TL;DR The half of this game featuring the MMC is good, even great. The half dedicated to the FMC, sadly, mostly just makes it worse.
[Played through 14.1.0]
ORS features distinctive art, relatively solid writing, a cast full of distinctive (if trope-y) characters, and many branching decisions. I could imagine that if the game only had the MMC POV, it would be an easy 10/10 for an indie AVN.
Unfortunately, the FMC has a bunch of unappealing creeps and simps for LIs. Of course there's nothing wrong with that for a pure FMC corruption game, but IMO there's massive tonal whiplash when you switch between her and the MMC, who's smashing models, childhood friends, and the cute, shy nerd from work who's always looked up to him.
On top of that, while the game is overall quite polished, including the writing, there's many instances of the characters being childish, hypocritical, or both. For example, both the MCs have the option to cheat on each other - indeed, it seems encouraged from the gameplay perspective as you gain critical stats and options - despite the fact that both of them literally start the story recovering from being cheated on and having their hearts broken. Yes, it's important for characters to be human and flawed, but when they're all idiots 50% of the time, it turns into a bad soap opera.
That builds into a further issue where it's hard to care about the details of what's happening in the plot. Actions and consequences play out in a micro scale, and it feels cobbled together. Basically the only serious consequence I could actually give a shit about was towards the end of the current content when Wade and Cindy finally broke up after a chain of events started by the MMC. Considering that's not even the main LI/plot, and how much other random crap is going on, that's a sad quality for a game of this size.
I know this sounds quite negative, especially when I actually think the game is quite good. But it's simply frustrating that a game that had this much effort and care put into its development falls so far short. It fails to strike the balance between gratuitous sex and serious themes, even though it clearly tries so hard to provide some kind of commentary on romantic/sexual relationships and finding yourself as an adult.
[Played through 14.1.0]
ORS features distinctive art, relatively solid writing, a cast full of distinctive (if trope-y) characters, and many branching decisions. I could imagine that if the game only had the MMC POV, it would be an easy 10/10 for an indie AVN.
Unfortunately, the FMC has a bunch of unappealing creeps and simps for LIs. Of course there's nothing wrong with that for a pure FMC corruption game, but IMO there's massive tonal whiplash when you switch between her and the MMC, who's smashing models, childhood friends, and the cute, shy nerd from work who's always looked up to him.
On top of that, while the game is overall quite polished, including the writing, there's many instances of the characters being childish, hypocritical, or both. For example, both the MCs have the option to cheat on each other - indeed, it seems encouraged from the gameplay perspective as you gain critical stats and options - despite the fact that both of them literally start the story recovering from being cheated on and having their hearts broken. Yes, it's important for characters to be human and flawed, but when they're all idiots 50% of the time, it turns into a bad soap opera.
That builds into a further issue where it's hard to care about the details of what's happening in the plot. Actions and consequences play out in a micro scale, and it feels cobbled together. Basically the only serious consequence I could actually give a shit about was towards the end of the current content when Wade and Cindy finally broke up after a chain of events started by the MMC. Considering that's not even the main LI/plot, and how much other random crap is going on, that's a sad quality for a game of this size.
I know this sounds quite negative, especially when I actually think the game is quite good. But it's simply frustrating that a game that had this much effort and care put into its development falls so far short. It fails to strike the balance between gratuitous sex and serious themes, even though it clearly tries so hard to provide some kind of commentary on romantic/sexual relationships and finding yourself as an adult.