Ren'Py Open Your Mouth — Indie VN / Choice-Based Story Demo

johnCR7

New Member
Jul 1, 2025
13
7
13
eileen.png

Open Your Mouth — Indie VN / Choice-Based Story Demo

Overview:

Walk under the city lights, meet new friends, and uncover secrets on a quiet rooftop night. Every choice shapes your story, leading to multiple endings and unique interactions with characters like Eileen and Mai.

Thread Updated: 2025-09-14
Release Date: 2025-09-14
Developer: Your Name / Discord / Itch.io / Website

Censored: No
Version: 0.01
OS: Windows, Mac
Language: English
Genre: Visual Novel, Choice-Based, Story

Installation:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Changelog:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Developer Notes:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Known Problems:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.


DOWNLOAD:

  • DOWNLOAD

    Windows:


    Mac:

    Windows:

    Mac:




Movies & TV 9_13_2025 8_06_28 PM.png screenshot0004.png screenshot0003.png screenshot0001.png
 
  • Like
Reactions: KinkSheep

johnCR7

New Member
Jul 1, 2025
13
7
13
Hi everyone!


This is my very first game, called Open Your Mouth. I’m still a beginner in game development and learning as I go.


I’d really appreciate any tips, advice, or feedback you can give me about making games, writing stories, or improving my characters and art.




View attachment 5247837

Open Your Mouth — Indie VN / Choice-Based Story Demo

Overview:

Walk under the city lights, meet new friends, and uncover secrets on a quiet rooftop night. Every choice shapes your story, leading to multiple endings and unique interactions with characters like Eileen and Mai.

Thread Updated: 2025-09-14
Release Date: 2025-09-14
Developer: Your Name / Discord / Itch.io / Website

Censored: No
Version: 0.01
OS: Windows, Mac
Language: English
Genre: Visual Novel, Choice-Based, Story

Installation:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Changelog:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Developer Notes:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Known Problems:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.


DOWNLOAD:

  • DOWNLOAD

    Windows:


    Mac:

    Windows:

    Mac:




View attachment 5247836 View attachment 5247851 View attachment 5247852 View attachment 5247853
Hi everyone!


This is my very first game, called Open Your Mouth. I’m still a beginner in game development and learning as I go.


I’d really appreciate any tips, advice, or feedback you can give me about making games, writing stories, or improving my characters and art.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Lerd0

HELIO CESAR

Well-Known Member
May 30, 2018
1,451
3,186
378
I can only think about this video when i see the phrase "open your mouth":

The girls art is looking cute, i would say maybe use some app to make the background match their style or something like that. And i personaly prefer a more plot focused overview that gives us insights of what is or its going to be in it.

If you want It to uploaded here properly i advise making a post in the game request forum, but maybe report it asking for relocation or an uploader could take it. (Looking at you Lerd0 :HideThePain:)

Good luck with the game mate.
 
  • Hey there
  • Heart
Reactions: johnCR7 and Lerd0

Lerd0

Message Maven
Uploader
Donor
Jul 29, 2017
14,342
185,732
1,046
I can only think about this video when i see the phrase "open your mouth":

The girls art is looking cute, i would say maybe use some app to make the background match their style or something like that. And i personaly prefer a more plot focused overview that gives us insights of what is or its going to be in it.

If you want It to uploaded here properly i advise making a post in the game request forum, but maybe report it asking for relocation or an uploader could take it. (Looking at you Lerd0 :HideThePain:)

Good luck with the game mate.
...ill just make the thread for him.....
....and he can take it after......if he wants....
https://f95zone.to/threads/open-your-mouth-v0-01-johncr7.270391
 
Last edited: