Takkatakka
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Oh yeah...right...I even liked the original post from...two weeks ago...
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Honestly, I don't think it needs to be all that hard. The thing about 'darkest chapters' is that they're very subjective and a lot of it hinges not on how the chapter develops but how it ends. Rosalind is unquestionably going through a miserable month, but I suspect that *if* she can walk away from it knowing she's given her daughter a 'normal' life, then she'll be quite able to make peace with her ordeal once it's all over.
Triumph over adversity is a powerful narrative. It has a way of accentuating the positives and downplaying the negatives when you look back secure in the knowledge that everything turned out well. And if the MC plays a big role in her success their shared suffering might actually draw them closer together, sort of like how veterans - even ones from opposite sides - can sometimes overlook the horrors of war and focus on the bonds they formed in the process. Sure, they'll need to come up with a cover story for how they met that's suitable for polite society, but that's easily done; the age gap isn't that big.
Of course, this hinges on Rosalind being able to look back from a place of success. If the month of being degraded and abused was merely the precursor to a life in hock to the Club and a permanent estrangement from her daughter then yeah, she's never going to want to look at the MC again. But while giving her (and/or the other Carnations) a relatively happy ending is certainly an uphill struggle, I think it's a plausible outcome if the MC pitches in. It will take a delicate touch to pull it off, but TD (and GIL!) have demonstrated they have the skill, planning and patience to pull it off.
I'm even cautiously optimistic they want to do so! <fingers crossed!>
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It's an exercise bike with a screen on it, so you can pretend you're riding through the Poconos or at a spinning class while you're in your living room. I think they make rowing machines with screens on them too. Basically, all I know is fashionable people are very happy while inspirational, energetic music plays in the background as they do cardio at home. That, and some fortunes were made and lost during the pandemic if you decided to hop on that stock's hype train.
Which was at a meta level related to his quote for the ad that was a little too honest
Ungawa
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That's kind of the point of the guide: a harem guideline.
Not necessarily how to write each and every person or even to do everything it says but to help invigorate a few main archetypes within that type of story.
I certainly didn't see it in Oppai Oddyssey (and I'm slow walking that one even SLOWER than I am PC...) and not every dev is going to follow it.
Certainly there can be better guides (or stories like old ones on Literotica) but it's not to swear by every work done but look at them as ways the community can grow and learn just like the devs to make better writing a goal.
Ottoeight
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Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
Well, lots of men are just boys who want a new mom who they can also fuck.Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
For them Rosalind makes perfect sense.
It's a porn game, bro. The usual rules of logic don't apply.if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
Bill Temple
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You're too cold, man! Not everything is a tier list. What about true love?Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
What if a sudden realization crystallizes in Edwin's mind in the middle of one of her next h-scenes:
Rose: "Mmmh...! *Chup Fwup!*"
Edwin (thinking): "I... I think I love this woman!
"Rose: "*Shlup plap...* Mmmh...!"
Edwin: "Mhh, ahh."
Edwin (thinking): "I don't want to imagine a world where I don't wake up next to this angel every morning for the rest of my life."
Rose: "Ngggg! *CHUP, CHWUP, FWHUP, THURP...!*"
Edwin: "Unhh."
Edwin (thinking): "Damn, It might not be the most romantic time, but I don't want to wait one moment longer to ask her to marry me."
"Wiping the heavy perspiration from my brow as I tenderly back out of her throat, I clear my own to speak human words for the first time in two hours of sticky, carnal rutting."
Rose: "*huff huff*"
Edwin: "Hey Ian, can you ease up on Rosalind for a minute, I need her attention to ask something..."
Rose: "*Plapp plap...* AAAHNN!"
Ian: "Wha? *plap* Oh, yea, anything for my Eskimo Bro! Just *plap* one *plap* second. *plap* She's... *Plap* almost... *PLAP* There! *PLAPP!!* "
Rose: "Gaaah! I'm comiiiiiiinggg!"
Did I change your mind?
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Accordingly with my experience most of the young men would love stay with an experienced beautiful older woman, just to learn how to fuck and then they would dump her to stay with an Hana or a Mina of their age.Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
P.S. If Ottoeight has tried to turn the table on, I think I have blew it up.
Well, that always depends on personal tastes! My Top 3 (in no particular order) are Hana, Felicia and Sophia: So the (not quite as gothy as she might look) Goth drummer girl, the epicurean artist girl and the amoral genius nerd girl. So what does this tell you?Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
One thing is that TD1900 and GIL3D are really good, because normally I do not find girls tattooed to the heavy degree Hana is attractive at all.
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Most guys probably wouldn't. Different (but similar) point, Rosa probably wouldn't favor Edwin either. There are certain social norms you just can't weasel around. She has to introduce you to the girls from her book club (basically, FRIENDS is what I mean), you have to introduce her to your mom and her friends etc. And in about 20 years Edwin is in his late 30s, Rosa is a senior citizen and you both got really weird looks all throughout your relationship. Rosas daughter has reached an age where she questions just how horny her mom had to be to catch herself a guy this much younger. Most people would not want to put up with any of that.Guys, let me turn the tables on the debate on Rosalind being interested in a relationship with Edwin:
if you were a 21 years old man, would you really favour a 36 years old woman with a 12 years old daughter over a 19 years old blond model?
Seriously, bros, come on...
Yes sure it's a fappy game and milfs in a certain age range are hot. Whatever, but we're talking realism at the moment.
Every time I read that stuff I almost want to claw my eyes out.
I love you TD but jesus christ.
CHWUP FHWUP
Did you guys think that we have the chance to see a "fucked up" love path with Kathleen?
I truly believe she is the only character who is wife material.
I truly believe she is the only character who is wife material.
Bill Temple
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Some of y'all love stretching the age difference between these two. Since we're talking about realism at the moment, twenty years from 36 is not a senior citizen. You can maybe argue that 62 is a senior citizen, but retirement ages are rising as people live and stay fitter longer, so realistically 65 or 68 is senior territory nowadays. 56 year olds can be and often are quite active and healthy. Twenty years from 22 is 42, decidedly middle-aged. Twenty years from 13 is 33, so Rosalind's daughter has reached the age where she fully understands just how horny her mom had to be to shack up with a studly catch like Dr. Turner.Most guys probably wouldn't. Different (but similar) point, Rosa probably wouldn't favor Edwin either. There are certain social norms you just can't weasel around. She has to introduce you to the girls from her book club (basically, FRIENDS is what I mean), you have to introduce her to your mom and her friends etc. And in about 20 years Edwin is in his late 30s, Rosa is a senior citizen and you both got really weird looks all throughout your relationship. Rosas daughter has reached an age where she questions just how horny her mom had to be to catch herself a guy this much younger. Most people would not want to put up with any of that.
Yes sure it's a fappy game and milfs in a certain age range are hot. Whatever, but we're talking realism at the moment.
Every time I read that stuff I almost want to claw my eyes out.
I love you TD but jesus christ.
CHWUP FHWUP
And I think the book club gals will give respect to Rose for pulling a respectable Doc / sex-machine. Edwin's mom is clearly an open-minded person about social norms (e.g. retired pornstar), so she probably will be happy if her baby boy is happy.
Anyway, I'm not trying to talk anyone into a Rose ending if that's not their thing, just arguing for its viability.
PS - I love the Chwups and the Fhwups, but then again I don't know how else to concisely convey the symphony of wet, slappy sex sounds that I think heighten the reading experience.
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