but they stood out to me because the rest of the playing experience was sorely lacking.

The girls. This is entirely subjective, but I can't stand that so much time is spent on the two worst girls - Sarah and Katie - that we've been shown thus far. Only until the most recent update did we finally have a sex scene with someone other than those two, but by the time it rolled around, I just couldn't get that into it. Whenever you think that you can make progress with one of the other women in the game, there's some horrible interruption by the worst girls, and then the MC rushes to spend more time with them. Either the dev has his clear favourites, or the pacing of the game is flawed. There shouldn't be so much focus on just two characters when there are seemingly more to choose from.

My other nitpicks are that inner monologues are represented by quotation marks, and that the MC's dick looks like a bagworm. Whatever.

This title has a lot of potential, but I keep seeing it squandered with every update. The characters all started out with distinctively different personalities, and while they have retained them for the most part, their reactions in various situations are all too similar. Everyone takes their turns reacting with fake anger, or feigning embarrassment, or making the same flirty quips. It's as if every character is beginning to sound more like Sarah and Katie because so much time has been spent writing their dialogues.

I'll continue following this title because I'm looking forward to getting action with the other characters. I'll happily adjust my rating if future updates are more enjoyable, but more needs to be done in regards to the writing and presentation as well. Oh, and please seriously consider using a cut dick on the MC's model when he's supposed to be hard. The bagworm looks ridiculous when the MC is supposed to be 100%.

This game must be $$$ improved. It has very good renderds, text history is pleasant, and until development is quite slow, but quality still great I hope will not parked and go ahead for long time. I would like also to know if accept donations.

I can't emphasise enough how bad this game truly is, some of the ugliest characters on this site, bodies so unhuman like, they look ridiculous, terrible protagonist, their isn't one redeemable thing I can say about this game, not one of the characters is likable they all seem to be arrogant douchebags, think there is a grand total of 2 sex scenes between the protag & one of the worst characters in the game. it truly is one of the worst games I have seen on here

Great game, amazing girls, expecially the milfs! I'm waiting an update about sex with milfs. I don't like the two young girls, but the game is good. Maybe the developer could change the hairstyle of sarah and katy

OK just went through the whole thing. Actually hadn't touched it since 4325, you did great on the rerenders, especially for someone working for free. It can't have been easy, mad respect. The story is solid, pacing is good, relationship dynamics are natural, characters all have a lot of personality. The grammar is really distracting though, which is especially unfortunate considering how natural the flow is. I like the new content, the phone sex was great, I wasn't expecting much as it's not my cup of tea but you really knocked it out of the park. No criticism here. Just work on your grammar and spelling and you're golden.

Time for my 2cents on this.

First off, the writing is pretty good. Funny at times and aggravating at others.

I'm not a huge fan of Katie and I usually like redheads who are batshit. But, she takes the cake. All I want to do is dump her like Sarah did.

The renders are also pretty good. All the women are hot in the own ways. Sarah is hot as fuck. But, I do prefer muscle girls. Just wished her boobs were smaller

Not really a fan of huge boobs, but, the woman I like the most is Miranda. So, I get aggravated that I can't have her right the fuck now, but, I can wait.

Back to Sarah again. Hot as fuck, with a temper to go with it. Which is why I can wait on Miranda. Sarah would kill the MC right now. lol

So, why did I give this a 5 star if I have things that bother me in this game? Because it's good. Despite the things that bother me about it.

There's my 2cents.

This isn't really a game seeing as you have practically no choice in what you do. Whether or not you like Katie and Sarah so far the story has really only been about them which for me personally I haven't liked. The characters that interest me are Miranda, Pepper, and Madison, but instead I'm forced to do shit with the characters that I want to drop as soon as possible. The renders are decent, but also this game has been progressing at a really slow rate. I might continue following the game, but so far it's been pretty disappointing.

This game has some good characters that you'd love to pursue... too bad it's also more of a kinetic novel where you're forced to be with an annoying cunt. Good luck to the dev with his game, but Katie and also Sarah annoy me so much that I can't play this game further. (The fuck was with the gut punch?)

This game sounds interesting by having black characters as the romantic interest but the game is all about some redhead emo that we have no choice but to go out with. its as if the guy forgot the real reason were here. Its insta love and no build up or anything. This creator did a bait and switch

Nice story but as many people said already feels more like a story and not a game do to the fact that there are so few choices that can be made by the MC.

I would like to say that maybe in the future to pay attention to small things, as Pepper dress on day 3 when she brings coffee to the MC and Ariana. Also, every time she talks you see her with the coffee in hand but when the others talk the coffee is on the table, is there a rule that she can't speak if she doesn't hold the coffee?

7 days of the story said already but there are just 2 sex scenes and both with the same person? I understand that normally a game, a story should be said too and not have sex scenes every 2 seconds but I think you overdid it a bit.

Maybe in the future also you can let everyone choose the name of the MC this also would fall in the category of the game and not story.

Keep up the good work so far and maybe if you know how to make them, you can try to put some animation in the sex scenes. That will make the game look a lot better.

Good stuff. If the good range of models look appealing to you and you're looking for a casual fun romp then it's for you. No complex choices, a lot of teasing and build up and some excellent chemistry between characters.

Doesn't have music and animations. No technical or language issues as far as i could tell. Try it.

Hardly anything on 'milf' side of it. Other than showing them nudes talking to themselves, no interaction with MC. Main focus is normal bf-gf story. Also, not a big fan of muscular girls so that had been put off for me as well. To each his own though.

The renders are unbelievably great and the MILF's actually look like older women. The story is great too, and you can never go wrong with really fit women in my book. There is so much to love in this game and I hope the Dev can keep finding the time to work on it. Love this game!

Awesome start. Shame it does not continue. Lighthearted story that is making me laugh my ass of. Hope it will continue soon. This would get a lot of patrons if put on patreon or subscribestar or the like.