VN Ren'Py Abandoned Patio City [Demo] [SmexyLab]

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Overview:
Patio City is a game where you control a young guy that finished highschool but still doesn't know what to do with his life so he is currently living with 4 roommates and trying to discover what to do with his life.​

Thread Updated: 2020-01-22
Release Date: 2020-01-22
Developer: SmexyLab
Censored: No
Version: Demo
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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NotEvenOw

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Jun 25, 2017
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"Demo," and really, what feedback is there to give of a game that barely eclipses five minutes of playtime? Assuming the dev reads this thread and I'm not just pissing into the wind, my suggestion would be to put your nose to the grindstone and come back in six months when there's at least some semblance of a product here. I'd also find someone who's willing to edit your work, since the writing and sentence structure is stiff, compounded by bad grammar. Models are decent, but then, that's hardly much of a standout in this day and age, where every dev has decent models. Some of them even have decent writing. It'd also pay to rewrite your game synopsis, since, I mean...do I even need to say it?
 

Jeepster

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I just thought would take a look at this one... "Living in Japan" --- is a workaholic. <---period these are her twin daughters, Lily and Lexie -- OK, i have to stop.... :unsure: nope, i will run thru it lol
 
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