VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Only a Dream [v2024-02-23] [tightbuns]

Good little effort on your first attempt! Nice little story but it has left you wanting more which, I suppose, is a good thing if you wanting to write a sequel. Who is this other character Norman (if I recall his name correctly)? What is happening to Anon's soul? The game was pointless trying to kick the dog's dick because there was no way you where going to stop it so he was going to get his wicked way but the poor bugger didn't knot Maddie... WTF!!!???
I would also suggest that when writing you use normal lettering, as you did, for speech. Use italics for when a character is thinking about something which I would guess Maddie was doing when talking to Anon's dick. Otherwise, if she is whispering then put... ***Whispering*** in front of the whispered speech.
Other than those little tips keep up the good work

Replayed (06/01/25) w/ minigame-skip mod and inces/beast patch

great complete package

• has a juicy plot to it without being flooded with text
• lots of renders/ scene to make the game feel alive
• the FMC makes a lot of ahegao and lewd faces
  • she is an absolute horn-dog, and I love it
  • this in turn leads to a rewarding playthrough
• the ending is well paced in terms of screentime of what we came for
• my issue with the game would be lack of animation, but the game substitutes with good-enough frame-by-frame crossfades
• it also only has music but lack of H sfx which would have been the icing on the cake here
• minigames weren't bad since there are scenes if you lose
• there was a little interactive spank scene which was great!

A very hot short story that delivers on the H. If you like sleep sex, FoM, try this! The bj under blanket is such a hot niche

This game is 11/10! render quality is top notch, the history is pretty entertaining and the minigames are hilarious.

Straigh on subbed to your patreon. Please keep them coming dev, preferibly with larger scope and more besty content

fun little story, on rails for the most part, but as a first sample of what he can do, is amazing. resolutions and graphic bulk in renpy causes mild lagging issues, but that's more of a problem due to the engine than anything else imo.

Its short. But it's hot. The girl is super hot. And super thirsty. And she manifests her thirst on her neighbor boy. Its so very much better than it needs to be. Dev has some real talent. I'm guessing this is a bit of a dry run to flex some rendering and coding muscles. I'm very much looking forward to what he works on next.

One of the best short games on this website. The presentation, dialogue, expressions and camera work are just perfect for what type of game this is. It has humor, degeneracy, great visuals and nice angles. The sexual content is short but hot, and the well-written dialogue only elevates the porn. I love it when games include muffled/messy speech during certain acts (like deepthroating), as it increases the immersion and shows attention to detail. This game has personality, which is a rare thing to see.

I honestly could gush about this game for a good minute, but you get the idea. Brilliant work.

A very good story telling shame its was a very short story I was avoiding them before but trying was a good time having it ... I hope working on long female mc game like good girl gone bad more on amazing level of story like this ...

short but fun, the dev has potential.

I really liked it, even this short it has an interesting story and events without unecessary amounts of text. The scenes were nothing special, but still pretty hot. The minigames were fun, the humor was well placed.

I do think the faces could use some more work but that might just be personal opinion because i don't like mcs nose, otherwise the graphics and animations are good.

Audio is just some background music, it felt fitting, but nothing special and no special sounds or moans during scenes.

also the fetishes including the dog and creampie is something i enjoy.

Good luck to the dev, i'm sure you will make some good stuff in the future