VN - Ren'Py - Completed - One Night in 7612: Part One [v0.33] [Mr. Bojangles]

I'm sorry I didn't understand the key tension in this world. The sex scene was very very well done! But it dragged on and on and on and on. My copy didn't allow me to use the skip key ("control") on my keyboard ever.

Good luck in the future!

Wonderful visuals. Story is clearly defined, although it's understandable that the topic might be an immediate trigger for some people but nonetheless there's good potential here.
Sex scenes can get a little draggy. I suggest breaking it up with short bursts of convo or... i dunno do anything that would'nt make the player just sit and wait while watching.
Anyways, Looking forward to the next update.

The shaky screens were annoying. The animated text sucks. The instant text option exists for a reason. "Bouncer guy" can be shortened to bouncer. No one says "cashier guy" or "police officer guy." A job title already covers the fact that you're talking about a human. I got a game over quickly after commenting on the bouncers' names, and I was grateful. The few minutes of play I experienced weren't at all enjoyable, and I don't care what's happening inside that place.

Interesting start for a new developer. Animations are decent. Most of the humor is okay. My main complaints are the MC being cringy at times and then the sex 'minigame' just felt it went on for too long. Wish the scenes had dialogue or something more.