This one lost me. I have no idea how far I'm into this one, but I didn't finish it and don't plan on continuing to see if it gets better. Based on the gallery, I'm about half way.
Why give choices if they don't matter and story just ignores them? Just make it a kinetic novel and do whatever the hell you want. The story would at least then make more sense.
I actually did read the articles in Playboy, and expect a little more sensible, consistent stories from my adult visual/erotic novels...
This one certainly isn't the worst I've seen (I generally don't waste time to rate something that I think is just awful or pure trash). But when a story gives me, the reader, a choice, then ignores that choice, and does shit any way that I previously said no to, no thanks. And I think there's enough folks like me around who need to know about these things and don't get sucked in by high ratings.
Admittedly, NTR isn't my "thing", but I don't mind it when it's done in the right context. When the supposedly "loving/respectful" wife pulls the rug out from under your feet (because your choices don't really mean squat), this ain't it.
I get it, it's porn and NTR pervs wanna fap to their fantasy. And for those that want just that, ignore my rating and get your fap on, you've found your game...lol
This one isn't terrible overall, so I gave 2* instead of 1. The old man "schtick" really isn't my thing, but I try to not let kinks or content I don't particularly enjoy impact overall rating. If it had just stayed a kinetic novel, probably would have given it 3*, depending on how the rest of story went. Nothing really special about this one that can't be found in better stories.
And I swear, some of these "perfect" titles really have no idea and need to stop watching so much cuck porn...