VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 FULL] [Eva Kiss]

[Leongen43]

I don't find it weird that Eva struggles with Stan. Eva usually write male characters who are confident or cuck bait, Stan is neither.

He's a soft, flabby guy without the leering perversion to prop up his lack of a spine like Arthur, and he doesn't really work as a cuck since he's not in a relationship with anyone. He's that level of pathetic that even teasing him with Stalkfap-Lena is boring.

Perry works as that type of character, the beaten down type, because he's a supporting NPC to the male lead and not an implied romantic/sexual interest to the female lead.

Spoiler: the recent updates all take this long because EK struggles for weeks to come up with content for Stan... only to ultimately give up and just get on with it.

Stan is the albatross around her neck, smh.

You're basically telling me that Stan is dead weight for EK, in short a fucking shitty otaku with no options that players care about, right?

 

[ffive]

Wow well shame on the dev for doing something like that lol. Guess i can stop playing then. Kinda pathetic to put a character in just to shame them.... Speaks volumes about the dev.

Stan is still getting more closer to a pussy than these getting upset because they feel attacked by his portrayal ever will.

 

[xxxtentaci0n]

After a bit of trial and error, I have managed to get Ian to sleep with both Emma and Holly (slutty) at the beach. A few things I discovered while trying to accomplish this; First, you can sleep with Emma (Jeremy too) and still pair her up with Perry by the end of chapter 12. The two key choices to look out for are: when she ambushes you in the toilet at Fortress during Lena's concert, reject her advances. If Ian is dating Holly or Lena, he will explain he does not feel comfortable doing it while they(Holly and Lena) are close by. She will take this as you being serious with them and stop pursuing Ian (you can finger her ass at the beach later in chapter 12 but she just takes this as Ian just teasing her ). From there on help Perry at least pay for half of the BBQ costs and side with Perry when Emma brings Jenthe to the beach house. However, if you reject her at the bar and you are not dating Lena or Holly, she still maintains her interest in Ian. If you still want to set her up with Perry, you have to pick to share rooms with Wade and turn her down when she comes to have sex with Ian the next morning. She will then stop pursuing Ian.

Now to sleep with Holly and Emma at the beach, you have to either have broken up with Lena or be not currently dating her atm. This will allow you to choose sleeping arrangements (this is the key to make this work). Now when you get to the beach, choose to share rooms with Wade instead of Emma. Regardless of this Emma will still come to fuck Ian in the morning while Wade is passed out on the couch. Finger her ass on the beach. You can even tell her you "feel the same way" when Ian asks her if she's got her eye on anyone. Come night time though you don't get the second sex scene with Emma since Ian is sharing a room with Wade (As a result of this the group is still oblivious to the hi jinks of Ian and Emma). On this playthrough after Lena broke up with Ian because he slept with Holly, I still made her give Ian a blowjob at Blazers and they ended up heavily flirting with each other during the beach event. She even let Ian put sunscreen on her boobs. Come night time Emma will reject Perry but because of the sleeping arrangements she won't come to visit Ian. Holly however has no such reservations and picks this moment to make her move . Ian and Holly do the deed, and Holly plays coy the next day. Perry is being a dick to Emma cause she didn't bang him but he doesn't get mad at Ian cause he is not privy to what's going on between Ian and Emma.

What is the best route to fuck almost everybody with lena and ian and still getting the ian/lena/holly threesome?

 

[Gicoo]

Allison is anything but plain. Holly yeah I get what you mean.... not a lot going on there as she looks like she is just a bigger version of a 12 year old. Emma has a curvy butt and bigger breasts than Holly, but does not approach the brickhouse of breasts that is Allison, who also has a nice curvy butt as well.

Alison is plain, its just that porn characters are sexualized, so even the plain girls are looking like 10s.
She only manages to turn heads if she displays her boobs and wears a slutty dress.
Emma doesn't even get attention from Ian and Jeremy for years until she dresses up/down.

Lena, Cindy and Cherry are in another league by comparison and those girls are the ones the "alphas" go for. They are above picking up wallflowers, they leave that to Jeremy.

 

[anonx5]

Alison is plain, its just that porn characters are sexualized, so even the plain girls are looking like 10s.
She only manages to turn heads if she displays her boobs and wears a slutty dress.
Emma doesn't even get attention from Ian and Jeremy for years until she dresses up/down.

Lena, Cindy and Cherry are in another league by comparison and those girls are the ones the "alphas" go for. They are above picking up wallflowers, they leave that to Jeremy.

Well I disagree about Allison obviously. She is tall and has curves up and down. Cindy fits the typical idea of a blonde supermodel. Allison is just more of everything as far as a man could desire of a woman's body. Wide hips but still thin, huge breasts, and big buttocks as well.

She has everything Cindy and Lena have only more so and not quite as atheletic because she does not work out at the gym.

 

[Gicoo]

Well I disagree about Allison obviously. She is tall and has curves up and down. Cindy fits the typical idea of a blonde supermodel. Allison is just more of everything as far as a man could desire of a woman's body. Wide hips but still thin, huge breasts, and big buttocks as well.

She has everything Cindy and Lena have only more so and not quite as atheletic because she does not work out at the gym.

I don't go for my subjective opinion about how hot I find Alison (in that case almost all girls there are 10s), but what the game indicates and tells us. Several characters get far more compliments and attention, Ians and Lenas descriptions and thoughts about their partners is also a good indicator.
Alison never got much attention. She was a nerd and teased about her tits, indicating just having big tits doesn't make you a ten if it doesn't fit with the rest with your body aesthetically.

All she manages to get is a loser like her ex, Jeremy who doesn't have exceeding standards and Ian by players choice.

Hence Axel didn't gave her one look when she introduced herself to him.

 

[dolfe67]

Stan is still getting more closer to a pussy than these getting upset because they feel attacked by his portrayal ever will.

Maybe if you play Lena in the most nonsensical scenario, but realistically there is no chance a girl like Lena would be interested in the slightest in him.

While Stan has almost no lewd content, he's a quite popular character, the complete opposite of Robert.

 

[Leongen43]

Alison is plain, its just that porn characters are sexualized, so even the plain girls are looking like 10s.
She only manages to turn heads if she displays her boobs and wears a slutty dress.
Emma doesn't even get attention from Ian and Jeremy for years until she dresses up/down.

Lena, Cindy and Cherry are in another league by comparison and those girls are the ones the "alphas" go for. They are above picking up wallflowers, they leave that to Jeremy.

Wait!! You're putting Cindy in a higher category than Alison, I wonder what it's going to be like when Xupuzulla sees your post, something like that?

 

[anonx5]

I don't go for my subjective opinion about how hot I find Alison (in that case almost all girls there are 10s), but what the game indicates and tells us. Several characters get far more compliments and attention, Ians and Lenas descriptions and thoughts about their partners is also a good indicator.
Alison never got much attention. She was a nerd and teased about her tits, indicating just having big tits doesn't make you a ten if it doesn't fit with the rest with your body aesthetically.

All she manages to get is a loser like her ex, Jeremy who doesn't have exceeding standards and Ian by players choice.

Hence Axel didn't gave her one look when she introduced herself to him.

I get what you mean. You are going off how other characters in game see Allison, but I objectively see Allison as very sexy. Is she pretty in the face? She's kinda plain there and I admit Cindy has her beat there.

But I really don't care how ingame characters feel about Allison I like how she looks. I have always liked tall gorgeous women.


Allison is the female version of tall dark and handsome, only instead of muscles she's has curves as the day as long.


The only thing the game is missing is a female bodybuilder who still looks feminine, although Ivy and Lena both come closer to that than anyone else.


Never was much attracted to Lena though, the weird gray hair and the black cat make her seem like a witch with amnesia who does not know who she is.

 

[anonx5]

I am also more attracted to Louise than Holly because she's a redhead and she is more curvy too. She has that bloodrayne look. And maybe Ian and her can be a couple who won't cheat on each other since she seems really pissed at Jeremy for cheating on her.

Then again I dunno, even when romantically involved with Lena she still tries to take Ian from her, so maybe cheating is OK so long it's her doing it in her mind?

 

[Gicoo]

Wait!! You're putting Cindy in a higher category than Alison,

Technically I didn't. That was merely what I gathered from Axel.

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To remind you what the discussion was initially about, it was me pointing out that Axel goes after models and ignores plain girls, two categories that the game manages to distinguish over its course. Whether you find Alison hotter or not, is entirely your thing

 

[anonx5]

Technically I didn't. That was merely what I gathered from Axel.


To remind you what the discussion was initially about, it was me pointing out that Axel goes after models and ignores plain girls, two categories that the game manages to distinguish over its course. Whether you find Alison hotter or not, is entirely your thing

True... I still think Allison could be a model ingame, she is more than stacked enough, only Ivy and Jess approach how stacked Allison is.

Jessica is basically a better looking Ivy because gray hair on a 20-30 year old looks weird.

 

[Skylark21]

And that's understandable. Imagine to have inspiration to draw and write a sex scene with fat, ugly neckbeard dude with a small dick and anti-social behaviour.
Look at Perry/Emma scored, it's just one terrible pic to close their arc. He is a similar to Stan, just more social active.
My opinion that Eva should remove at all Stan from the game and focused on the story, if she doesn't happy with his character.

I don't really care about Stan but he's the second most popular male NPC on Eva's Patreon after Jeremy,
So I don't think he's gonna disappear anytime soon and will probably have lot more content in the future.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I don't really care about Stan but he's the second most popular male NPC on Eva's Patreon after Jeremy,
So I don't think he's gonna disappear anytime soon and will probably have lot more content in the future.

I know. Eva's Patreon subscribers are malware that infects her and allows her to influence development decisions. They focused on kinks, not the story quality.
And if I'm sure you're right about Jeremy, we'll see a lot of content with him (and I'm not against Jeremy, he's just poorly written), then I have my doubts about Stan, after several years of development we have a picture with a kiss and that's it, as if Eva did it without enthusiasm.
The strategy when you completely ignore the audience's cries and follow your vision in development 100% is more effective, although not without drawbacks.

 

[SuperW]

So are we going to get a roofie/date rape scene in this game like when the dead boyfreind's father roofies the MC in Good Girl Gone Bad?


Billy: "Hey Lena, killer party so far! Here, this is a 'special drink' I made just for you, and then how about you join us in the main bedroom?"

 

[Xupuzulla]

Well I disagree about Allison obviously. She is tall and has curves up and down. Cindy fits the typical idea of a blonde supermodel. Allison is just more of everything as far as a man could desire of a woman's body. Wide hips but still thin, huge breasts, and big buttocks as well.

She has everything Cindy and Lena have only more so and not quite as atheletic because she does not work out at the gym.

Alison is wife material,she can feed twin babies with those big titties.

 

[anonx5]

Alison is wife material,she can feed twin babies with those big titties.

Essentially... she does need to learn how to cook better, but given the fact that she was willing to change her looks just to attract Ian, I think so long they stay in a good relationship she would be happy to study spaghetti recipes until she makes a great bowl of spaghetti.

 

[theolin]

do we have a guide for Ian, Holly and Lena path???

 

[Socrambus]

Will have to say i used to look forward to Stan finally getting with her but now after this latest update.... I'm not so sure anymore, his dick is not even half the size of every other dick in the game, so she isn't getting any pleasure from it sadly after everything she has done up to the point that her and Stan FINALLY kiss. When the female mc and the male mc have both fucked everyone 5 times over (favorite female for me with the Mc is Emma). I fell its become a wasted opportunity now which sucks because he was the one I've always been rooting for till this dawned on me.

His dick size is the least of his problems, he's a fat social retard with a huge complex and non existant self-steem and confidence. And he's also a virgin. All of that is what makes it impossible for him to get a girl like Lena and be able to satisfy her. I'm not going to say that size doesn't matter, it matters to a point but unless we are talking about extreme cases like a micropenis it's more a fetish for these games and something we men tend to obsess over rather than a real issue IRL.

I don't find it weird that Eva struggles with Stan. Eva usually write male characters who are confident or cuck bait, Stan is neither.

He's a soft, flabby guy without the leering perversion to prop up his lack of a spine like Arthur, and he doesn't really work as a cuck since he's not in a relationship with anyone. He's that level of pathetic that even teasing him with Stalkfap-Lena is boring.

Perry works as that type of character, the beaten down type, because he's a supporting NPC to the male lead and not an implied romantic/sexual interest to the female lead.

IMO he could have worked as a simp. For all his faults, he has a good IT job which probably means more than decent income and money to spare. My idea was trying to roleplay Lena as someone who is aware of how Stan feels about her and only sees him as an easy to manipulate money source. Basically what many female streamers do with their audience but at a smaller and more personal level. But the writing hasn't gone this way and now Stan only could work as a deranged pyscho threatening Lena and/or Louise for Ian (or another LI) to beat or the utterly unrealistic love path with Lena.

The only thing the game is missing is a female bodybuilder who still looks feminine, although Ivy and Lena both come closer to that than anyone else.

The game is also missing an asian girl to cover everybody's preferences.

So are we going to get a roofie/date rape scene in this game like when the dead boyfreind's father roofies the MC in Good Girl Gone Bad?


Billy: "Hey Lena, killer party so far! Here, this is a 'special drink' I made just for you, and then how about you join us in the main bedroom?"

I think that the plot hints at something like that, but I'm not sure what Patreon and Stream policies are regarding rape content. So probably something lighter like drugs involved to lower girls' inhibitions but also showing clear consent. More similar to alcohol than roofies.

 

[anonx5]

Jeremy wife, maybe?
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Do you actually read what Allison says about Jeremy? She said she would never want him as s husband, he is just hot enough to have sex with. That's it. Ian on the other hand... she told him if he ever wants a girlfriend or wife she's available.