It's pretty and a fun story. but a few problems.  First lets start with some positive things: The models are gorgeous and the story is well written minus a few typos here and there, and the music is not bad.
The downsides though are that while the models look good, you notice after awhile they all are the same base, different hair, different dresses, different eye color, but everything else is the same. They could all be twins.
The main  thing though that has me dock the rating is actually the choices. Basically your choices don't matter. You're expected to exhaust all choices before "moving on to the next plot", so the choices don't actually exist.
The only thing that seems to be *actual* choices is how you close out to one of the endings. But everything else just leads to that goal with nothing mattering before you decide your ending.