VN - Ren'Py - One Twisted Fantasy [v0.095] [Zelltin]

VERSION: 0.095
SUMMARY: Ok, but not great
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following are my own criteria and may require more context, so keep an open mind.

1. Models: 4
2. Animations: 0
3. General Visuals: 4
4. Characters:3
5. Story/Pacing: 3
6. Writing/Dialogue: 3
7. UI & Gameplay: 3
8. Content Quality: 3
9. Sounds & Music: 3
10. H-Content & Fetish: 0

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Models are not bad looking, at least what I believe are the LIs
2. General renders are not bad either.
3. Writing is decent and reads well enough
4. Story seems fairly simple but interesting enough

CONS:

1. Medieval setting, yet the MC talks like he is in a game simulation. He speaks of leveling up and when getting XP he reflects as to why etc. This is a weird thing to do and breaks immersion, the player should be reading a story, not driving a character that talks about his XP gain like its the most normal thing ever. "systems, levels and XP" are not known terms outside a game and have no place in this story, unless the MC is actually playing a fantasy game.
2. Very short, too short to really give a good review.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

• Card, combat system is not horrible, but not sure how good it really is, it does seem a bit flimsy and not fleshed out enough, but need to play more first.

Will need to revisit my review later to see if any meaningful content has been added. For now, its OK, but only just....