TomVanGrieken
Newbie
- Apr 2, 2020
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It seems I can not send you a personal message through Patreon if I'm not subscribed to you. But whatever, I'll just post it here. 
First of all: this game has the potential to be PERFECT! Keep up the good work! I never, ever gave money for like any creator (of anything) I do not know. But this game might be worth it.
I have some questions and feedback about the game. I'd like to say that you do whatever you want with my feedback. Like I said, you're doing great anyways.
For me the most important question is: will there be pure sex-scenes eventually? And If yes, will they be animated?
Then some things that involve the character Tinkerbell:
- is seducing her and eventually getting her into your bed one of or even THE main goal of the game? If yes, I hope that won't happen while she's in her little fairy-form.
- I get the feeling the sexual tension between the MC and Tink is reduced after some time spent into the game?
- I find that Tink shows herself naked too early in the game. After the first time (she changing clothes) she only appears in her nightwear twice and once in a bath towel. Maybe her first reveal should be somewhat later?
- and finally, for me, Tink with that pirate hat is very, very unsexy. Once you found it she wears it all the time, even in the scenes she has to wake up in the middle in the night, in her underwear. Those scenes could be very sexy, but the hat is a huge turn off, for me.
Some more things:
- I really like that Snow White is somewhat tougher to make succumb to the MC's desire, while Anna is somewhat easier and more naïve (not sure if that's the right word). you should continue to do that with your other characters.
For example: Elsa is literally the Ice Queen. Maybe she could be the toughest to seduce/make succumb to the MC's and Tink's desires.
- for me there should be a way to see what items you have and how many you got of them. I sometimes lost track while collecting the clothes patches.
- maybe the drone-thing to get Coins etc. is not yet perfect, but you know that and it seems you're working on that.
- I'd like to see Tarzan's Jane, How To Train Your Dragon's Astrid and Hotel Transylvania's Marvis in the game. But your own ideas are already great!
- I kinda hope the characters do not stick with "I'm doing great, what an amazing day" (or something like that) when you're talking to characters. There would be so much you could do with that.
- On the computer there always should be an option to shut it off immediately, instead of having to exit 4 pages to get off it sometimes.
- The size of the boobs are great! Realistic, like it should be.
- And to close a personal wish: with Anna, if you ask her if you can touch her boobs during the corset-scene, I'd rather have an option to feel them softly instead of pinching her nipples. I'm more for softness. But that's pure personal.
Again, do what you want with these comments. You have to be happy about the game in the first place, and you should do as you please.
Greetings, Tom
First of all: this game has the potential to be PERFECT! Keep up the good work! I never, ever gave money for like any creator (of anything) I do not know. But this game might be worth it.
I have some questions and feedback about the game. I'd like to say that you do whatever you want with my feedback. Like I said, you're doing great anyways.
For me the most important question is: will there be pure sex-scenes eventually? And If yes, will they be animated?
Then some things that involve the character Tinkerbell:
- is seducing her and eventually getting her into your bed one of or even THE main goal of the game? If yes, I hope that won't happen while she's in her little fairy-form.
- I get the feeling the sexual tension between the MC and Tink is reduced after some time spent into the game?
- I find that Tink shows herself naked too early in the game. After the first time (she changing clothes) she only appears in her nightwear twice and once in a bath towel. Maybe her first reveal should be somewhat later?
- and finally, for me, Tink with that pirate hat is very, very unsexy. Once you found it she wears it all the time, even in the scenes she has to wake up in the middle in the night, in her underwear. Those scenes could be very sexy, but the hat is a huge turn off, for me.
Some more things:
- I really like that Snow White is somewhat tougher to make succumb to the MC's desire, while Anna is somewhat easier and more naïve (not sure if that's the right word). you should continue to do that with your other characters.
For example: Elsa is literally the Ice Queen. Maybe she could be the toughest to seduce/make succumb to the MC's and Tink's desires.
- for me there should be a way to see what items you have and how many you got of them. I sometimes lost track while collecting the clothes patches.
- maybe the drone-thing to get Coins etc. is not yet perfect, but you know that and it seems you're working on that.
- I'd like to see Tarzan's Jane, How To Train Your Dragon's Astrid and Hotel Transylvania's Marvis in the game. But your own ideas are already great!
- I kinda hope the characters do not stick with "I'm doing great, what an amazing day" (or something like that) when you're talking to characters. There would be so much you could do with that.
- On the computer there always should be an option to shut it off immediately, instead of having to exit 4 pages to get off it sometimes.
- The size of the boobs are great! Realistic, like it should be.
- And to close a personal wish: with Anna, if you ask her if you can touch her boobs during the corset-scene, I'd rather have an option to feel them softly instead of pinching her nipples. I'm more for softness. But that's pure personal.
Again, do what you want with these comments. You have to be happy about the game in the first place, and you should do as you please.
Greetings, Tom