VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 FULL] [Eva Kiss]

[lucadiadis]

You never had to cheat on Ian to invite Louise tho. I'm pretty sure.

fatpussy123 has proven you do. I find it really frustrating. It spoils my "pure but kinky" Lena path.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

And yes, coomer brain rot is very real; the corollary being any fetishes one is interested in (myself included), want to see every character involved in regardless of whether it fits in a story. "She should get pregnant!" "uhhh she's a 19yo evangelist..."

Yep. Can't knock em. We're all coomers here and the best of us provide some quality entertainment.
My absolute favorite are Mommysboii's arguments about how every single female in the game absolutely must have a path to cuck Ian.

 

[Leongen43]

Yep. Can't knock em. We're all coomers here and the best of us provide some quality entertainment.
My absolute favorite are Mommysboii's arguments about how every single female in the game absolutely must have a path to cuck Ian.

So for there to be balance between the protagonists, each man in this game would have to be able to get Lena pregnant without accepting responsibility, is that fair?

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

So for there to be balance between the protagonists, each man in this game would have to be able to get Lena pregnant without accepting responsibility, is that fair?

Dunno. You're speaking to the wrong poster on that one.

 

[Xupuzulla]

So for there to be balance between the protagonists, each man in this game would have to be able to get Lena pregnant without accepting responsibility, is that fair?

If the kid is black we know who is the father through.

 

[Slick Bean]

You are so far behind in this game, player. Dev introduced fan service some diverse cast members from her other game and made some more pandering small apearences of new unexplored guys to pander to this fetish of yours in the last updates - there are a lotta guys and Lena would deffinitely lose count of who and when got inside her - so many fetishits around this thread spinning their theories, easy to lose count of who did it when and who might the child resemble.

If the kid is black we know who is the father through.

 

[DeemLeem12]

You are so far behind in this game, player. Dev introduced fan service some diverse cast members from her other game and made some more pandering small apearences of new unexplored guys to pander to this fetish of yours in the last updates - there are a lotta guys and Lena would deffinitely lose count of who and when got inside her - so many fetishits around this thread spinning their theories, easy to lose count of who did it when and who might the child resemble.

Nah, the real plot twist that the dev is going to pull in the end is that Ian is still the father of Lena's black kid. We will find out that Ian's mother actually got fucked by a black man, and she got extremely lucky that only her whiteness expressed in Ian, so her husband never became suspicious. But Ian still has that black gene in him and it, extremely unluckily, expressed to his child with Lena.
This will satisfy both the vanilla and ntr groups, as Ian didn't get cucked by having Lena be impregnated by somebody else, but still ended up raising a black kid, unless the vanilla group is racist against black children of course.
This is also a thematic ending for the game. Ian's mother got so lucky that Ian looked like a regular white human, but to balance that luck, Ian got so unlucky that he got a black human with another white chick, a la 'Our Red String', strings of fate connecting them.

 

[jimul18]

I would love if the game got into some real depravity. For example with Lena and Seymour (i.e. the Dubai trip, escorting, hardcore modeling or more...) or bondage stuff with Axel, breadcrumbs in that direction have been spotted... It would even lend itself to a spin-off/sequel focusing on a corrupted Lena and an innocent younger protagonist (kind of like Holly) where you can repeat the cycle or return to the light. But sadly none of this this will happen. First because EK already said this game will be more tame than GGGB, though I don't know why cameos exist then (this only invites comparison) and secondly because the narrative structure (conflicting branches with Ian) prohibit this.

 

[BlandChili]

I would love if the game got into some real depravity. For example with Lena and Seymour (i.e. the Dubai trip, escorting, hardcore modeling or more...) or bondage stuff with Axel, breadcrumbs in that direction have been spotted...

The supposed trip with its three different destinations probably won't happen, at least outside of an ending slide showing Lena in an airport or some such. I think what you should read into that conversation is more that Lena can emphasize materialism and glamour with Seymour (her posh variable) and doing so will take escalating requests from Seymour in order to stay on his payroll.

So far these requests have all been about Lena pleasuring herself to Seymour's whim, right? Unless that changes I think the main direction that will go is that Seymour will expose Lena more publicly, not as in the middle of the street, but perhaps during social events with other "elites". My assumption has been that dramatic developments will occur whenever that happens in the presence of Axel and/or Ian.

It would even lend itself to a spin-off/sequel focusing on a corrupted Lena and an innocent younger protagonist (kind of like Holly) where you can repeat the cycle or return to the light. But sadly none of this this will happen. First because EK already said this game will be more tame than GGGB, though I don't know why cameos exist then (this only invites comparison) and secondly because the narrative structure (conflicting branches with Ian) prohibit this.

I wouldn't bet on Eva making direct spin-offs either. In spite of the recent deluge of cameos Eva very clearly wanted this game to be a separate thing from GGGB and all indicators during her Q&A's have suggested the same will be true of whatever next project she comes up with.

I'm not opposed to more perverted content appearing, really I think Eva has been somewhat slow with getting to anything really interesting recently, though the var epilogue was nice for that sort of thing. However, the Jack scene for example, more than anything, showed that people find it jarring when these perverted scenes come about artificially.

I have really wanted Lena to become more sexually expressive for a while, I personally dislike that everything has to be introduced by Ivy before Lena makes any moves. We got some options recently, groping Emma, getting with Jack and Marcel, flirting with Eli, so I kinda hope the bar scene will become one where Lena can explore casual sex again and hopefully Eli comes back for a scene or two in that regard too. I very much appreciated Lena actually coming across as an openly bisexual woman for once.
Hopefully we get some interesting content with Billy as well, and ideally that content doesn't depend on prior routes so those of us who don't fuck all the pricks from the early game can get in on the action.

 

[lucadiadis]

Nah, the real plot twist that the dev is going to pull in the end is that Ian is still the father of Lena's black kid. We will find out that Ian's mother actually got fucked by a black man, and she got extremely lucky that only her whiteness expressed in Ian, so her husband never became suspicious. But Ian still has that black gene in him and it, extremely unluckily, expressed to his child with Lena.
This will satisfy both the vanilla and ntr groups, as Ian didn't get cucked by having Lena be impregnated by somebody else, but still ended up raising a black kid, unless the vanilla group is racist against black children of course.
This is also a thematic ending for the game. Ian's mother got so lucky that Ian looked like a regular white human, but to balance that luck, Ian got so unlucky that he got a black human with another white chick, a la 'Our Red String', strings of fate connecting them.

Please give me the contacts of your dealer.

 

[lucadiadis]

The supposed trip with its three different destinations probably won't happen, at least outside of an ending slide showing Lena in an airport or some such. I think what you should read into that conversation is more that Lena can emphasize materialism and glamour with Seymour (her posh variable) and doing so will take escalating requests from Seymour in order to stay on his payroll.

So far these requests have all been about Lena pleasuring herself to Seymour's whim, right? Unless that changes I think the main direction that will go is that Seymour will expose Lena more publicly, not as in the middle of the street, but perhaps during social events with other "elites". My assumption has been that dramatic developments will occur whenever that happens in the presence of Axel and/or Ian.

I wouldn't bet on Eva making direct spin-offs either. In spite of the recent deluge of cameos Eva very clearly wanted this game to be a separate thing from GGGB and all indicators during her Q&A's have suggested the same will be true of whatever next project she comes up with.

I'm not opposed to more perverted content appearing, really I think Eva has been somewhat slow with getting to anything really interesting recently, though the var epilogue was nice for that sort of thing. However, the Jack scene for example, more than anything, showed that people find it jarring when these perverted scenes come about artificially.

I have really wanted Lena to become more sexually expressive for a while, I personally dislike that everything has to be introduced by Ivy before Lena makes any moves. We got some options recently, groping Emma, getting with Jack and Marcel, flirting with Eli, so I kinda hope the bar scene will become one where Lena can explore casual sex again and hopefully Eli comes back for a scene or two in that regard too. I very much appreciated Lena actually coming across as an openly bisexual woman for once.
Hopefully we get some interesting content with Billy as well, and ideally that content doesn't depend on prior routes so those of us who don't fuck all the pricks from the early game can get in on the action.

Which future bar scene are you referring to ? She at her parents and then go straight to the beach house right ?

 

[lucadiadis]

I have just noticed now that on his first scene, Stan wears a Battle Royale t-shirt. That makes him the coolest male character of the game hands down.

 

[BlandChili]

Which future bar scene are you referring to ? She at her parents and then go straight to the beach house right ?

I was referring to if Lena keeps working at the night club.

 

[SearingFive]

Which future bar scene are you referring to ? She at her parents and then go straight to the beach house right ?

He was talking about the nightclub "Blazer" bartending scene. It's a good place for Lena to make new acquaintances for casual hookups. Yeah, Lena will stay with her parents till Saturday and go back to the beach on Sunday.

 

[Leongen43]

I have just noticed now that on his first scene, Stan wears a Battle Royale t-shirt. That makes him the coolest male character of the game hands down.

If Robert wears Hello Kitty underwear, would he be more of a pussy loser than we think?

 

[gregonzole]

What do you need to trigger the sex scene with Jessica in the new update?

 

[Chartog]

EK we need more throat fucking scenes, if you read this thread. The Axel/Lena one was

 

[Marley300]

1st Status Report of the Year

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Happy New Year to everyone! I hope you had a nice (or tolerable enough) Christmas, and I'm happy to have you sticking around here

After the

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, I've continued to work in the follow up beach house event to bring it to you as soon as possible. I'm working in several areas at the same time:

• Planning: I'm going over different ways of structuring the events, deciding what to include and where, and what plot points need to be advanced, as well as thinking on different ways to showcase character development through particular scene and dialog. There are many interweaving threads to unravel and placing them in order and tying them together is a slow process and I end up modifying and adding scenes as I go along. That's why I found the best way not to spend a lot time planning for stuff that won't end up being useful is to progress with the writing at the same time.
• Writing: I've also started writing the new chapter and I've completed around 3500 lines of code (which is about half of the original Chapter 1 length). However, the branches are much more dense than at the early stages, which means to portray accurately a character's thoughts and actions in all possible permutations I have to be very thorough and account for a ton of variables. This makes some apparently simple scenes really complex, and progress can be slow... Right now that and managing the growth of complexity are the main challenges, but I feel it's within my ability to keep weaving the threads. I'm trying to keep it slow but steady.
• Art: The art is usually one of the things I tackle first, and used to draw all the scenes before starting the writing. With time, and with the game growing more complex and detailed, I've realized it's better if I develop the art as production advances. Creating the art normally means having the full scene prefigured in my mind, but now I'm taking a looser aproach to it and draw images for several scenes as they start coming together. I'm also outsourcing some illustrations, of which I only draw the character's heads, to speed up the process. So far I have drawn and comissioned around 40 illustrations, and I'm expecting to add quite some more.
• Business stuff: The part I hate dealing with, but that needs to be done. I've been talking about a Steam release for years now, but so far I haven't found someone reliable that could provide some marketing services to do it in an optimized way and such. I need to look into it seriously, but that would mean taking some time off development and I can't leave that alone for long, otherwise I'm afraid I will lose track of everything (and the longer I take to release the more stressful things become). But I'll get around that and other management stuff at some point!

As always, I will keep you posted as I continue making progress. This is still quite a chaotic phase of the creative process, but the first bits of the game are already coming together. For this year 2024, my focus is still on this project and I hope to provide you with quality and angaging content that's up to the standards ORS has set, and hopefully even surpass them.

Thanks for your support, and I hope you stick around for another turn around the sun!

 

[fatpussy123]

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1st Status Report of the Year

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Happy New Year to everyone! I hope you had a nice (or tolerable enough) Christmas, and I'm happy to have you sticking around here

After the

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, I've continued to work in the follow up beach house event to bring it to you as soon as possible. I'm working in several areas at the same time:

• Planning: I'm going over different ways of structuring the events, deciding what to include and where, and what plot points need to be advanced, as well as thinking on different ways to showcase character development through particular scene and dialog. There are many interweaving threads to unravel and placing them in order and tying them together is a slow process and I end up modifying and adding scenes as I go along. That's why I found the best way not to spend a lot time planning for stuff that won't end up being useful is to progress with the writing at the same time.
• Writing: I've also started writing the new chapter and I've completed around 3500 lines of code (which is about half of the original Chapter 1 length). However, the branches are much more dense than at the early stages, which means to portray accurately a character's thoughts and actions in all possible permutations I have to be very thorough and account for a ton of variables. This makes some apparently simple scenes really complex, and progress can be slow... Right now that and managing the growth of complexity are the main challenges, but I feel it's within my ability to keep weaving the threads. I'm trying to keep it slow but steady.
• Art: The art is usually one of the things I tackle first, and used to draw all the scenes before starting the writing. With time, and with the game growing more complex and detailed, I've realized it's better if I develop the art as production advances. Creating the art normally means having the full scene prefigured in my mind, but now I'm taking a looser aproach to it and draw images for several scenes as they start coming together. I'm also outsourcing some illustrations, of which I only draw the character's heads, to speed up the process. So far I have drawn and comissioned around 40 illustrations, and I'm expecting to add quite some more.
• Business stuff: The part I hate dealing with, but that needs to be done. I've been talking about a Steam release for years now, but so far I haven't found someone reliable that could provide some marketing services to do it in an optimized way and such. I need to look into it seriously, but that would mean taking some time off development and I can't leave that alone for long, otherwise I'm afraid I will lose track of everything (and the longer I take to release the more stressful things become). But I'll get around that and other management stuff at some point!

As always, I will keep you posted as I continue making progress. This is still quite a chaotic phase of the creative process, but the first bits of the game are already coming together. For this year 2024, my focus is still on this project and I hope to provide you with quality and angaging content that's up to the standards ORS has set, and hopefully even surpass them.

Thanks for your support, and I hope you stick around for another turn around the sun!

Sounds like EK hasn't made too much progress on Ian's part. Nothing wrong with that, it was the holiday season after all. Hope we get more concrete information some time February.

 

[Gato21]

Yep. Can't knock em. We're all coomers here and the best of us provide some quality entertainment.
My absolute favorite are Mommysboii's arguments about how every single female in the game absolutely must have a path to cuck Ian.

That, and his consistent, bordering on homoerotic, pedestalizing of Axel as some sort of Nietzschian ubermenschen, even though he is the biggest simp in the game. It is endearing in it's own weird way. I wish I had your patience; I just am lazy and have a hard time following him when he is schizo rambling with poor grammar, because it is funny. When it reaches paragraph length, my eyes start to glaze over.

That being said, thank you all, who ironically or unironically, and self-aware or not, provide me with free entertainment. You are partially the reason why I come back to this thread. Love you guys, no homo.

PSA: Capitalization and punctuation are your friends.