VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Onii-chan Asobo [Final] [il Shi/ ilシ]

It's honestly pretty alright, but there's just a feeling of something being off. A sentence will be well written, far above the standard of this site, but then in the last few words they will seemingly pick the worst way to end the sentence. It's uncanny. The plot also does this, it's a nice basic sister teases you affair, but then something will be kinda jarring, and you wonder if it's going to turn all Doki Doki literature club, but nothing really comes of it and the game just moves on.

I don't think the story's exactly bad, it's just off. Honestly, I would recommend it if you like the art and little sisters. It's not a smooth ride, and it leaves a weird taste in my mouth, but it's not generic at least.

If not for lack of skip button i would rate this game 4/5. (think i used autoclicker long time ago to unlock it all). It actually has a lot of normal cg's related to the story which i quite liked. There are few sex scenes but i think they are hot enough. Typical play once and uninstall game. Art is super clean and hot, that's definitely the biggest strength of this project.

Art 4.5/5
Story - 3.5/5
Gameplay 0/5
Fapability 4.5/5
Originality 3/5

The art is top tier, the story is trash. No choices to speak of.
Seriously a middle schooler could have come up with a better story and the super cringe dialogue may be partially due to translation, but it's still pretty terrible.
Little sis is an adorable little psychopath though, and the art and voice make the few sex scenes worth a play for sure.
Just wish we could get a rewrite or better yet, a different game with the same artist.

The best h-game when it comes to art, one of the worst ones when it comes to the story. The story was so bad, so bland, so stupid and so weird, that I actually was suprised how anyone could come up with it and think that it would be a good fit for a game like that. If you want to play the game, don't read the text. Watch the pictures, and don't pay attention to the story, and it will be glorious.
I would give it 1\5 if not for the amazing art.

This is a kinetic novel so you don't have a choice at all that happens in this story. Art is definitely the strong side, though the story lacks in order to be rated 5/5.

The creator of this game has very good art, maybe one of the best when it comes to 2d art. The characters look nice and appealing, but there are few background images that get used, mainly because the story is mostly happening in his flat. While playing this I got the feeling that a character's behavior changed in the middle of the game. Some events in this game feel very unnecessary. There is also a plothole that never got covered. for a short game like this, I feel like this should've been covered.

Overall I would recommend this game because it doesn't take many hours to complete it, art is top-level, the story is not that bad.

3.5/5

Art was top tier, story was good esp. if you're into teasing that does actually come to the expected conclusion rather than blueballing.
Definitely unplayable without an autoclicker/spammer as gameplay pace is very dull and the VN writing in the VN is a bit boring.
Overall still 5 stars for a short VN because of the art and the story was good enough (when compared to other shit here) and the "gameplay" downsides could be averted easily.

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