This is very good start, You doing great!
I have a little advice - in Studio neo, in settings/map turn off map's lights and put in some of your's, by hand - scene will look very believable , with this method daz3d (almost) quality can be achieved.
Nice coding and fluid language.
Good composition and posing.
Satir Girls approves)
And if this is Your first game - than You are golden, because with time - You will become only better.
The dev, who deserve to be supported.