VN - Ren'Py - OurLife [Ch.3 Public] [OurLife]

Sieht für mich bis jetzt ganz gut aus, und die Mädchen sind wirklich attraktiv!

Bin gespannt wie die Story sich weiterentwickelt.

Auf jeden Fall Manuela die MILF sehr heiß und interessant man möchte mehr von ihr!

+ Manuela, best and the only interesting gal
+ MC, he's likable good man, gentleman and a fucking hero
+ relationship development between protagonist and Manuela
+ lewd scenes are ok
+ music

- unexpected, unnecessary and unavoidable ntr. Dev could handle this situation better, or maybe give player a choice to dump cheating gf at some point
- rest of girls are sluts, MC girlfriend also turned into one, and that was fast
- too many POVs of other characters. MC is like 40% of the game
- forced content. Player literally doesn't have any power to change anything, it's more like kinetic novel

Manuela saved this game from total disaster. I genuinely like her character, can't say the same thing about rest of this avn. 2 stars

3.5/5

For a starter chapter, this isn't bad. Some of the models are really great, while others not so much. The blonde flirting with the old man looks straight off the surgical table. All plastic. Nothing attractive there and I'm saying this when she has a friend full of silicone sitting with her when they meet. And the brunette, she's in the main page's image - straight in the middle ... attractive features, but a total five head.

All in all these are little grips and can be improved. Like I said this isn't bad. I've definitely gone through worst. Right now the story is overall kind of chugging away and there's no definitive protagonist, but it's still early and I'm looking forward to a setup for a chain of events in the near future. There's nothing offensive or bad about the story so far but it could use a little more build up for the corruption of certain characters. There's not much of a building of any real sub-plots right now so it's definitely at a wait and see point. I do enjoy the interactions of flirting with corruptibility being introduced across the multiple characters and I'm looking forward to how these ever evolving relationships change as a result.

As of right now, that's all if can say about this. We're only in version 0.1, but I'd recommend to anyone looking at this to go ahead and give it a try. See what you think and decide whether it's something you're willing to give your support to or not. For me it's too early give my support to but I'm sure I'll be able to make a better judgement in a couple more releases. Please remember this was uploaded for free and if you do enjoy it, consider giving some support to the creator in anyway you can. Be sure to write your own review that reflects your thoughts on the project and maybe give some ideas on how it can improve. As always I wish the dev all the best and truly hope they find their audience. Cheers.

VERSION: Ch.1
SUMMARY: Ok, if you have good gag reflex, hard pass on this one
RATINGS: (out of 5):

1. Models: 1-4 (sometimes nice, most times not)
2. Animations: 4
3. General Visuals: 3
4. Characters: 3
5. Story: 3
6. Writing: 3
7. Pacing: 3
8. Content (amount): 2
9. UI & Sounds: 1
10. Fetish & kinks: 2

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Animations are actually pretty decent
2. Models look good, until they not. See cons

CONS:

1. Models posing and expressions are often just FUGLY as sin, the facial expressions give you the impression the faces were clay and then went into a blender (botox much?). You will notice this the first time the MC sees the fat chick under the table at the office...FML
2. Music of the game really feels like something out of an 80s porno...*cringe
3. The MC's dialogue and much of the general dialogue is just so immature. The MC acts like some adolescent moron and says the most retarded things, why make him like that?
4. Story at least the MC part seems more plausible than the other characters...

FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:

• If you break your legs, you tend to know about it, so the mother saying she think she broke not one but both legs...erm...yeah not sold on that one sorry, if you stood on that and it was broken it would snap in a gross way
• Couldnt even finish the game because of a bug that crashes it...noice...saved me the trouble of closing it down anyway.