VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Perseverance [v0.7] [XPECTED]

One of the worst games I played - except for the graphics.

THis is not due to the story (there is at least an excuse of a story) but for the writing in the sex scenes.
I really like a good story, but I can accept it if there is a mediocre story. But at least the sex scenes should also have a mediocre writing. But this game has one of the worst dialogues in sex games and porn movies. Words are misplaced: "Your boyfriends TICKET is much smaller than mine!" as if they were lost in translation. The female MC is portraied not as the brightes one and quite submissive, but the males? They get agressive over nothing, say various unrelated things.

The whole writing feels as if someone who has no idea of NTR wants to tell an NTR-story. It is like "Ok, I need someone to fuck this girl other than her boyfriend! Pick a random guy, and make him fuck her in an angry way. But she should love it physically, but trying not to like it psycologically. Thats it, there is nothing more to add!"

The comical style of the males in this story adds to this impression.

This is one of the few games I really try to skip the dialogue at all - but what remains? A beatiful MC and some mediocre sex scenes with comic-men.

As someone said before: Better watch Gonzo-porn, the rendering quality is much better there .

The renders are top notch 5/5

The story is awful. 1/5

If you want to see a bunch of old men gangbanging a hot blonde, then this game is for you. If you care about a decent story line of any sort then don't bother.

The blonde is hot and the sex scenes are hot not animated but hot. But that's it. No real story also no build up to the NTR and she not once felt bad about it. Plus the dialog sucks. If you just want to fap get the compressed version it's much smaller. But if you looking for something to read with your fap then pass this one by. English is awful in this one.

INSANE CGs. Like one of the best i've seen here. But low content and its pretty much a kinetic novel where you dont have a choice. Instead of making every CG pretty much perfect, game could be lengthened and such but, its a choice of development i guess.

So far, not so much to play, but you wouldnt lose much

The CGI art is pretty good; it has good textures, etc... but the models are kinda all bimbo-looking; tiny with oversized tits and extra slutty looking all the time. Which is kinda breaks immersion for me. The writing sucks.

If the same art was paired with better writing it's be okay.

Alas, not the case.

What a waste of talent.

The Reders are really very good, but the story and dialogue are so incredibly ridiculous that it almost physically hurts.

It's just a string of sex scenes that admittedly look good, but are otherwise complete nonsense. The protagonist is pretty and apparently the dev has quite a respectable collection of assets that haven't been used all the time.

With a writer, an english proof reader and a few renders to really tell a story it would easily be four+ stars and worth some donations.

UNEXPECTED has a really mysterious story and I think it will be very good in the future when the narrative develops. A game like this from the makers of this game is really a surprise. PERSEVERANCE is a thoroughly entertaining game with a simple story that will satisfy many. There are many old people in the game, but I'm not bothered by it. And it's also present in younger characters. To summarize, it is a simple game that focuses directly on erotic scenes with short updates. But it's fun! I love it. (More updates!)

Story: 4/5
Spelling: 3/5
Renders: 5/5
Potential: 5/5
Gameplay 5/5
Animations: 0/5 (There is currently no animation. (The developer has stated that he will add it later.))

Version 0.6

This game is really pretty looking the artwork the sex scenes the female protagonist of the first chapter is pretty good looking and the enviroment changes make the story less boring. The update schedule for this game are frequent and i love the fact that the developer with each update changes MC clothes and hairstyle the only thing this game is lacking are the animations because each picture are high quality cant wait to see more routes for other characters also , it has not a strong story but its sex scenes make up for it

this got to be one of the best renderers and MC in here.
if you are looking a story that can turn you on, this is one of the best.
a lot of potential can be, keep it up and keep it light.
all the best

I liked this Story, even though not much to it. The drunk scene is a bit too unbelievable, but just go with it. Good renders, pretty female protagonist. Dirty old men groping her nice little ass. My personal fetish is where old and ugly guys, by devious methods get the pretty girl. I would have like to see more of the ugly old bastards forcing her to kiss them, (another of my fetishes) but I guess you can't have everything you want. The NTR is the category where the hubby that is Cucked doesnt know, and is not the one to arrange it. Thats the best NTR. Any other type of NTR is just sickening. Then there is the finale A good finish in my books. This first story is worth watching if you have similar likes to me. I can't wait for the next stories.

Story it self is just mish mash .. I mean.. what was that hotel scene?
Art it good but there is lack of animations.
It feels little too bright in some scenes.
FMC was.. too easy going.
Also there was that scene in street after bar.. welp.. who can be so drunk to not remember her BF and yet still could walk and talk like nohing has happened?

i will give it 3 stars cause personally:

pros:
+ really nice renders
+ nice different sex positions
+ straight to the point without too much built up
+ pretty faced fem characters
+ good light
+ good english
+ old/young kink

cons:
- girl has curves but way too few especially hips and tits wise there should be more (i pref girls with more curves (like lily or anna) or at least like jessica from john, bella from bella's first sin or jane from downfall)
- personally not a fan of too big tattoos :/
- soundtrack is... well sorry but a bit annoying for me personally

conclusion: if there will be similar depraved kink stories with old guys but a girl with more curves and less (no) tattoos i will give it 5 stars for sure (after a few times i muted the soundtrack (sorry) so therefore thats no big deal)

0.4
Renders look good, textures look decent, with maybe a little too much sharpening, but overall renders are pleasant to watch. But:

Story is a mindless unavoidable, and constant fuckfest.
A big number of the males are disgusting.
Every male, young and old, has the same redish young looking dick.
The sinopsis is bullshit, cause makes questions that only have 1 answer, since the game doesn't have any choice.
Sex scenes are average.
As usual holes are misplaced.
I dont mind not having animations if the scenes are well shot.
Real Porn has more fps, more render quality and better stories.
Characters are not even unidimensional.
There is not story or plot. Plot is: The wife hadn't had sex for a while and she is horny. The end

It is that bad. If you are looking for mindless sex, dont download this 1.5GB game, just download a 1,5GB porn vid of your favourite theme, or play another game.

Warning:
Those 5 star ratings are 100% dishonest, characters are not unique at all.

Critique - v0.3

The only things that is good about this game is the renders, the female MC is hawt.

Everything else is crap, plot is baaad, English is understandable but not great.

There are no choices, kinetic novel.

No animations, no sound.

That is all.

So if you are just looking for some fapping material... come on in... the water is great! But, if you are looking for a story with characters you can get behind, then nothing to see here.

The renders are good and the fapping scenes are solid and there is clearly some decent humor, but let's be honest with each other here... there is zero story here. You can't even call it a corruption game either as the MC starts the game as a slut. She has nowhere to go from there.

The dev is clearly talented and if you are looking for something fast and humorous, give it a try. Just don't expect much of a story.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Good Script
+ had a nice Plot
+ Makes you want to play for hours
+ Different looking Characters
+ Fast Pace in the Game (No Bullshit)
+ Unique looking Charaters
+ Nice animation
+ Good Closeups
Cons:
- None

Conclusion:
Loved the Scenes and everything surrounding it, at one side dark and eerie, then there is light and hot Sex, great Ingredients for a good Story, the characters are fresh and Unique, far from the standard characters which all look alike one way or the other.
Doesn't get into my head that People give out one star ratings because the renders are different then the standard ones,for me I loved them and I`m eager to see more from this Dev.
Overall a great Game with every bit worth the download.
Still 5 stars in my book.

Well, I'm gona focus on this being a demo:

It's too small and with almost no story behind it. I got that the girl is horny and there's a SOMEWHAT comical scene.
Although it's small, you didn't bother to spellcheck the entire 5 minutes of it's duration. English Bad.

As a demonstration of a new game, in my book, it failed miserably.

I'll throw you a 1 star bone because I'll follow it and will update this if needed.

Thank you and the best of luck.

Version: Demo.

P.S. As pf v0.2 english got better and the "story" got even worse. Yeah, I know, how could it be worse?! Stopped following and downgraded.

+Excellent graphics
+Excellent models
+Hot and horny af mc
+UI

-Short af
-Dont like the idea of having seperate short stories, personally i want to attach to a character just like in other hotwife games. Wish dev abandons this idea as soon as possible, tho at least we have female main characters it seems, so thats a bonus for me.