VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 FULL] [Eva Kiss]

[Birdnman993]

its still very depraved. Lena is cheating on Ian with everyone and has fucked everyone before she committed to him on one of my routes and is committed to keep doing it while knowing Ians past with his ex. everyone who keeps saying its not as depraved as gggb is correct but to act as if this game isn't close to it is laughable. its only a few steps away lmao

You seem to be really bothered about the possibility of this happening? But why should you be? It's not like you won't also be able to play the game, the way you want. I find it impossible to believe, that the person who created GGGB, won't give the option in this game, for the protagonists to eventually indulge in some really kinky sexplay. So far nothing suggests that she won't do that ( both protagonists are already able to cheat with multiple characters, there's a cuck path in progress and Lena is pretty much prostituting herself with Seymour), and your belief to the contrary is more wishful thinking on your part.

I think it's a matter of perspective that Lena cheating on Ian isn't that crazy, she's just a woman with a very high libido, the craziest thing in this story at the moment is Seymour who is a rich man with a sick obsession for Lena.

And I'm not denying that they do more depraved things especially because Lena will probably be involved in a porn movie because of Billy's contract, but nothing as ridiculously crazy and stupid as all those who masturbate thinking about Lena being sold to a sheik in dubai, because that would be shitting on a very good story just for the pleasure of a few.

In short, it's great that there is sex, hot stuff, tattoos, lewd clothes, that's why we like this game apart from telling the story, but all within limits that do not lose the verisimilitude.

 

[Birdnman993]

And as far as drugs are concerned, well she's already started using Molly, and on the last occasion it required 'Will' NOT to use it, which suggests a certain amount of dependency is developing. That says to me clearly, further down the road it could become a real problem for her, just like it did for Ashley. And a drug dependant Lena could be willing to do a lot more, than she currently is.

Hopefully this is the case, I liked how the drug problem was handled with Ash, in my game Ash was able to overcome his addiction thanks to Eva's support, one of the most moving moments of GGGB in my opinion, I hope we see something similar.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I think it's a matter of perspective that Lena cheating on Ian isn't that crazy, she's just a woman with a very high libido, the craziest thing in this story at the moment is Seymour who is a rich man with a sick obsession for Lena.

And I'm not denying that they do more depraved things especially because Lena will probably be involved in a porn movie because of Billy's contract, but nothing as ridiculously crazy and stupid as all those who masturbate thinking about Lena being sold to a sheik in dubai, because that would be shitting on a very good story just for the pleasure of a few.

In short, it's great that there is sex, hot stuff, tattoos, lewd clothes, that's why we like this game apart from telling the story, but all within limits that do not lose the verisimilitude.

Do I think Lena is going to become a carbon copy of Porn Bimbo Ashley? Absolutely not. I think similar things will happen in this game, to what happened in GGGB, they'll just happen in more realistic and balanced way. And they already are. Obviously we're not going to get a thug version of Lena, who ends up as a drug baron, has an evil affair with Ian's father or ends up as a Danielle Derek lookalike. But she could do a lot of the same sex acts that Ashley did in the first game. And I think drugs may influence what she's prepared to do, as we go forward.

 

[dolfe67]

And I'm not denying that they do more depraved things especially because Lena will probably be involved in a porn movie because of Billy's contract, but nothing as ridiculously crazy and stupid as all those who masturbate thinking about Lena being sold to a sheik in dubai, because that would be shitting on a very good story just for the pleasure of a few.

Lena won't be "sold" to a sheik in Dubai, but they could go there for a few days and do crazy things. It happens IRL with some e-thots who prefer money than dignity

 

[ffive]

But's that based entirely on your interpretation of what Eva has said, and not what she's actually said. You can't say for certain that you're right and I'm wrong, until Eva says so herself. Until that happens anything is possible.

Well, technically my interpretation is based on what EK has actually said. Since it's what i'm interpreting /s

But you're right that this is only my take, and we don't know for sure if it's an accurate one. So, we can perhaps agree to disagree, but in the meantime please, don't claim that there's absolutely no basis for prediction opposite to your own, about where things are heading -- just like you're interpreting current state of the game as a sign where things might be heading, i'm interpreting EK's words as a sign where they might not be heading. Ultimately either of us can be wrong here.

(my prediction is also partially based on how it's simply fucking boring to re-tread the same grounds when you're making a game or writing a story. Which is why i think EK might be less interested in following this path than you believe)

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Hopefully this is the case, I liked how the drug problem was handled with Ash, in my game Ash was able to overcome his addiction thanks to Eva's support, one of the most moving moments of GGGB in my opinion, I hope we see something similar.

In GGGB, the only consequence of her becoming addicted to drugs, seemed to be whether she could afford her habit or not. And once she started making more and more money, and she could afford as many drugs as she wanted, it just seemed to disappear as an issue. It would be better if there was some kind of negative consequence, where she slipped into the abyss, if she didn't get it under control, and that forced her into doing more extreme things to earn a living, like porn or even prostitution.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Well, technically my interpretation is based on what EK has actually said. Since it's what i'm interpreting /s

But you're right that this is only my take, and we don't know for sure if it's an accurate one. So, we can perhaps agree to disagree, but in the meantime please, don't claim that there's absolutely no basis for prediction opposite to your own, about where things are heading -- just like you're interpreting current state of the game as a sign where things might be heading, i'm interpreting EK's words as a sign where they might not be heading. Ultimately either of us can be wrong here.

(my prediction is also partially based on how it's simply fucking boring to re-tread the same grounds when you're making a game or writing a story. Which is why i think EK might be less interested in following this path than you believe)

I think she already is treading the same path, just not in the same way. Essentially ORS, is just a somewhat different version of GGGB. Both Ian and Lena are on the same journey of sexual and emotional exploration, that Ashley was on. Maybe they're doing it more realistically, but the essential premise is the same.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Lena won't be "sold" to a sheik in Dubai, but they could go there for a few days and do crazy things. It happens IRL with some e-thots who prefer money than dignity

Technically, she already has sold herself to Seymour, and they already are doing crazyish things

 

[Geigi]

When i said "another GGGB" i meant it in the sense of how lewd the content would get. In other words no, i don't think the game is going to get as silly as the late-GGGB BBC gangbang parties, bimbo porn star career and mind control drug-fueled rape. That's how i interpret the author's words about keeping things more grounded, that's the reason to assume this kind of content won't turn up in ORS, and why i'm saying your prediction is ignoring the words of the author in favor of what you personally want to see.

I assume the majority of her patrons are not interested in a romantic fairytale happy ending with marriage and kids, but Eva did asked them in a poll what they want to see or their ideas? So, more depraved content. If ors turns into a copy of gggb, it's going to be a huge disappointment.

 

[Zarkton cruises]

Has the new patreon update came out yet?

 

[Deleted member 5615723]

Ashley or Lena?

 

[Deleted member 5615723]

So the dev is adding alot of cameos from good girl gone bad. Should Ashley also get a few frames of screentime? or be added completely?

 

[SearingFive]

Depends on which version of Jess we have in that playthrough. IIRC, good Jess's Ash is still abroad on her business trip. Other degen versions of Ash is still possible.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

So the dev is adding alot of cameos from good girl gone bad. Should Ashley also get a few frames of screentime? or be added completely?

Including Ashley is complicated, because she had so many different endings, there are a lot of different versions of her to choose from. So whichever one you choose, it's guaranteed to be the wrong one for a lot of people. That's why, I think it's highly unlikely she'd turn up in the game, the same way Jessica has. Maybe a cameo appearance towards the end?

 

[starkj]

I assume the majority of her patrons are not interested in a romantic fairytale happy ending with marriage and kids, but Eva did asked them in a poll what they want to see or their ideas? So, more depraved content. If ors turns into a copy of gggb, it's going to be a huge disappointment.

Feels like a lot of people on AVN patreon in many games prefer more degenerate stuff than wholesome/romantic which kinda sucks sometimes if the dev always follows people's wishes instead of doing what they have in mind.

 

[godoff95]

I hope there is a sole IanxLouise route in the future. She reminds me of my ex.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I hope there is a sole IanxLouise route in the future. She reminds me of my ex.

Damn hook me up with your ex,bro

 

[Chemish]

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Hi everyone;
last week I didn't post a status update since I've been trying to focus on progressing the writing, and my mind has been cooked. I'm wrapping up the chapter and I have to tackle some important scenes that have been in my mind for a long time; I had collected different ideas and even had some lines written from weeks and months ago, and building the scenes while putting everything together is proving to be a real challenge.
I've been making (slow) progress on these final scenes, as well as built the "never have I ever" game we discussed in the last post; thanks for your suggestions, I used many of them! I've been also advancing the art and now all the drawings are done (I might add one or two extra, like I always end up doing) but now it's just a matter of waiting on my colorist so I can edit and finish off the artwork. I've also been conducting a search for a new artist to assist me with line-art, and I found someone that might work in the upcoming releases.
Not much else to report; I'll get back to wracking my brain over the puzzle that is these final scenes, and as soon as the playtesting starts (hopefully soon), I'll let you all know!

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[vgbestly]

inb4 "wow, its another 'I been working on writing, coding, making the art update' update"

 

[Blurpee69]

The never have I ever game could honestly be fun as hell coming from Lena's POV. She could go full nuclear on Ian and Holly, and through Seymour, could probably drop some heavy ordnance on Emma and Perry. I don't know what suggestions EK's patrons gave, but a lot of potential on the Ian Cindy route since Lena now knows