VN Ren'Py Peace of Mind: Watcher's Eye [Prologue Day 3] [Silent J Games]

[zahenix]

imma set them as my mother and sister, like they say more is better.

 

[a1fox3]

imma set them as my mother and sister, like they say more is better.

There is a mother and sister in the game already and in choosing aunt and cousins goes along with the story.

 

[FatGiant]

Let me write this fast... while I am still in the afterglow...

Spoiler: Some thoughts...

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No offense just honesty.

Peace

 

[MrBenny]

Excellent work, I'm really enjoying this project so far. As well it's great to see a decent harem title with a bunch of great looking girls who are not into each other. Only focusing and sharing their man...the way I prefer my harem to play out.

Spoiler: And you don't see this happen in an AVN...like ever.

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And it's kind of looking like many woman will be joining MC's harem family...(And I hope both female cop's will be join as well. )

Regards

 

[we51nat0r]

lmao havent played yet but love dev notes...keep up the good work dev

 

[PSYlevi]

Played update and liked last dialogue between MC and girls. Never seen that type of dialogue before in harem AVNs

Interested in finding out more about why Mia said she failed MC. I have ideas why, but hope i'm wrong.

 

[JAYJAYHAY]

Who got the compressed version ? .. really appreciated it if it Was available

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Let me write this fast... while I am still in the afterglow...

Spoiler: Some thoughts...

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No offense just honesty.

Peace

Not offended. This is your opinion, and very well explained. You said what you liked and didn't like, while explaining why. That's the input I appreciate because of the reasoning. The only point I will address, since I don't think it spoils anything is the mansplaining as you mentioned, which I don't see it that way but respect that you do. That was always a one time thing I wrote after the first release since people kept asking me to rethink that one tag. It wont be a topic that will be brought up again. So no need to worry about that. The rest of your concerns have been planned out to develope as the story progresses. There is a road map that I have which I have placed all major events in their corresponding in game date, which I believe will address the necessary information at the appropriate time within what is happening in the story. I hope that clears up your concerns. And thank you for the feedback.

 

[xXGojiraXc]

Why does that tag have family if you move away from them??

 

[FatGiant]

Not offended. This is your opinion, and very well explained. You said what you liked and didn't like, while explaining why. That's the input I appreciate because of the reasoning. The only point I will address, since I don't think it spoils anything is the mansplaining as you mentioned, which I don't see it that way but respect that you do. That was always a one time thing I wrote after the first release since people kept asking me to rethink that one tag. It wont be a topic that will be brought up again. So no need to worry about that. The rest of your concerns have been planned out to develope as the story progresses. There is a road map that I have which I have placed all major events in their corresponding in game date, which I believe will address the necessary information at the appropriate time within what is happening in the story. I hope that clears up your concerns. And thank you for the feedback.

Glad to know.

But, it is a pity. I really wanted to give a 5/5. The proselytizing killed it. I was already aware that there wouldn't be2 of the types of content I enjoy the most. I went in knowing it. Was able to enjoy the story and the interactions. Even if,in the back of my mind, there was a little voice saying things... but.. I was OK.

Then you went and HAD to rub my face on the proverbial shit... then suddenly, I was no longer OK. I felt mocked. You wanted to FLEX your power. You did. Good for you.

Peace

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

The premise sounds weird and the hoops you need to jump through just to get to the porn in this porn game sounds unnecessary complicated, but the screen shots do seem to promise a male MC that is actually taller than the females and who has a basically masculine body (as opposed to a basically pre-teen body sized up to women size) and that in itself makes me willing to try this game. Hope the dev keeps the sexual dimorphism (the technical term for sex difference in physical size, something that is indeed present among humans) through out the game.

Thank you for the insights. If I understood your comment about mc's size vs the girls, fear not, it will continue like is. Variety is the spice of life. Mc is 6'3" and the shortest girls at the moment is 5'3" (Mia and April). I have plans for 1 shorter girl (around 5'), but only if I can make her look like a short woman and not the other thing.

The only thing I'm confused about in your comment is the hoops commentary. Could you elaborate? As is, it's just do you want to or not.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Why does that tag have family if you move away from them??

What tag?

 

[SpyderArachnid]

What tag?

I believe they mean the incest tag.

Why does that tag have family if you move away from them??

It is there because at the beginning, you get to rename some relationships. Aunt and cousin, if you so choose, and the dialogue seems to naturally support it if you use those terms. And there is content already involving them in game now, thus the tag.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Tags are often wrong on F95 or not always up to date I only use them to weed out things I hate like NTR & Futa/Trans

Ex Sandbox is so often mistakenly put down on games with some basic free roam scenarios for example

Spoiler: better safe than sorry lol

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[Bahamut Zero]

First of all thank you for the game. I'll start downloading it. So as soon as I have free time, I'll try this too. But...
Sorry guys, I'm feeling a little ignorant right now. Maybe it's because I'm not a native English speaker. But what do you mean by NSFW mode content (mature content)? I also read the Developer Notes. But I didn't quite understand. What's the point of activating this code? Something related to incest? Because in that case, I'm happy to activate the code

Regarding the relationship thing. What's the best way to enter it? Just "aunt"? Or, for example, "Aunt Diana" (the name was chosen only as an example). Because I read two users referring to this. Where one said, I wrote "aunt." And it was funny to just read "hi, aunt." Because he explained that generally when greeting someone, you use "aunt" and then her name. So another user thought of using "aunt" and "name." But in that case, I wonder... isn't there a risk that everyone in the game will end up using "aunt" and "name" together? Even people who should only use their first name? For example, the MC's mother won't say "Aunt," but will call her by her first name. Since they're sisters.
So can someone give me some advice on this?

Thank you

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Dev loves to break the fourth wall and insult and judge the players for picking choices they put into the game. If you don't want them to choose it, then don't put it in the game. All that did was give you a reason to insult the players and judge them for making a choice you created. Fourth wall breaking is always shit in visual novels, and this dev uses it to throw insults at the player.


What happened to the MC after the first update? He was big and buff, and now he is just tall and skinny. In the beginning of the game, he was strong looking. Now he has been changed to a lanky guy. Don't get why that change was necessary. Now he just looks weird.

The first time (1st release) I saw this comment I was like, Ok people don't understand or want some humor in these type of games, but I made that for 1 person and that person loved it, hence why it's still there. As to any other instance please explain. The only other instance in which people might have had issues with was the first choice with Mel, which was removed because someone gave me an actual reason when bringing something unrelated up and it was very compelling. I am not in it to ridicule or belittle anyone. If there is any other example, beside the choice to help, please let me know because that might be a coding error on my part.

What happened to mc? Nothing. I haven't touched his design. I was even going to shave him, but opted out of that idea since people liked him so much. He may look different in some shot, but I can assure you he has not been changed.

Hope that clears these 2 point. I respect the fact that this game may not be for everybody. I understand and accept that. But I will always take the time to have a conversation with anyone who believes they are being insulted for shits and giggles. That is not the case. Everybody has the right to their opinion and to not like a certain things, but I also have to defend the project, because people might get the wrong idea if I just sit by and not weigh in. I've seen it before.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

The first time (1st release) I saw this comment I was like, Ok people don't understand or want some humor in these type of games, but I made that for 1 person and that person loved it, hence why it's still there. As to any other instance please explain. The only other instance in which people might have had issues with was the first choice with Mel, which was removed because someone gave me an actual reason when bringing something unrelated up and it was very compelling. I am not in it to ridicule or belittle anyone. If there is any other example, beside the choice to help, please let me know because that might be a coding error on my part.

What happened to mc? Nothing. I haven't touched his design. I was even going to shave him, but opted out of that idea since people liked him so much. He may look different in some shot, but I can assure you he has not been changed.

Hope that clears these 2 point. I respect the fact that this game may not be for everybody. I understand and accept that. But I will always take the time to have a conversation with anyone who believes they are being insulted for shits and giggles. That is not the case. Everybody has the right to their opinion and to not like a certain things, but I also have to defend the project, because people might get the wrong idea if I just sit by and not weigh in. I've seen it before.

Wanted to give some screenshots so you could see what I was talking about when it came to the MC physique.

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[chenghis]

dam we ain't even out of the prologue and we are already having meta arguments with the players over kink/fetishes in game

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Wanted to give some screenshots so you could see what I was talking about when it came to the MC physique.

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Sorry. I meant about the actions towards the player. The mc thing might be the angle of the shot. I honestly have not altered mc. But after the first time someone brought it up, can't recall who right now,

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I can see what you mean, but nothing about his model actually changed.

 

[BTLD]

It is even worse than you think.

After said Group Sex, the girls and the MC have a conversation where the Dev takes the opportunity to "mansplain" why no Lesbian tag... Because... he HAD to FLEX, or something. Just not making the content wasn't enough, he had to make sure that anyone that would enjoy said content felt antagonized, mocked and insulted. A really classy act. (NOT)

Peace

maybe you need to play another VN
this VN doesn't seem to be for you
Silent_J_Dev I'm glad to hear there will be no lesbian scenes. keep up the good work