3.5/5
For a starter chapter, this isn't bad. Some of the models are really great, while others not so much. The blonde flirting with the old man looks straight off the surgical table. All plastic. Nothing attractive there and I'm saying this when she has a friend full of silicone sitting with her when they meet. And the brunette, she's in the main page's image - straight in the middle ... attractive features, but a total five head.
All in all these are little grips and can be improved. Like I said this isn't bad. I've definitely gone through worst. Right now the story is overall kind of chugging away and there's no definitive protagonist, but it's still early and I'm looking forward to a setup for a chain of events in the near future. There's nothing offensive or bad about the story so far but it could use a little more build up for the corruption of certain characters. There's not much of a building of any real sub-plots right now so it's definitely at a wait and see point. I do enjoy the interactions of flirting with corruptibility being introduced across the multiple characters and I'm looking forward to how these ever evolving relationships change as a result.
As of right now, that's all if can say about this. We're only in version 0.1, but I'd recommend to anyone looking at this to go ahead and give it a try. See what you think and decide whether it's something you're willing to give your support to or not. For me it's too early give my support to but I'm sure I'll be able to make a better judgement in a couple more releases. Please remember this was uploaded for free and if you do enjoy it, consider giving some support to the creator in anyway you can. Be sure to write your own review that reflects your thoughts on the project and maybe give some ideas on how it can improve. As always I wish the dev all the best and truly hope they find their audience. Cheers.
For a starter chapter, this isn't bad. Some of the models are really great, while others not so much. The blonde flirting with the old man looks straight off the surgical table. All plastic. Nothing attractive there and I'm saying this when she has a friend full of silicone sitting with her when they meet. And the brunette, she's in the main page's image - straight in the middle ... attractive features, but a total five head.
All in all these are little grips and can be improved. Like I said this isn't bad. I've definitely gone through worst. Right now the story is overall kind of chugging away and there's no definitive protagonist, but it's still early and I'm looking forward to a setup for a chain of events in the near future. There's nothing offensive or bad about the story so far but it could use a little more build up for the corruption of certain characters. There's not much of a building of any real sub-plots right now so it's definitely at a wait and see point. I do enjoy the interactions of flirting with corruptibility being introduced across the multiple characters and I'm looking forward to how these ever evolving relationships change as a result.
As of right now, that's all if can say about this. We're only in version 0.1, but I'd recommend to anyone looking at this to go ahead and give it a try. See what you think and decide whether it's something you're willing to give your support to or not. For me it's too early give my support to but I'm sure I'll be able to make a better judgement in a couple more releases. Please remember this was uploaded for free and if you do enjoy it, consider giving some support to the creator in anyway you can. Be sure to write your own review that reflects your thoughts on the project and maybe give some ideas on how it can improve. As always I wish the dev all the best and truly hope they find their audience. Cheers.
