Others Pawn Pleasure [v0.2.1] [adikt]

[Miizako]

hii, i would like to play it on MAC is there a way to male it possible.

 

[lnomsim]

Wow, really nice game, I was putting aside because I wasn't convince by the AI art, but it's actually pretty good looking, and you did a wonderful job with consistency.

 

[adikt]

So there you go....my unwanted thoughts on your game. I wish the very best for you and look forward to the next releases as this could be a fun game. Thank you very much

Cheers

I always need these feedback to gain more perspective from others, it's very helpful. So thank you for these!

In your changelog you mention that you "fix grammars" lol. Maybe you should fix that mistake.

Whoops, lol. I will try to minimize this mistake.

You could do a better job of explaining the saves. I may have missed that information somewhere. On that same subject, you could allow more than 1 game save. I wanted to start a new game and check something, but I can't since it will overwrite my original game. Some folks like to have multiple saves. Even now, I want to go check something about the tutorial but can't unless I want to delete my game save.
I also noticed that the saves are a bit strange. When continuing from a save I might have more or less money than I actually did when I exited. If the money changed then I'm also not sure what else changed.

Make sense, currently the game is saved on the start of the new day, but start from day 2. I'm currently planning to spread the auto save to more "checkpoint", for example, when the day end. It could be confusing since I didn't put any information about this auto save.
For tutorial, I know this is a bad place to put it in the game, but the tutorial can be opened again from the option menu. I will add this information when the tutorial is closed rather in the end of the tutorial itself.

Rollback would be nice to have implemented. I sometimes accidentally double click and miss some parts of conversations.

I explored this a while ago, while the conversations rollback is working, there's problem with dialogue tied to another event happening in the game, which create problem everywhere, lol. So it's kinda on hold right now until I found some alternative. Like a dialogue log maybe?

Are there any expenses? Any building rent/utilities? Rent to that girl the MC is living with?
Is there any object to making more money? Honestly I had played a bit before even noticing where I could upgrade things like charisma, competence, and so forth. At that time I had approx $14,000 so then upgraded several things at once. I never did notice any differences when playing after that, though.

Expenses is coming with the staff system in 0.3.0, since the staff will need some kind of wage. At the current state, I tweak the balance to be easy since there's not a lot of progression available yet, so almost all contents are unlocked at the start.

I also plan to add more event from the npc, which can affect the player negatively.

Thank you for checking that out so quickly.
It happened on 3 different characters, I think.... It was during the sex scenes, but
wasn't a big deal or too annoying. Might not even be worth messing with in the 2.1 ver.

Cheers
Best of Luck

After checking the 0.2.1, I think I will pass on implementing the fix on 0.2.1 since it turned out to be some work to do, and can introduce new problem I missed. Sorry for these horror scene, lol

 

[adikt]

hii, i would like to play it on MAC is there a way to male it possible.

Hi, I'm sorry, while the game engine support building on mac, I don't have the device to test the result, so there will be no mac release for now.

Wow, really nice game, I was putting aside because I wasn't convince by the AI art, but it's actually pretty good looking, and you did a wonderful job with consistency.

Thank you for your kind words.

 

[rai1810]

Haven't explored much the gameplay aspect of the game yet but I still came to give some small feedback on the prologue. Writing aside (first girl doesn't even question why there is a non-female being wandering the streets, and for a world of only women, they actually know how to recognize a man?), it is very much rushed.

First of all, although porn scenes help gather attention to early works, it has to make at least some sense. Just because it's a women-only world doesn't mean they would be comfortable undressing for someone they just met, even less allowing them to touch them.

That aside, I think it would be good if you actually had a gameplay segment working in the first pawn shop as a sort of tutorial. Since there's already a H build up, you only need to have an event where the player gets fired from the tutorial shop after this build up maxes out forcing the player to make advances on a customer. For the regular gameplay the stat loss on bad H management makes sense, but for the tutorial it's a good tool to add a "game over" to lead into the opportunity to open your own shop, as well as introducing the importance of regulating that H bar (even if the consequences are different now).

Edit: btw, is the dialogue also AI-generated? The way the girls talk is quite similar to the way AI roleplays sex scenes.

 

[adikt]

Haven't explored much the gameplay aspect of the game yet but I still came to give some small feedback on the prologue. Writing aside (first girl doesn't even question why there is a non-female being wandering the streets, and for a world of only women, they actually know how to recognize a man?), it is very much rushed.

First of all, although porn scenes help gather attention to early works, it has to make at least some sense. Just because it's a women-only world doesn't mean they would be comfortable undressing for someone they just met, even less allowing them to touch them.

That aside, I think it would be good if you actually had a gameplay segment working in the first pawn shop as a sort of tutorial. Since there's already a H build up, you only need to have an event where the player gets fired from the tutorial shop after this build up maxes out forcing the player to make advances on a customer. For the regular gameplay the stat loss on bad H management makes sense, but for the tutorial it's a good tool to add a "game over" to lead into the opportunity to open your own shop, as well as introducing the importance of regulating that H bar (even if the consequences are different now).

Edit: btw, is the dialogue also AI-generated? The way the girls talk is quite similar to the way AI roleplays sex scenes.

Hi, thanks for your feedback. About the prologue I agree with you, the prologue is made when I want to test the gameplay to the players, so I rushed it, and haven't touched it since that. At some point I will rewrite it, but it's still not decided if it's going with how our world work, or isekai type of world.

The interactive tutorial is good to introduce the gameplay, I was thinking to make it after all the shop gameplay feature is done (right now it's missing staff feature). But your idea about the first shop become a tutorial segment is very interesting, and better in my opinion. For now, this is my first option on the tutorial segment.

For the dialogue, it's mixed with AI.

Thank you again for your feedback!