indeed, a kinetic novel, by definition not a game. Happy that it's tagged correctly, my bad for missing that. Still shouldn't say "game" in the description though.
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I won't rate the game/kinetic novel because it is in such an early stage and I don't want to give you a 1 Star review. But I still want to give you my feedback. I hope you don't take offense but you should have test it by someone else before releasing. I like the idea that you try something different but it has quiet a few problems. And for me there two critical ones that destroys the experience for me.
1. The common Ai problem. Some pictures have huge mistakes(Mirror in the car, Doorframes etc.). And at least one picture doesn't make sense at all (MC takes picture of Sofia in the park but it is a selfie?).
2. In this is my top problem with your game. So many times it doesn't make sense. And I am not talking about that both women do dessous pictures in the first night they met MC. I think specially in text messenger games like yours you have to really pay attention to details because you dont have pictures that help the player to understand what is going on. What do they have to imagine and so on. And if you read something like "MC: Sorry I was driving. Sonia:"Why did you reply so late?" and as a player you just go like "Huh? That doesn't make sense." And this feeling I really had lot. And the game is just like 5-10 Minutes?
Another thing would be the horniness of sofia. That's personal preference. I don't mean you have do a slow burn game but Sofia is going from 0-100 in 2 seconds
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Best of luck with your game. Looking forward for future releases.
1. The common Ai problem. Some pictures have huge mistakes(Mirror in the car, Doorframes etc.). And at least one picture doesn't make sense at all (MC takes picture of Sofia in the park but it is a selfie?).
2. In this is my top problem with your game. So many times it doesn't make sense. And I am not talking about that both women do dessous pictures in the first night they met MC. I think specially in text messenger games like yours you have to really pay attention to details because you dont have pictures that help the player to understand what is going on. What do they have to imagine and so on. And if you read something like "MC: Sorry I was driving. Sonia:"Why did you reply so late?" and as a player you just go like "Huh? That doesn't make sense." And this feeling I really had lot. And the game is just like 5-10 Minutes?
Another thing would be the horniness of sofia. That's personal preference. I don't mean you have do a slow burn game but Sofia is going from 0-100 in 2 seconds
. Best of luck with your game. Looking forward for future releases.
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Appreciate the review mate, I will improve Images/plot and fix any inconsistent/immersion breaking pictures with every chapter release.I won't rate the game/kinetic novel because it is in such an early stage and I don't want to give you a 1 Star review. But I still want to give you my feedback. I hope you don't take offense but you should have test it by someone else before releasing. I like the idea that you try something different but it has quiet a few problems. And for me there two critical ones that destroys the experience for me.
1. The common Ai problem. Some pictures have huge mistakes(Mirror in the car, Doorframes etc.). And at least one picture doesn't make sense at all (MC takes picture of Sofia in the park but it is a selfie?).
2. In this is my top problem with your game. So many times it doesn't make sense. And I am not talking about that both women do dessous pictures in the first night they met MC. I think specially in text messenger games like yours you have to really pay attention to details because you dont have pictures that help the player to understand what is going on. What do they have to imagine and so on. And if you read something like "MC: Sorry I was driving. Sonia:"Why did you reply so late?" and as a player you just go like "Huh? That doesn't make sense." And this feeling I really had lot. And the game is just like 5-10 Minutes?
Another thing would be the horniness of sofia. That's personal preference. I don't mean you have do a slow burn game but Sofia is going from 0-100 in 2 seconds
Best of luck with your game. Looking forward for future releases.
Any review and experience shared will help me a lot, also means a lot to me when someone plays the game. Much love, have a good one.
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No competition = No fun. Your game, your choice. I will pass this one.
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There are lots of phone games with NTR, go play those ones
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Showing a hot chick getting plowed by a bbc and her talking about how they went all night and she's in tears because of it... yeah dude, that isn't going to win over the folks who don't like NTR and will only serve to draw in folks who like that stuff and they will ask for either more of it or sharing/swinging and such (as seen already in a few posts here). Whatever the reason you have in your head for how this "doesn't count as," or "isn't really," NTR aren't going to fly with most folks who are anti-NTR. One of the problems a lot of people have with NTR is ultimately that they have no interest in seeing some random other dude's dick plowing a chick, the reasons and dressing for it are often just used to cloud the issue and as an excuse to insult folks who aren't actually into seeing random dude's dicks and their conquests forced in their face. So best of luck, but whatever reason you felt like that pic needed to be shared it won't win anyone over who isn't already into NTR and NTR adjacent fetishes and having it will just draw in fans of that type of stuff who will be disappointed that you claim not to be making that stuff and/or won't have more such pics. And if you will have more such content then just be honest that this is just another NTR phone game like the many others on the site.
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Hey, mate I see a lot of requests for NTS/NTR, I am trying to cook something different and its very early and so let me cook. please give it a taste.
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Yeah go on with NTR NTS please, it's always welcome
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I understand, but I have good vision and synopsis how the story will progress, I am not trying to win folks over by bait. This is very early stage of production, and I have a lot of Ideas for improvements in future chapters with script/art improvements for reworks from feedback, but I will not be going down the path of NTS/NTR. So, I hope you give it a try and comeback for future chapters.
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someone remind me in 3-6 months on how this went please..
dev also i realise u want money and u do u but i dont like how presentation is so thin and then first thing u say in dev note is "please join patreon".. like what is roadmap, timeline, planned content..
sigh i wish devs would put out some bigger initial chapters and more info about how game will progres before they ask money..
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I will release a Roadmap and sneak peek next week, as for chapter 2 I am targeting early Feb for Patreon and mid Fed for public release. I hope you will come and try it again
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Games like these usually don’t work well without different routes. That’s why your story needs to be really good. There are already so many phone simulators like this, so I’ll wait for a few updates before trying it. Good luck with your project!
When I saw new phone simulators without ntr tag, I was happy. Finally, this type of game for vanilla lovers, but then there's 5 pic... All this holy war NTR vs anti-NTR is going on comments every day, and we are losing my vanilla brothers. Soon, the only porn we could jerk of to will be rock paintings of women with big tits, which our ancestors left to us.
I liked it. It's fast. And linear, which i like not to take some pointles desisions evry 10 s. It runs smooth has semi ok story. A litl fast, but i'ts frist relese. Looks good exept why pink eyes.. haha anyway it's sexy. I hope next chapters are longer.
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Cheers for the feedback mate, I will give you a longer chapter 2. Please be back again next month for chapter 2, thanks for the positive feedback means a lot.