Ren'Py - One Pump Chump [v0.4.0a] [TwistedScarlett]

Solid 5

- good story
- very good artstyle
- hot h scenes, some could be a bit better but its not bad
- good pacing
- good enough combat, although dmg numbers, visuals and few other small details could be improved
- talent trees, who doesnt love that

Only downside is that its not yet completed but thats common with games nowdays.

I really liked this game!
I like games where you can upgrade your character and this does that with most powers having 3 options.
I like that, built into the whole premise, there aren't any looped and repeated scenes.
There is a ton of content so far, I can't believe how much work has gone into this considering it is only 0.4.
I like the art, character of the main girl (I chose Tempest), I like the writing and the fighting is some of the best I have seen in AVNs.

A few suggestions :

Give me the option to either remove or hide the UI, please
Super minor suggestion - Not sure if I am the only person who prefers blood when taking virginity, but it's something I feel ads gravitas to the scene.

I don't want to suggest anything else about scenes Dev... You have things covered.

Really looking forward to the next update!

[v0.3.0]

Incredible visuals, great story, good gameplay, minor (kind of personal) nit-picks.

My few complaints:

• stat-locked choices;
• unique, one-time, exclusive rewards
  (that also require fully exploring previously mentioned stat-locked choices);
• upgrades that come with downgrades
  (at times conditionally worse than base skill);
• the (not real) time limit;
• skill up = unclear amount of stat up.

Fully trust the quality. Will absolutely play it again when finished.

Great artwork and excellent writing. I love the portrayal of the characters, the world is exciting, too!
Truly an exceptional idea and execution, more content like this is needed on this site filled with lazy writing and boring ideas.
Am a fan from now on

One of my more favorite renpy games because it's more gameplay but still story like. Plus it's nice that you don't actually need to grind and can just use the cheats. Other than that this is just to finish the 200 character requirement lll

Story is quite nice, CGs are good and varied, no NTR, combat is interesting and seemingly getting better, art is quite good. I think this is well worth playing even if you don't know the One punch man universe.

This game is still in it's early stages, but so far the art is a high quality. The dev has a cheat menu built in so you don't have to grind. I wish there were more sex acts with the monsters like Anal, but this game is still in it's infancy so there's a lot of room for growth.

Overall, this is an easy 5 star rating for me. Hopefully the game doesn't go in a long hiatus like a lot of promising games do.

This game is okay but clearly not what other reviews let it seem. The background story is extremely small. The game gets into a repetitive cycle very early (day go battle, night choose new sex scene). There are a dozen of girls with huge tits, but the only actual character you interact sexually with is the loli green-haired girl. Other than that it's a very boring and overdone turn-by-turn FF-like combat game which has no interest at all. However it has to be said that the art is very good. It's still very early, so time will tell. But for now, only invest time in this if you're into loli and boring turn-by-turn combat. The other reviews seem to be fans of the devs who don't know what actual good games they are missing.

Tatsumaki is hot and I like the grind to build up Hero too. I wish there was an endless way to grind, get all equipment/passives/helpers, constantly climb the hero rankings/farm rep for both factions, and some endgame content where I upgrade the city or whatever. At the moment the four areas just have a repeatable fight once you fully explore them giving like 60 currency per win, when I already get 850 daily from maxing out the income skilltree, it'd be nice if fighting income ramped up more aggressively to encourage going to new areas earlier, fighting tougher enemies, and investing into combat stuff earlier imo, because I'll just farm the first stage until my OP build is complete then go to new areas just to collect passives/skill points. Hero is a damn cultivator growing stronger by breathing, keeping a small army in his dantian (I have a shark, goblin, siren, and imp following up my attacks sometimes), and buying magical artifacts (I only got a 4% crit ring, but would love getting the option to buy a bunch more stuff). It'd be cool if interacting with Garou later in the story unlocked a martial arts skill tree

I'd like it if fully exploring a zone unlocked the option to select the event I want to trigger so I can mix-and-match passives or farm stat points. Or just unlock certain locations like the moth girl who sells artifacts or the fighting ring. The $2500 you get at the start of the game is a lot too, unless there are a lot of outfits/sex dungeon things planned

There's a lot of content because Hero and Tatsumaki start fucking early and often, there's basically no pussyfooting or focus splitting, they're already talking about what they'll do after retiring as heroes and shit, I could fully see a marriage ending in like 0.5. I like it this way, it's basically a romance route with some monster girl scenes here and there you can skip, at least for now. There's a villain monstergirl who explicitly wants to cuck Tatsumaki but it'll probably be fine

good gameplay and great scenes. i usually only play games that are fully animated but i thoroughly enjoyed this game. please update soon!
good gameplay and great scenes. i usually only play games that are fully animated but i thoroughly enjoyed this game. please update soon!

The game is fun, the characters are fun (Tatsumaki is great), and the art is fantastic. I'm not even sure what could be improved besides the game being more complete, and even that seems to be progressing quickly.

I thought it was really good! I just thought the scenes with the monster girls could be longer in general, they're usually one scene with some dialogue. It's two clicks and they're over. But the relationship with Tatsumaki is really good, I'm looking forward to more!

this is adorable tho the cutsens can be more spaded out as it feels like 5 secs between doing the explore and more tatumaki overall it is adorable and cant wait to see more there could be a bit more combat becuse it feels just thuked in there without much effect

It's a cute and wholesome game with great character interaction and fun fighting mechanics.
love the art and the dialogue and i also love the part where you can slowly see actual canon progressing along with the game as a backdrop.
I'm hoping it'll get even more fleshed out as it continues development and fulfils it's potential as a gem

A good story, well written with great art. I epsecially love the little after sex talks with tatsumaki, really fleshing out her character. I feel a bit weird having additional sex scenes with the monsters, but that is basically more praise for the central romance that i feel like im cheating whenever i do it.

I'll be honest, my expectations going into this were pretty low, but decided to give it a try based on the reviews and I'm glad I did.

Great art, fun mechanics and the pacing is good. What sets it apart from most other VN's though is the writing. It's excellent, simple as that. It makes it feel as natural as a game like this realistically could be, and actually makes you care about the story, which is something that's becoming increasingly rare for me as I play more VN's.

This one is a gem. Looking forward to future updates!

It's good. Shockingly good.
One thing that I tend to focus on in VNs, especially parody's, is dialogue, and this is up to snuff. Dialogue feels like what you want to it be, and a little more.
The combat is pretty good too, same with the leveling system. As this is a very early version I cannot speak much into choice variety and story paths, but it looks promising.

I really just cant get enough of Scarletts writing is amazing.
It is still in really early development and maybe it gets a bit easier to handle the lust bar the longer the game goes on, being even useful if you got the skills to use it as a factor for attacks but overall im really looking forward to see this one get updated!~

Glad to see someone make this type of game nowadays,very fun and lighthearted. The characters personalities and dialog are actually good and the art is GOATed.
Looking forward to see what the dev will make of this game, keep it up.

Really sad to see a few folks confusing the amazing art to be AI generated.
The art is really beautiful and the story is decent. I love the added side characters, and? it's just a demo!
Looking forward to the full version, good luck and have fun on the game development!