At the beginning of the game, the plot was not bad, but then the story turned spoil. My opinion is that VoidStar could come up with a lot of interesting things if he tried to.
For example - deeper relationships with Theresa, Scarlet and Ellie, including jealousy (at the beginning of the plot, the player can choose who Ellie will help with the warm-up at the stadium - Teresa or Scarlet. But for some reason this does not affect the plot at all); Criminal history with drug dealers and, may be, with Scarlet's mother's lover; arrests by police; Ellie's unexpected pregnancy (especially after she confused antibiotics with contraceptives) and so that the player does not know for a long time from whom she knocked up, especially if the player has chosen the path of lust.
It would also be nice if, at the player's choice, Ellie would remain Scarlet's puppet or learn to act on her own, and, for example, would invite Scarlet to Larry to he fuck her.
For example - deeper relationships with Theresa, Scarlet and Ellie, including jealousy (at the beginning of the plot, the player can choose who Ellie will help with the warm-up at the stadium - Teresa or Scarlet. But for some reason this does not affect the plot at all); Criminal history with drug dealers and, may be, with Scarlet's mother's lover; arrests by police; Ellie's unexpected pregnancy (especially after she confused antibiotics with contraceptives) and so that the player does not know for a long time from whom she knocked up, especially if the player has chosen the path of lust.
It would also be nice if, at the player's choice, Ellie would remain Scarlet's puppet or learn to act on her own, and, for example, would invite Scarlet to Larry to he fuck her.