Absolutely phenomenal. The graphics and animations are really clean, the gameplay and setting is just excellent as well. Great use of environmental storytelling by the dev as well. the first two scenes where you find the girls are more disturbing than arousing, which I was not expecting at all, but it was so different that I became genuinely interested in this fucked up story, not every day a porn game really leans into the horror element and I appreciate different. This is an amazing start and if this game manages to keep improving from it it would be excellent.
A few things Id love to see if god forbid the dev ever reads these ratings; The horror element was great in the first half, and that's what I was really digging abought this game so it was a shame when it sort of petered out in the second half. I think the last scream you hear is in section 6, which is a shame because they were atmospheric as hell and made you genuinely worried abought what tf the monsters were doing to people and what would happen to you if you got got. with that said, more screams and more fucked up shit happening to people you find would be great to KEEP you worried abought getting caught.
Speaking of getting caught... Once you know what happens when the monsters get you and that you can fix it with a shower.... well the monsters aren't as worrying anymore, you just aren't scared of them anymore. So it would be Interesting to see some permanent effects of getting caught. I like the infection detail after you are taken, so why not make it permanent to some extent. Taking a shower could still reset infection level for the knockdown gameplay mechanic but you could have the markings left on her remain even after the shower, and perhaps even increase the more you get caught as the corruption on her body gets worse. If you wanted a way to still reduce them you could have a rare item that takes you back one level of corruption that you need to find in the map in some of the more hidden rooms that already exist, and going along with that you could even have the girl get to a certain level of corruption that is a game over where her whole body is completely corrupted (this could occur after getting caught 10 times or something with the physical mark left slowly getting worse each time).
In the same vein of getting caught, our girl seems oddly unbothered by what is happening to her. Clearly this has fucked up the other girls this has happened to, so why not have her kick and scream a little more, make it clearly traumatic to an extent, dev diiiiiiiid include a mental health stat, so I'm just saying why not use it. I mean the shit happening to people in this game would be horrifying to anyone in this situation.
Anyways I just really got hooked on the horror elements of this game so that's where I'm coming from. Great work though, please keep it up.
A few things Id love to see if god forbid the dev ever reads these ratings; The horror element was great in the first half, and that's what I was really digging abought this game so it was a shame when it sort of petered out in the second half. I think the last scream you hear is in section 6, which is a shame because they were atmospheric as hell and made you genuinely worried abought what tf the monsters were doing to people and what would happen to you if you got got. with that said, more screams and more fucked up shit happening to people you find would be great to KEEP you worried abought getting caught.
Speaking of getting caught... Once you know what happens when the monsters get you and that you can fix it with a shower.... well the monsters aren't as worrying anymore, you just aren't scared of them anymore. So it would be Interesting to see some permanent effects of getting caught. I like the infection detail after you are taken, so why not make it permanent to some extent. Taking a shower could still reset infection level for the knockdown gameplay mechanic but you could have the markings left on her remain even after the shower, and perhaps even increase the more you get caught as the corruption on her body gets worse. If you wanted a way to still reduce them you could have a rare item that takes you back one level of corruption that you need to find in the map in some of the more hidden rooms that already exist, and going along with that you could even have the girl get to a certain level of corruption that is a game over where her whole body is completely corrupted (this could occur after getting caught 10 times or something with the physical mark left slowly getting worse each time).
In the same vein of getting caught, our girl seems oddly unbothered by what is happening to her. Clearly this has fucked up the other girls this has happened to, so why not have her kick and scream a little more, make it clearly traumatic to an extent, dev diiiiiiiid include a mental health stat, so I'm just saying why not use it. I mean the shit happening to people in this game would be horrifying to anyone in this situation.
Anyways I just really got hooked on the horror elements of this game so that's where I'm coming from. Great work though, please keep it up.