VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 FULL] [Eva Kiss]

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Triepslay

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GokutheG said:
If you mean having Holly sleep with Lena/Ivy she won't do that either I believe. In order to have Holly fall under Ivy's influence she has to sleep with her and that is something she doesn't do if she's dating Ian.
If you want her to sleep with Lena that is also blocked.
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I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
 
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Triepslay said:
I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
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You're welcome. Yeah Lena and Ivy can make Holly bolder without sleeping with them or cheating on Ian. You get more options for that if you have her join pole dancing and Lena can help keep Ivy from pushing Holly too far as well.
 
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GokutheG said:
You're welcome. Yeah Lena and Ivy can make Holly bolder without sleeping with them or cheating on Ian. You get more options for that if you have her join pole dancing and Lena can help keep Ivy from pushing Holly too far as well.
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In addition Ian can also help getting Holly being bolder without cheating and stuff. And while it is really great that Ian, Lena and (to a certain point) Ivy can help sweet Holly becoming bolder without her cheating on Ian or Lena, it would also be great if there were a path where Ian and wild Holly can become a dedicated couple. And a confident Ian at that, who likes Holly being slutty.
So in essence a "medium" path for wild slut Holly. Instead becoming more and more like Ivy, finally getting into a relationship with an Ian being ok with her being a slut(which was her push to being bolder, getting Ian to "see" her) would keep her wild, but with a red line this Holly would not cross because she now got Ian, whom she wanted to begin with.
 
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Triepslay said:
I just meant her being more loose I guess? I don't want her sleeping around but more comfortable with being bolder. I just finished the route but I'll change some options I chose. Thanks for the answers!.
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Oh that's very easy: 1. when Holly and Lena go to Ivy's place to have wine, do not stay at Ivy's and go back to Lena's to watch a movie. 2. At Ivy's birthday, when Mark starts hitting on Holly make Lena interrupt them. The corruption path with Ivy in then closed but she still gets cooler.
 
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lucadiadis said:
And that's how you get all the likes of horny apes who just want to wank on a drawn bimbo with fake tits shagging Peter Parker.
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To be fair, I'm here for the story and the bizarre situations that come out of eva's mind. Although lately I'm more interested in winning the MMA tournament and the book contest, they are goals that appeal more to me. :Kappa:
 
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During this week I've been splitting work between art and writing, as usual.
I've finished all the drawings needed for a major scene and they've been sent to the colorist. During this stage I'm also structuring how the scene will play out, and lately I've been using storyboards to plan things out, as scenes become more complex. Before, coming up with the structure and choosing which images to use to illustrate it was simpler, but now I take some time to think things through and I end up shuffling the order and flow of the scene until I find something that I'm happy with. I can't share those in a public post due to Patreon's guidelines, but I will in a private post if you guys are interested in seeing some bts stuff.
As I mentioned in my
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, writing is quite challenging, especially the in-between scenes that connect the major plot points. These are specially important in this update, since I'm trying to create an atmosphere that feels fresh, fun and natural and that immerses you in a summer vacation with friends. This becomes especially difficult and tedious when a single scene can have so many variations depending on how you've developed the different relationships. Often times I get the feeling I'm not managing to convincingly create dialogue that flows naturally and scenes that evoke that cozy, familiar feeling, having to chop up every dialogue in different possibilities, accounting for the various reactions characters should display and generally coming up with interesting and well-written situations that don't feel a drag to read or feel inconsistent.
I wonder if you guys got that feeling with the last update, or you're finding it satisfying enough. In this last chapter, which scenes if any were your favourites? Did you enjoy a setpiece over the rest or did a particular interaction stood out to you? What did you find missing, anddo you have any suggestions to tackle this issue and make interactions more interesting? I'm interested in hearing your thoughts and opinions; in the meanwhile I'm doing my best to craft evocative and coherent moments. Hopefully I'm doing a good enough job!
 
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lucadiadis said:
The real truth is that many things in this game will not be cannon. I suspect many peers here are far too certain of too many cannon facts in this game. Threesome Axel/Lena/Cherry is NOT cannon. The middle-aged professor who likes to be peed on is NOT cannon. Maybe Gillian's being Mike's girlfriend or for instance Seymour being Lena's Dad will be options but not cannon. Just like we have come to realize in this update that Lena's past love life is anything BUT cannon. I mean she can be a very free wild girl as well as almost nunnish (I mean two boyfriends at 22 ???).
I mean can we even consider Airwolf 2 is Cannon to Airwolf 1 ? Isn't it better to leave it at Hawke not finding his brother ? Just like GoT should have stopped at season 7 ? (I'm talking to Stan fans here)
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True and that's something I don't quite like in this game, changing character's backgrounds depending on your choices throughout the game. It explains why Lena can act like a slut (she's always been one) but I'm not convinced
 
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der123fer said:
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During this week I've been splitting work between art and writing, as usual.
I've finished all the drawings needed for a major scene and they've been sent to the colorist. During this stage I'm also structuring how the scene will play out, and lately I've been using storyboards to plan things out, as scenes become more complex. Before, coming up with the structure and choosing which images to use to illustrate it was simpler, but now I take some time to think things through and I end up shuffling the order and flow of the scene until I find something that I'm happy with. I can't share those in a public post due to Patreon's guidelines, but I will in a private post if you guys are interested in seeing some bts stuff.
As I mentioned in my
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, writing is quite challenging, especially the in-between scenes that connect the major plot points. These are specially important in this update, since I'm trying to create an atmosphere that feels fresh, fun and natural and that immerses you in a summer vacation with friends. This becomes especially difficult and tedious when a single scene can have so many variations depending on how you've developed the different relationships. Often times I get the feeling I'm not managing to convincingly create dialogue that flows naturally and scenes that evoke that cozy, familiar feeling, having to chop up every dialogue in different possibilities, accounting for the various reactions characters should display and generally coming up with interesting and well-written situations that don't feel a drag to read or feel inconsistent.
I wonder if you guys got that feeling with the last update, or you're finding it satisfying enough. In this last chapter, which scenes if any were your favourites? Did you enjoy a setpiece over the rest or did a particular interaction stood out to you? What did you find missing, anddo you have any suggestions to tackle this issue and make interactions more interesting? I'm interested in hearing your thoughts and opinions; in the meanwhile I'm doing my best to craft evocative and coherent moments. Hopefully I'm doing a good enough job!
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What does EK mean by patreons guidelines? Do they really not allow publicly showing BTS progress:KEK:
 
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Xupuzulla said:
Did you finished the cuck path in the end or what happened?
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I know I started it, because I got to a point (using URM as a cheat) where I managed to get ian_cuck = true by having Ian ask Lena if his cock was the best during a handjob and Lena and Ian never had real sex, though Lena did actually ask him to do a photoshoot of her. In this play, Lena is really mean to Stan; she is like an awful monster to him. The frustrating/puzzling thing about this play is that I would often get a signal of "gallery unlocked!", but I had no idea to what sexual interlude the game was referring. Finally they got to the beach....Wade had a bad trip....and the game ended. This was version 12.2 ALPHA. I believe there is a subsequent one out there.
So I think I am still in the "started cuck" path. I never got to see Ian watching Lena have sex with others. Ian has had sex with no one. Lena has sex with Mike (I think Jack too). I am wondering if I missed a number of branches. Oh, also, while at the beach, Louise began texting Ian. This play was very different from the previous ones I played. This Lena is like some alien to me; the way she treats Stan. But I was hoping to see if it would cause an interesting Lena/Louise interaction.
I will be away for a while. When I get back I will try the latest version released and see how it goes.
 
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During this week I've been splitting work between art and writing, as usual.
I've finished all the drawings needed for a major scene and they've been sent to the colorist. During this stage I'm also structuring how the scene will play out, and lately I've been using storyboards to plan things out, as scenes become more complex. Before, coming up with the structure and choosing which images to use to illustrate it was simpler, but now I take some time to think things through and I end up shuffling the order and flow of the scene until I find something that I'm happy with. I can't share those in a public post due to Patreon's guidelines, but I will in a private post if you guys are interested in seeing some bts stuff.
As I mentioned in my
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, writing is quite challenging, especially the in-between scenes that connect the major plot points. These are specially important in this update, since I'm trying to create an atmosphere that feels fresh, fun and natural and that immerses you in a summer vacation with friends. This becomes especially difficult and tedious when a single scene can have so many variations depending on how you've developed the different relationships. Often times I get the feeling I'm not managing to convincingly create dialogue that flows naturally and scenes that evoke that cozy, familiar feeling, having to chop up every dialogue in different possibilities, accounting for the various reactions characters should display and generally coming up with interesting and well-written situations that don't feel a drag to read or feel inconsistent.
I wonder if you guys got that feeling with the last update, or you're finding it satisfying enough. In this last chapter, which scenes if any were your favourites? Did you enjoy a setpiece over the rest or did a particular interaction stood out to you? What did you find missing, anddo you have any suggestions to tackle this issue and make interactions more interesting? I'm interested in hearing your thoughts and opinions; in the meanwhile I'm doing my best to craft evocative and coherent moments. Hopefully I'm doing a good enough job!
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too long didn't read
 
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